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A Soldier's Life - 115 - Pig Roast

🕑 Added 2023-12-14 04:44:41 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

I dont see he leaving the company. The next arc after the summoner though is the exploration of the Elven Ruins of Caelora for the dungeon. And if you remember the reason his collector is so valuable it always yields an essence when used on a dungeon creature

Silver Beard

If you stick with what you have... I'm better off dropping you for 2-5 years until his conscription is over b/c that only when he will truly be free to do whatever. Just saying- that the story is going nowhere in a hurry. And the chances of real growth are becoming improbable.

Silver Beard

Maybe you should change the story to Conscript... and let the story work out whether he becomes a volunteer or mercenary, or whatever. Solider is a willing part of something, while Conscript is forced into something. To date- this in not the army he would have chosen... he serves, but he could quit anytime. IDK... just seems like a failed start to finish. Any real growth will be individual which doesn't fit the solider life style at all.


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