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A Soldier's Life - 111 -

🕑 Added 2024-01-03 18:59:13 +0000 UTC

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Didde

Tftc Edit suggestion: Last chapter Eryk yells to Maveith to get the potion which i assume are at the tower, then minutes later Castile says she will wait for the potions and healer, everyone leaves and it says Eryk is walking with Maveith back to the tower. I think Maveith should come running with the earthshaking steps when they are in the room around Konstantin.

PatronTurtle

When you're in a position you can't really control, and things are high risk, long term is pretty difficult to plan for. To me, he seems like he's slowly building up enough resources and power to escape on his own

Lemes

I have some considerations regarding MC. He seems to me like a person who doesn't plan in the long term and only reacts to situations. There are situations that illustrate this well: his reaction to the discovery of the locket by Lauren, he acted in a strange and thoughtless way. The way he acted, he practically made her an enemy. He should have kept her close and tried to find out as much as possible about the locket and her intentions (keep your friends close, and your enemies closer!). The other situation is that he doesn't seem to have an escape plan! Castile has already hinted that she wants to work with him, but he keeps going around and can't make up his mind. It doesn't seem normal to me for someone in his position not to plan to escape, even if they are contingency plans.

Erick Thiemke

the world has no gunpowder. it is too unstable with the magical aether.

Ha dug

If I was Eryk I’d ask the alchemist if he knows how to make flash powder and see if the local blacksmith can help out with making a flintlock type rifle. After all could be a great side hustle if it eventually works out and raking out mages from range is always a good thing lol


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