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A Soldier's Life - 159 - About What I Expected

🕑 Added 2024-03-11 20:10:51 +0000 UTC

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robert devoe

hree times with the straight edge razed, but it ,,,,,,,,,,,,, razor

Karnnie

Maveith joined me, grabbed the spider’s legs on her, and started tearing off her legs with his bare hands. Maveith joined me, grabbed the spider’s legs on her, and started tearing off its legs with his bare hands.

jean

to be fair the only 2 times he has met the elf it was as enemies ready to kill each other and she hasn't really shown any indication she is worth trusting by her actions or words so of course he wouldn't trust her... her first thought was to say hey goliath that might be his friend kill that guy and both times they have met it was her attacking and invading the empire so no she doesn't get to act as if she it right she wa the invader both times....... :P

Tillman Holloway

Much rather him have a relationship with Castile

Alex Galaitsis

What a tsundere! 🤣 I’m seriously enjoying the dynamic and I hope it’s fun to write how their relationship evolves.

Eriach

Half-Elf/Human babies in the future lol

Erick Thiemke

he was just showing the elf that he had her blade. his attitude toward the elf was shaped by readers comments. you all did not want him to trust her immediately so it has to be a build. I am thinking of Jon Snow/Ygritte slow building in trust

Lemes

Erick can be a bit of an asshole sometimes. While poor Maveith tried to calm the elf, the idiot teased her. But I like it a bit, it makes the MC's personality seem more believable.

Silver Beard

Time to explain what is waiting outside even if she manages to make it to the exit. Maybe that will calm her down. She'll be an attentive listener at least for a little while.

Eriach

I found like two errors, but I'm driving so can't show where

Erick Thiemke

The legs gave them added size. The bodies were the size of cats

Silver Beard

The spiders were as big as dogs, but their bodies were the size of cat... this might need some work. fast as cats?

Erick Thiemke

ok bonus 5th chapter posted. how is it? onto next chapter for World Sphere


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