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A Soldier's Life - 160 -

🕑 Added 2024-03-13 18:45:32 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

his displacement in currently 80, where did you see it at 61?

Theo Tomss

Hello I was rereading the books when I noticed that despite having those displacement essence in his possession you never mentioned It after that it seems and his displacement affinity never augmented it’s still at 61 later in the story (I’m at chapter 303) is it a mistake on my part and I missed something or not ?

Unwired Rob

I had a hard time going up being so pale,” -> growing up

Moatdog

He never slaughtered her kind nor did he kill her master. He did kidnap her twice but the drake was the real one who beat the crap out of her. He also killed the guy she was supposed to keep alive but it wasn't like they were close yet. He's killed her fellow elves but she's probably killed humans, it's war. Also it becomes harder to dehumanize him when she actually talks to him, vice versa. And really all she experienced was a loss of time which is terrifying in abstract but can separate from regular kidnapping.

Erick Thiemke

They get moved from there to book 3 every week. I will rename seraphim to include book 3 in the title

Erick Thiemke

Find the chapters in the collection titled Seraphim

Jake Sori

Seraphim subscriber: book 3 ends at chapter 160 and book 4 begins at chapter 182, i double checked, and chapter 177 does not exist at all. This desperately needs to be reorganized

sirphilips

He slaughtered her kind killed her master and kidnaped her twice as well as beat her half to death. I'd be more surprised if she didn't want to rat him out

jordicl

Nahh, remember, she has nothing to win in giving him to the praetorian guard or the emperor. In fact, him being an otherworlder and the certainty of death if the emperor finds him can actually play in his favor and make him a lot more trustworthy if she decides to bring him with her to her house Glavien after the dungeon. And with the amount of time they will spend together and how well educated she seems to be, it's only a matter of time until she connects the dots pointing towards his origin.

sirphilips

He should 100% kill that elf I know its already decided but I hope he kills the elf she knows far too much

Erick Thiemke

Seraphim Chapter has the rest of book 3 and book 4 collection has 24+ chapters

Erick Thiemke

are you a seraphim subscriber?

Erick Thiemke

book 4 collecton

Dynasty

Where can I find chapter 161?

jean

maveith having the priorities straight the nameless swamp is a name you dumb elf XD

J S

Ha!

Will

🫵👍

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, the displacement essence is a great find, if he can farm that room a few more times he can imprint himself a spell that takes him very far.

Otto Kovar

They also have all the time in the world they can scavenge for days, weeks, month, years for any supply they might want, and eat and drink their fill, nothing presses this group of people, yes eventually the dungeon resources will reduce as each iteration wil spawn smaller and less deadly enemies until the dungeon says 'no more farming', but even that seems a long time of

Otto Kovar

At the end of the chapter they established a sort of cease fire, but you seem to ignore that that woman was stashed away like a commodity, she has proper hate for the telhian empire and multiple times tried to kill him, and he her. Maveith does not know her and had no encounters with her and is not a soldier of her target of hate. WHO would give their enemy a weapon even if they were enemies only briefly. Also from all she knows Eryk killed at least one if not many more of her friends or family. She has every reason to kill him, and Eryk has more then enough justification to not put a weapon into her hands, especially if she has the ability to cast some magic that is just as or even more devastating than any sword or dagger.

Silver Beard

I don't see how they have a lot of 'time' to build the kind of trust Eryk thinks he needs to re-arm her unless he's planning to keep stashing her away only to bring her out after each fight.

Silver Beard

She was brought out to join the team not be bait; he's going to have to give her a weapon at some point. He's mentioned her fireballs a couple times already so I'm not sure why he's withholding her legacy blade. He's got his air shields, his space, and healing plus he's carrying the Aether potions. Pretty sure he's got the upper hand.

Otto Kovar

There is bad blood between the two, but it seems the right opportunity for developing some friendship, I agree with some that he seems a bit aggressive but i can say he is within character, he always had a distrustful disposition towards others, just this time he also can and needs to act it out, there is merit to playing the bad cop, making sure the enemy that tried to kill you is aware that the jailer can and will jail her if she acts out of line. I like it, though some will think he is out of line because he never acted that hostile, well this is the first time he could and should act that way, in a dungeob towards someone he is not sure is actually of any help, she is proving some knowledge and expertise these two will need

Lemes

Yes, I just tried to make a joke. I have to learn where the emojis are here. Or more likely the joke was just really bad.

Lemes

Maybe it's a culture shock problem. As I am Brazilian, sometimes I have difficulty finding the best word to express myself. Let's try again. It seemed to me that Erick was acting like a teenager who doesn't know how to deal with an attractive woman, and that's why he's hostile and being an asshole to the girl.

Erick Thiemke

just reread it. the only thing I felt was out of character was when he broke the news of the dead summoner Vaeril - that was kind of mean. other than that I didn't feel he was mean. Raelia should have come off as slightly antagonistic

Erick Thiemke

the dungeon names came from the random name generator.

Erick Thiemke

is he antagonizing her though? i will read it again. maybe he is just bad a flirting

Lemes

If the name is nameless swamp then it has a name! But seriously, Erick is an asshole. Antagonizing the elf like that is not smart. He must know that he needs her almost as much as he needs him. The smart thing would be to try to create some trust and camaraderie.

Blorcyn

Yeah reads well. She is accepting things well, but of course it means nothing — if you’re in a situation where someone wants your aid, giving it doesn’t mean you won’t kill then and escape if it allows the opportunity, and Eryk should realise this. What would he do if their positions were reversed?

Eriach

Very nice, additional back story added into the world. ❤️

Erick Thiemke

ok seraphim readers. first chapter of the elf / MC earning trust. let me know how it reads and anything I can add to make it better. first of 4 chapters this week cycle, next is tomorrow as I have to get an Incubus chapter done next


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