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A Soldier's Life - 153 -

🕑 Added 2024-03-03 03:47:24 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Sure but it's still farmable. At this point he has nothing to lose by doing it.

PatronTurtle

There seems to be limite on how fast a room restores. The instant refill is probably from the dungeon being unused for so long

Fortunis

Ok. If that bear room gives a healing potion every time I'd absolutely farm it for a couple days to have spares.

Fortunis

Not necessarily. She hates the Empire. She doesn't know he's not from their world. He's also refused to kill her twice now. That's gotta count for somthing.

anthony corrado

Personally, I'm hoping for kinky elf sex.

Lite Fractal

Sorry, Karnnie, I don't agree. I think it is very a interesting plot point with a lot of potential. If I had to bet, I would expect that Eryk will have to flee to the elves once he flees the empire. This is how that door gets opened. And the reason they are hostile is because their countries are hostile. I don't think that if they had met in other circumstances they would have hated each other. So, it should take work, but be possible. Survival is a VERY strong motivator. I have not addressed some good points you brought up, but just wanted so put some opposing arguments. I'll also add that I have lived in multiple countries and am aware of how ingrained cultural biases can be. Again, I point to survival being a VERY strong motivator. I wonder how Eryk and Goliath are going to 'convince' her.

Karnnie

I have to say that while I love this story, the subject of the elf woman is the most unbelievable thing that has happened in this world that you have created. No one is going to revive an enemy and convince them to help and/or befriend them. An enemy that has been bested and humiliated multiple times, that HATES humans and anyone in the empire. IF they revive her and she does not try to stab them in the back AT EVERY TURN, I will probably end up losing interest in this story as that will be a point in which I can no longer believe this story. I was a soldier for many years and I spent time overseas, I understand turning an enemy but she is not wavering with the right and wrong of who or what her enemy is, she is a dedicated soldier and I just do not see her being turned and willing to help, it would be more believable that she fights them as soon as she is able until they are forced to kill her or that she agrees only to stab them in the back at the very first chance she has.

BlaueFeder

Maybe not her, but an elf is certainly the best option as a partner for him, now that he will live for many centuries.

Leonard Rosebrink

What! I tought the author killed of the elf girl their relationship does not seem realistic Erik should just get her essence

Abdul Shaikh

^

M Schweibold

Just curious where is ch 154 on?

John DeWarr

I am glad I am not the only one thinking, healing her is a really bad idea. Get the info out of her and keep her in storage until you need a distraction.

Dash Marley

Yes, I just checked it on a different chrome profile, and on the app, in each the whole chapter text for the most recent two chapters added to the collection are in italics, the previous ones are not. https://www.patreon.com/posts/99632045.

Erick Thiemke

the text is? I don't see it as italics on my screen

Dash Marley

This too is in italics for me, just a flag.

Daniel Staub

Not using the collector on the bear?

Erick Thiemke

. I probably should have prepared him better for this and taken this final step in trusting the goliath earlier. “You know how you thought that I had powerful void magic. Well, I don’t have any void magic. I am able to remove part of the creature by placing it in my dimensional space.”

Erick Thiemke

thanks - corrected on the master

Rocky Tkacz

You know how you that I had powerful void magic. Well, I don’t have any void magic.

Rocky Tkacz

Typo

Blorcyn

Cool, thanks.

Erick Thiemke

it would increase if the convergence affinity was increased as well but he is already on the path of diminishing returns on most essences

Blorcyn

Thanks for clarifying. Obviously that's still miles better than most people consuming essences Eryk's gonna meet. Is this something that would be improved by increasing convergence infinity on the multiplicative scale that's been discussed before. So, from 256 to 512 at the top end, if he eats convergence essences? Such a big multiplication would have a big effect on essence variability by affinity (high 90s are still very hard for all, lower than 20s possibly even easier)/or a flat effect on all essences +2/+2? Or is it something that won't be relevant ultimately to the story? Sorry, if spoilers. Obviously, happy to wait and see if it's not something established yet.

Erick Thiemke

apex essences had been giving him +3/+3 but after a few it will drop to +2/+1 and then fall off quicker. It is still a little arbitrary as there are different grades/densities of the apex essences which I think was only discussed once - maybe not even in the story, i don't remember

1536539

You are exactly correct, according to our current understanding of the natural world, momentum and in fact all forces and phenomena cannot exist if time equals zero.

1536539

Yeah me too, this story is great, it’s currently my favorite story

Erick Thiemke

Good POV

Erick Thiemke

It was mentioned he got a bonus for unlocking the earth essence. Normally I person unlocks an affinity always at one. It was a way to jump start magic affinities for the author

Blorcyn

Random unrelated question. I was just thinking. Eryk got 6 from the apex earth essence, right? I think that’s more than usual, though we’ve few examples for actual affinity bonuses if they’re different to the standard three columns. But, we know that as you get closer to 100, even with convergence essence spell form, it gets harder to raise an affinity. Does it invert for opening affinities? A minor air essence is I guess normally going to give maybe plus 1 or 2 at most? Under 10, do you get more for your essences, in the way you get less for being near 100? I’m trying to figure if the opening an affinity consumed a lot of the apex essence, or whether it was all a big bonus for being 0. If he opens with the minor then had the apex, could we be looking at ten in air?

Roberto Dias

From Erick POV... She is in deep debt He saved the elf-girl's life. Twice. 1 in Macha he rescued her from behind enemy lines. The fall from the griffin was her falt, she got the too close to a tower full of archers. The burns were self inflicted, was her fireball. 2 in Sobral, from drake bites. Both times she was in the offensive side. 1 in a siege. 2 in guerrilla attacks against civilians (climate/monsters) Both times she was pridefull and hostile. Both times he asked for surrender. She owes 2 rescues

Erick Thiemke

i thought it was Silver beard that asked if air disc shield should be part of the Air Affinity and not Protection. I think I said it was in both Spheres of Magic and if he learned it in both Protection and Air they would reinforce each other. but i have no idea where that stream of comments is located

BubblyGhost

Time and space stationary

Silver Beard

@Bubbly ????

Silver Beard

That'll be a nice incentive for the elf maiden. Nice planning Author.

Erick Thiemke

he gets it at the start of chapter 154 - major fire affinity essence

Silver Beard

the supposed 'strong air shield' wouldn't be any stronger, but it would be mobile, flexible after placement; assuming he could get two abilities to synergize.

Silver Beard

That wasn't me. I know I'm likely the top commentor; but there are others with good ideas and impressions.

Silver Beard

He didn't harvest the bear's essence! Getting a little too cavalier! Collector should be coming out the second it's dead... not 'whenever'

Reid

I can see the mutual survival pact play out for like 2 days until they get to the easier parts of the dungeon and then they just wouldn't need her. The conscript otherworld angle doesn't have much to offer considering that she probably HATES him specifically and hate is pretty blind when you love your country and the person in question killed your countrymen. I can't think of any reason besides the opportunity to betray him as a selling point for any pact or agreement because she obviously loves her country more than her own life given the fact that she almost died twice for it unflinchingly. She gains too much and Eryk gains too little from her being alive for an extended period of time.

Erick Thiemke

yeah the believability is a hard sell. i am thinking on a mutual survival pact with the goliath serving as the honorable intermediary. what about the angle he is a conscript and otherworlder? think that would play out in the process of befriending? i don't think love interest is in the cards. i thought about a Ygritte angle (you know nothing Jon Snow) but still not sure how it will play out. that is why I have you all as Alpha readers for the plot

Reid

My suspense for disbelief is nearing a breaking point with the elf chic. The MC is literally about to bring out an heal an enemy insurgent who has multiple grievances with him. Grievances that may include helping to destroy a city that may have lead to the deaths of her friends and maybe some distant relatives, killing her griffin, kidnapping her and having her shoot a spell at friendly forces, killing the mage who she was charged to protect, and aiding in the grievous bodily harm she currently endures while being kidnapped for a second time. From what I'm tracking this female is pretty hard-core for her people and hates their enemies which would include our boy. She should absolutely hate him and under any circumstances should try to betray and kill him. That shit just doesn't go away with a couple days in a dungeon and a full heal. She should be the furthest thing from an ally in the MC's mind for these reasons even if he doesn't hold any animosity towards her. If this doesn't end with her death or Eryk's treason to the Empire and her betraying him anyway than the only reason why she's even there is to be a very forced love interest, cause I know if it was a he and not a she this conversation wouldn't be happening.

Erick Thiemke

kinetic energy has velocity in the equation and velocity has delta t in its equation so it could zero everything out. for the simplicity of writing, i am going to say momentum/kinetic energy is completely lost

Da Worst John

I think for the equation you're thinking of, the force would be exerted all at once instead of over a period. It could be like how Blorcyn mentioned and magic is a true disruptor to known physics that just throws all formulas out the window. It could also be magic is just another type of energy which has a higher energy equivalent, that using mana is basically doing nuclear creation already and to throw in the kinetic energy of a moving object is just a drop in the bucket.

Erick Thiemke

I dont know but if force equations have a time factor in them and time = 0 in the dimensional space then wouldn't all kinetic energy equations equal zero? been a while since i took physics

Blorcyn

If we have an example of it not being conserved then the law doesn’t apply, right? Firstly. Just because it doesn’t happen for us doesn’t mean it doesn’t here. The other thing is that we know very little about inside the space, if it is preserved. It doesn’t preserve time. Does it exist beyond his boundary and his boundary is what his mana and affinity decides? Do all spaces share a universe, arbitrarily far apart? Eryk doesn’t seem the man to look for these answer but he might stumble upon them with mages or the Adventurer’s more academic guild members. I’d be curious to see what theory underpins what they do, but it’s a lot to ask of an author and then might open them up to criticism of exploits here and there.

Da Worst John

So does the energy go anywhere? Even though there's magic in this world, I imagine the law of conservation of momentum still applies. Does the MC have to counteract the kinetic energy with more mana?

Erick Thiemke

I think that is the plan. Stash her away if possible before they find the company. He just thinks they are too far away from anyone else right now.

Erick Thiemke

No it is not. Kinetic energy is not preserved. Otherwise heads of charging bears would be flying everywhere when the MC took the, out

Da Worst John

Question about the dimensional space, is momentum preserved? I.E. if Eryk place an arrow flying at him can he pull it out for it just to go flying?

Mortamir

Highest I paid for Patreon sub because of A Soldiers Life. It's awesome

Roberto Dias

Ok Maevith will smooth-talk the elf-girl. But.. Castile?? He will show his new girl friend? Or he will re-stash/smuggle away?

Blorcyn

I keep forgetting his air shield isn’t from air. Also, even though the respawns don’t create Apex essences they’re still dope. A renewable stock of major essences is a treasure anyone in the Empire would give their left nut for. Unless? If he keeps killing the bear again and again will it eventually stop respawning? Dungeon will stop it?

BubblyGhost

Air Shield evolves into *Strong Air Shield*!

Erick Thiemke

Healing would probably be faster healing, air shield would increase the duration and strength. Silver beard had an interesting thought of learning the air shield again under the air affinity , supercharging it by using two affinities to cast it

Silver Beard

Know it's a distraction from his kill method; but still good info to have. Needs constant practice with blades, etc. to raise his useful attributes

BubblyGhost

Ooooo, I was thinking it was static at the time of adding it to the core, neato. So for say his air shields/healing would that be an efficiency increase or some such?

Silver Beard

Thanks for sharing.

Erick Thiemke

Yes the spell form gets stronger ….space affinity essence would increase his dimensional space for instance

BubblyGhost

So, after Eryk has inscribed one the the spell forms to his core, there's no real reason to increase said corresponding magical affinity any higher anymore is there?

Erick Thiemke

damn nice catch! will edit. I just didnt want to be posting so many tables.

1536539

How did Mavieth understand the language on the reader to know he recovered his attributes? Did Eryk teach him how to read the numbers?

Erick Thiemke

yeah - i wanted to get impressions on the forthcoming return of the griffon rider and if it made sense. but I have to finish a chapter on World Sphere now!!!

1536539

Yay two chapters in a row!!!!


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