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🕑 Added 2024-03-04 04:17:52 +0000 UTC

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Ivan Kanewske

“Maerlyn was never going to join Dungeon Heart, Strome.” Strome to storm

GucciG

Didn’t Duskhunters contract with Storme because his dungeon was perfect for their trainees? Doesn’t making it more difficult cross some kind of rule or defeat the purpose?

Ivan Kanewske

Gareth was clearly upset with Aelyn for poaching the Maerlyn. Remove the i believe The Maerlyn to simply Poaching Maerlyn

anthony corrado

Gareth needs to get beat repeatedly. Having a few limbs chopped off for a year or two maybe.

john parkes

unstable, uncertain, and sometimes funny are my thoughts on relationships in the real world, maybe fictional too.

zachary fuller

I liked how he stood up for Garth that's how it should be there supposed to be brothers who help each other.

BlaueFeder

yeah, but no cheating.

uncertain

I just hope the road won't be too rocky. I'd prefer minimal drama, no separations, and no suspicions of (nor actual) cheating. All of that of course said with the understanding that it's your story and you can do what you want with it.

Noah Roberts

I am down to watch this pair grow for the long haul :)

Erick Thiemke

trying to work on establishing Aelyn/Storme relationship. I am not the best at writing relationship dynamics


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