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A Soldier's Life - 167 - Reconciliation

🕑 Added 2024-03-23 01:39:25 +0000 UTC

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Oldfaithful

Pretty sure it's public domain after Wotc failed in court to copyright it in 2011. J.R Mathews used the term Underdark in his "Portal to Nova Roma" series and it wasn't copyrighted. But using your version gets the point across all the same.

Karnnie

Awesome!

Erick Thiemke

yes same idea and didnt want to infringe on copywrights

Karnnie

The endless dark, is this like the underdark in DnD? or is it a labyrinth not connected to a dungeon? This adds so much potential for the world you have built. Are there underground civilizations? So many questions!

Karnnie

I agree with you. There are a lot of times in the past that Eryk could have helped by pulling something into his storage and then returning them. For instance he could have formed a box around one tooth and gum and removed it and returned it to Mavieth, then hew would only need to scrape a bit of gum from the tooth instead of trying to remove it by the roots. there are other times when he has been harvesting and could have made life easier but just removing a cube of earth and then dropping it to the ground instead of digging through the earth. Same goes for looking for the moles, he could have just taken big chunks of earth into his storage for next to no aether, once the aether bottomed out then he would know he had a mole or rabbit that he could get an essence from.

Owen Omoregie

I’m surprised he didn’t go with the displacement essences first

Erick Thiemke

Maveith would still have had to free them from the jaw. But it is a good point that he could make blades from the bone with his space

Silver Beard

A little disappointed Eryk didn't even try to help Mavieth. How much Aether would it have cost him to make a box of the Drakes teeth? Claws? Now that it's dead?? Less than a second...

Erick Thiemke

good point. i will either edit or have the MC be surprised on seeing the drake still there. the dungeon is currently very busy

Silver Beard

So why is the dead drake still there after 8-10 hours when the bear was reabsorbed in one on the third layer?

Erick Thiemke

goblin didnt escape yet. he is in the next chapter!

Erick Thiemke

I used Under Dark in World Sphere but it is also Forgotten Realms (D&D) so not sure if I can use it. For this story I am calling it the Endless Dark. But yes it is similar to the UnderDark but is more centered around the massive ley lines that run deep through the core.

Eriach

The UnderDark is the subterranean part of the world

Blorcyn

Interesting. So I'm guessing an Underdark like structure. Ahhh shit, I feel the goblin lived.

Erick Thiemke

It was mentioned that it was where the goblin hordes come from

Eriach

Endless Dark! Oh snap son!!!

Faa Diallo

It would be pretty cute if they started liking one another

Erick Thiemke

4th chapter this cycle will be Sunday or Monday. need to focus on World Sphere now

Erick Thiemke

okay 3rd chapter of the cycle. not sure I am going to stick with the ending as this is just an introduction to the Endless Dark and not the start of an arc. their only was way out is through the dungeon


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