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A Soldier's Life - 162 - Group Dynamics

🕑 Added 2024-03-15 23:46:50 +0000 UTC

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Unwired Rob

Why oh why, would he say this??? “And on the bright side, if someone kills me, everything in my dimensional space will be tossed out, freeing you anyway.” He would NOT give his potential enemy knowledge on how she could take everything he has - the collector, her stuff, all of his magic items and who knows what else. “I don’t know any void magic..." -- don't give your enemy more information about you. I was going to tell her I could read it too, but I let it slide as my Elven reading level was probably that of a six-year-old. -- Same, why would you tell your enemy about your abilities/lack of abilities?

Karnnie

I never completely write off a story, Everyone has different thoughts and opinions and while I may not agree with them, I can usually move past them. I still think that she is either planning on betraying them but maybe with the promise of freedom she is biding her time. I don't think he should be giving her essences but that is probably my greed and I can see how that would put the elf much at ease. I think you did a good job.

Erick Thiemke

Thanks for the corrections. Was waiting for you to get to the elf to see if you would keep reading. It was not an easy bit of writing to develop the relationship

Karnnie

Okay, Admittedly, I do like the elf's personality.

Karnnie

“I think the Raelia was spying on us.” “I think Raelia was spying on us.”

Lenny Sanchez

Honestly, with his slow aging, Eryk's only long-term love interests are either elves or other mages that have access to time magic (and the emperor's family seems like a bunch of dicks).

Rick

What role do I have to pay for full access to a solders life?

Tomcat

Well he has been attacked by the elves on numerous occasions. Has had friends and comrades perish. Your perspective is outside of this “reality”

Erick Thiemke

I probably read and saw too many movies. This is kind of the Ygritte and Jon snow relationship but reversed

Douglas Lilley

I’m having trouble with the trio tbh. Eryk’s acting a bit too pull-the-pigtails flirty with Raelia for a guy who was going to harvest her and is currently using her as a meat shield. In my mind either guilt or suspicion should be pushing Eryk to keep Raelia at a distance emotionally. The awkward teasing of the enemy is just disconcerting to me.

Jonathan Walker

I kind of hate how he acts towards the elf, like he clearly is going to test his luck on leaving the shit hole of empire so why does he treat her badly he should be trying to cozy up so he can defect to her country instead.

Simon

As far as I understood that would only work in the safe rooms. And I'm guessing that he might not actually want to be found so quickly.

Wiggles1

I figure Maveith is grossed out by hair, so he wouldn't be into her

Silver Beard

One more- he's not marking his trail in any way if anyone else from his company were to come upon areas that he's already been too? Goes back to Castille keeping track of her company in the Dungeon- she can't ofc, but the fact that Eryk is not bothering to leave any evidence that he was there is a little baffling...

Silver Beard

It's his Aetheric Conference(?) stat that gives him max potential from essences. The One/day is not really a hard/fast rule. Spreading his intake is better than focusing on one. Just like his actual vs max... there needs be some time to adjust and realize his potential. Author does this pretty well. Sure, we'd all like to see Eryk be OP; but there are definite down sides to that in the Empire. His term of obligated service is 5 years and he's barely 6 mos into it.

Erick Thiemke

He would get diminishing returns from them but yes he would be forcible quickly. From his mindset right now he is thinking major and apex essences give him more.

Otto Kovar

i know this is not a good idea from a story perspective, but if Eryk would chug a minor essence of quickness every day, he'd be quiet the fast guy, and speed is one of the biggest factors in deciding a fight, if you are faster than a person can react they are dead

Silver Beard

I was wondering if Dungeons gave clear bonus? Nobody has run this one is a 1000 years. If Eryk wanders enough perhaps their will be more to be had than just loot? An opportunity to improve him in some way. If he kills the Summoner who's messing with its creatures... Dungeon Defender?

Silver Beard

I know you didn't want to get into Dungeon Core drama; but that might be the way to go as the Summoner is absolutely going to piss it off. I don't see the old man doing any fighting on his own nor will the Dungeon allow him to bring Summons in; more like he will try to dominate and break the pacts it has with its creations.

Erick Thiemke

I started writing a Summoner POV but a quarter way through I didnt like. Not sure how I am going to handle it. About 20 chapters left for the arc to finish though

Silver Beard

So they need a trial of blood? They'll have to descend to the 3rd layer again for that kind of challenge. I suppose the Summoner will be about to enter the Dungeon about now knowing his prey escaped him. Might be time for a POV reflections of the other players.

Erick Thiemke

It is intentional in the writing. Same way the Goliath kept calling Eryk legionnaire until after the fight with the manticore

Notlimah

Thanks for the Chapter

Silver Beard

Force circumstances is driving the company. I doubt it would the same outside the Dungeon and/or if the situation was reversed. Might help if MC didn't keep thinking of her as a griffin rider- a constant reminder of their ugly past.

Erick Thiemke

Cliffhanger ? Every chapter has a little one

Prinny Knight

How dare you do this to me

Lobotomized Philosopher

Still in awe your story remains very engaging 162 chapters in, your upload notifications are the highlight of my evenings.

Eddie

Interactions are great. I like the hesitant dynamic you've set up between Eryk and Raelia and look forward to them getting more comfortable with each other. I like how Maevith is bridging the gap between them. Every character feels purposeful in their interactions. Great job! TFTC.

Faa Diallo

Seems like Eryk has affinity towards her. I might be wrong about this but it seems like he's joking more than he normally does. I don't know if that's good or bad or anything just an observation. I think the interactions are good overall.

Eriach

I think they're starting to mesh a little bit better.

Tuck

I love the byplay btween eryk and Raelia. Its fun and is a great complement to the dungeon arc-- which has been awesome btw. It's a great mix between danger and progression, I think it works really well, while being plausible. Tftc

Eriach

To long elevated stone shelves and a small..."Two"

Erick Thiemke

Let me know how the trio works in the writing. and for those of you wondering Maveith sees Raelia as the sister he failed to save, not as a love interest

Erick Thiemke

3rd chapter this cycle. one more coming


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