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A Soldiers Life - 188 - Getting Fitted

🕑 Added 2024-05-01 03:49:53 +0000 UTC

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Raelik

A muffled bell chimed in the distance courtyard of the Mage College. Distant

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Robert Biederman

You have commented that he sleeps around a bit does this mean there is light r18 content in the descriptions I wouldn't mind at all if this is so

Robert Biederman

You seem to have more faith in humanity than I do you leave an object out like that and I'm not even talking the expense of that object I'm talking about the usefulness I don't care who you are or how honorable of an individual you may believe that person to have if there is no trust between the two individuals let alone lifetimes worth of friendship well let's just say I'm surprised that reading table is still in that room especially with no security on it to me it just makes him look stupid this is done for a little more than a test ?no I'm not buying it when you consider that he has the mentality of a dragon that likes to hoard every little thing he can get his hands on he should be building bridges with everything that is in his possession because let's face it for him it's going to be easy to replace what he loses here the other thing is it is unlikely that he's going to have to pay out of his own pocket for anything it's likely to be given to him freely with no strings attached considering who he is the guard for

Koral

This sentence needs work (probably remove the word became) High Mage Zyna just became resumed her role as Chancellor but has not had a legionnaire in her service in years.”

Aaron Weingrad

There is a conflict between Eric’s paranoia and his arrogance. If he is afraid of the powerful and the empire he shouldn’t feel like he can set terms with the Chancellor. She can literally have him killed or withdraw her protection. His room is in her suite. He shouldn’t have any expectation of privacy.

Erick Thiemke

There is some rewrites in book 4 coming as I don’t think it flows well from start to finish but overall the plot is not going to change. There might be a few chapters added for the Hound training and develop the conflict between the MC and Boris more for instance. Grammar editing and improving the imagery are usually what gets corrected in the edit

Wxavy

another question. if I got the 25 membership and read it all. Would changes be made to it? like major plot changes down the road where I'll have to reread? if that Is the case would it be announced?

Wxavy

Eryk has had reasons not to trust people, and has had reasons to have trust issues. Castile proved her trust through countless acts of heroism and just being a true person, but she's also expressed greed and other things eryk has. Not saying she wants to hurt him, but with zyna she helped him out with the dreamscape, and she also plans on helping him throughout with destroying her blood. She wouldn't have a reason to want to take his stuff. once he reaches the blood archives there's nothing stopping him from just not burning her blood. She needs to form the trust with eryk if she wants to escape the empire or kill the emperor. It makes sense for him to try and test her loyalty to him, and everyone should be trying to. The author has now intertwined the plot threads with the Mc. take the eryk out and now everything Is harder.

Wxavy

it seems like he has a lot of essences. like way to many. I feel the author Is making mc go through sm he low-key forgets. in the next book he should get hella strong. not to bad of an idea if he can actually trust zyna

Erick Thiemke

10 books for the Solider arc. Book five is a quarter posted.

Wxavy

drop more chapters neow before I get angy and make cat noises 😔 Actual questions. How many books are planned? n Is there any plan for the mc to transcend or become something other then human?

Erick Thiemke

Unfortunately it doesn't turn out that way. While the MC sleeps around a bit, no harem and no big reveal to his allies

Hankypanky

I like that he left the table and stuff out. He should unload everything in his dimension as well as leave his stats uncleared on the table. Might as well not keep any secrets at all. Remember the best kept secrets are those that everyone knows about. He can start a harem with all the ladies too, and he should introduce all the technological advances and gadgets from his world. It should be just like every Chinese junk trope novel out there, am I right or am I right? Like come on people, let the author cook, everything seems to smell pretty good so far

Ivan Kanewske

I also agree that expected privacy and reality, he would not have left the table out, that is out of character for what he has been through

Ivan Kanewske

I feel he should have gotten some shorts and at least one pair of pants out of the spinnerett deal, even if the are all skin tight, Thinking under Armour type stuff, I know he is in legion skirt, but won't always be

Karnnie

Maybe one on four had a class being conducted. Maybe one of four had a class being conducted.

Stephen

Since Zyna is allowed to purchase apex essences, maybe Eryk could have her trade/swap/buy a channelling essence to fix his burnt channels. He should look into whether buying a bazillion cheap minor shaping essences and consuming them will raise his aether shaping potential (maybe his high convergence might affect this)

Blorcyn

On the one hand sure. I understand and agree: Eryk has been understandably cautious and a habit is a habit. Why would he leave it out when he doesn’t usually. Why would he risk revealing that he has an absolutely humongous space (imaging the size of the elf free standing tablet as unreasonably large even without everything else he stiffs in there). Absolutely valid. However, Zyna knows he’s an otherworlder and what that means. She’s made him able to lie to truth seekers, and although he hasn’t told her his affinities it does feel it’s because she hasn’t asked. She’s the Emperor’s right hand. She knows the life ending secret that he Emperor would kill him for and has immediate ability to act on that without Eryk having recourse. And she’s keeping him safe. Giving him loose rein. Basically, he’s already fucked if she wants to fuck him. I understand him logically understanding that (while, yeah, why share what’s not been asked about) and thinking he’s no reason to hide anything from Zyna any more (other than an escape route). But it is weird that habitual secrecy immediately vanishes. Habit is habit.

Lemes

Did the MC forget the evaluation table outside of dimensional space? This was very strange as a plot development. The MC has always been very paranoid about people finding out details about his secrets and suddenly he starts to be so relaxed around strangers to the point of leaving his secrets so visible? The summoner's belt is still thrown inside his backpack (the rings too?). I thought that at that moment his priority would be to find out which summoner's item created that effect that prevented him from storing it in his dimensional space. He's only just started to have some trust in Castile and suddenly he's so relaxed with Zyna? I understand that he needs and wants to trust Zyna, but I thought this should happen gradually.

Victor Skaarup

WRT the discussion on contents of MC’s storage, I would suggest books have long term value - particularly given his longevity. It could be basis for a future in crafting. In particular metal work with an earth affinity. As a minimum he should copy books in storage to dream scape. Books could potentially be sold or traded afterward. I would also suggest that after the earth affinity, the MC should develop a ranged attack.

BubblyGhost

Y'know, I thought I would not keep the 25 membership but the story has only continuously improved that I don't feel like lowering it. Good job man

BubblyGhost

Think I skipped a chapter

Eriach

Tftc

Erick Thiemke

5th of cycle and next cycle starts tomorrow


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