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A Soldiers Life - 189 - Flirting with Fire

🕑 Added 2024-05-03 02:12:53 +0000 UTC

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Raelik

Surprise crossed her features, and I momentarily prepared to defend myself as I sensed Zyna channeling aether and a spell forming under the water, but she released her. It not her

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Joseph Snyder

path forward set, and I entered the dreamscape after securing the door from the inside. I entered and is unnecessary

Robert Biederman

I love this chapter keep it coming and I will stop commenting on minor stuff that really from what I have seen of the quality of this book doesn't need to be commented on at all

Robert Biederman

Sorry if I seem to be writing so many comments my memory is bad wait until you hit 66 and you'll see what I mean so I write my comments quickly so I don't forget them and I know it also makes me look kind of silly for not reading ahead because the answer 99% of the time will be on the next page as just occurred feel kind of silly now of commenting on food the way I did you had that fully covered

Robert Biederman

There seems to be a typo not far down from where the chapter begins it says the word is signed where I think it should be sigh

Hankypanky

Correction from: I showered briefly in cold water, soaked in the still-hot recessed tub, and then dressed in comfortable clothes I bought in the capital before we marched for Sobral. Correction to: I showered briefly in cold water, soaked in the still-hot recessed tub, took a sip of the bath water to get a taste of Zyna, and then dressed in comfortable clothes I bought in the capital before we marched for Sobral. Real men of culture would never let such an opportunity go to waste

Karnnie

Although I couldn’t make use of the books, adding them to the amulet for the future would be a plan. He still has all of the books from the Library, not to mention the 500 he has yet to look through to add to the amulet as well. As he spent ALL NIGHT looking through books and most of the day before, he easily as 500 or more before moving on to the books he has in storage as well.

Karnnie

“Why are you all not concerned that I am out worlder?” “Why are you all not concerned that I am an out worlder?”

Erick Thiemke

there is a High Mage for each affinity in the Empire. the eternal high mage has the highest time affinity and is also the one that has the deaging spell. like it was mentioned this only affects the body, not the mind.

Notlimah

Also if there is an 'eternal' high mage it sounds like someone else has already achieved this.

Daniel kanevsky

Sorry mis read comment, my bad

Erick Thiemke

Yes that is thousands of years

Daniel kanevsky

Wait, how? In book 2, it's said that he ages 1/320 normal speed, so if he lives for another 60 years (him being 20 something), that's 60*320 = around 20k years

Erick Thiemke

thousands of years if he maintains slow aging

Daniel kanevsky

How long is eryks life span now?

Silver Beard

@Blorcyn - It was mentioned early in the story that Otherworlder affinities could not be inherited. So even if Eryk were to tuck down and start a family... likely none of them would have his time/space affinity. Building an affinity from zero when you Aetheric Infuence is 0... suspect there just haven't been enough beasts that can provide it in the Emperors lifetime. Look at Castille, what we know... how many essences has she acquired that actually made it to the Emperor? Other Mages? Not a single one. They might pass some off, but it wouldn't be a magic affinity type.

Silver Beard

Mouthwash for the win.

Silver Beard

I'm more worried they'll want him to stay and be the new figurehead. If his slow aging spellform truly protects him from mental decay and he'll be around 4-5000 years. He'll be a GD... that they'll try to control.

Lemes

I think this actually makes more sense. The mind starting to deteriorate after the age of 120 is much more likely than at the age of one hundred.

Erick Thiemke

Thanks I was looking for that, didn’t see it in notes. I will edit 67 to 84

Lemes

There is an inconsistency here in Zyna's age. In chapter 114 when Maveith asks her age she said she was 83 years old, having served 26 years as a mage in the legion and 24 at the mage college.

Erick Thiemke

I think the MC is thinking in the back of his mind that there will be opportunities to leave

Erick Thiemke

It is not easy to raise a magic affinity

Gyatzilla

Question, is he not worried he might be silenced after the plan is finished? Castile might have the needed spell, but I think her disposability has to be a factor.

Victor Skaarup

I am happy to see MC starting to explore alchemy. Healing potions can be a game saver, particularly if he eventually has his own crew.

Victor Skaarup

I think a “significant” level of paranoia by MC is reasonable, rational and more than justified by the culture he finds himself in.

Blorcyn

Yeah. The original Legion had enough people living long enough that they can’t all have gone mad or it’d have been well known from the history already discussed, hundreds of years into some of their life spans. For the emperor. I’m surprised that he hasn’t got a good slow aging spell himself. If he’s got >100 void affinity, why not have >80 at least in all the other affinities.

Erick Thiemke

He is fine. His slow aging allows him to avoid the effect of mental deterioration. Will be in future chapter. The emperor is having the eternal high mage deage his body. Doesn’t affect his mind

Alex Galaitsis

I’m confused. Is his spell to slow aging on himself, that he keeps running constantly, the same as the one that can be periodically cast on someone else? Weren’t there two different spells and he chose the better one, or am I misremembering?

Erick Thiemke

The emperor is 300 years old and Zyna is 84 and will experience deterioration after age 100 …84 plus 40

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, why would their mind deteriorate after 65 years? It is a time spell not a healing spell, a young healthy brain should have no problem with at least a 100 years of life according to our current understanding, probably more. Dementia is a degenerative disease that comes with an aging brain tissue and cerebral vessels. Unless the empire uses high tier Healing magic instead of time magic to slow aging and they haven’t figured out how to slow a brain’s aging??

Erick Thiemke

Thanks corrected. I had started writing 190 and got confused

Faa Diallo

Chapter title and and in text chapter number are different

Erick Thiemke

1st of four for cycle. Now we can discuss his lack of paranoia and I can make some prior chapter edits


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