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A Soldiers Life - 190 - New Routine

🕑 Added 2024-05-04 04:46:47 +0000 UTC

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B P

Doesn’t need revenue but wouldn’t let someone he fought with for 6 months borrow a sword… love the series but hate that choice

Erick Thiemke

fixed. just send me a note. it is a cut and paste thing with Macs. if even one word is in italics, they all come out that way. before it all showed normal to me but i was able to see italics in this chapter so maybe patreon fixed it

Labola

I think I saw another comment on this but it’s still italics on iPhone and pretty annoying. Has anyone found a way to fix this?

Brianna Stormcloud

Well at least he might end up a better chief and part time alchemist. He can Also add the books to his dreamscape for study during eventual sleep periods wherever he ends up

Raelik

would have worked to imprint stoneskin if I knew I was going to remain in legion. In the legion

Robert Biederman

This comment by scientist valsi is exactly why I turn the MC's mentality as that of a dragon hoard I doubt even the author will remember everything that's going in there and bring it into the story at some point

Scientist Valci

Hello?! He still hasn't checked what the old mage had on him other than the rings! There is a spacial item among them as well, because he couldn't put it in his storage space. He has privacy so he can finally go over them.

cnjsd dsjncsdk

Dude everything except how generous he acts is realistic, no normal person shares dungeon food so extravagantly, maybe a bit of preservation should come into his mind

Abdullah Abdulhameed

I am still mad he did not choose blink for the time affinity spell form.

A B

Yes.

Erick Thiemke

is this one of the chapters?

A B

Ah. I've seen it on other authors patreons, too. Will do. Ty

Erick Thiemke

It is an error in the Patreon code when I cut and paste. I can’t see it on my apple computer. Please just post a note saying it’s in italics and i will fix it

A B

Is it just me or are a lot of chapters showing up in all italics? Is that a patreon thing?

Jason Long

Tear for year

Karnnie

They absolutely send the hounds after one person, and especially a mage. But vanishing into thin air... Cant track that.

Karnnie

I would then prepare a large dinner for all of us while they cooked. I would then prepare a large dinner for all of us while they cleaned.

Karnnie

Zyna walked in as I was trying to scrap material off the bottom of a beaker. Zyna walked in as I was trying to scrape material off the bottom of a beaker.

Karnnie

“Will twenty large silvers be enough for five different cookbook?” “Will twenty large silvers be enough for five different cookbooks?”

Karnnie

The remaining spell forms were also extremely powerful, but I didn’t delve too deep into there descriptions. The remaining spell forms were also extremely powerful, but I didn’t delve too deep into their descriptions.

Grayson

I would prefer to get more early release chapters--I understand these are 1st drafts--expecting good editing is not realistic...

Silver Beard

The problem is the weakness after he stashes someone away. Mavieth is definitely a good choice as he might not be missed but anyone one else would be. TBH I was hoping he'd stash a way Castille and make a run for it. Nobody send the hounds for one legionaire and he could keep her in stasis for a decade... folks would stop looking/wondering. Alas- author got his plan...and this isn't it

Erick Thiemke

He sort of fell into the trap on the first draft of these chapters. He thinks they need him and he can trust them because of that fact. They also know some facts: he is out worlder, he has a large dimensional space and he has the collector

J H

After digesting 30+ chapters in one sitting, Ive been thinking about how eryk could best use his storage space. The very best thing he could store in there is powerful allies. Imagine having Mavieth pop out of nowhere in an important fight - he would have force multipliers no one could account for. There are definitely people who might be interested. Imagine someone who is on the run from the law (or the hounds??), where better to hide than in the storage space of a man who will live 25,000 years? Or imagine someone that might have a degenerative disease - they could be stored and used briefly on the hopes that a cure might be found in the future. Or Eryk could store and save someone on the promise that they be his ace in the hole for a period of time.

Steven

💯 agree, getting help from Zyna only makes sense.

Silver Beard

And if he runs into some aspirants that need give him trouble... oh- that sucks his space if FULL... guess he'll have to just suffer whatever they cast on him. Deserves it too after not relieving himself on purpose.

Silver Beard

ROFL.. that wasn't the point at all... the 'original' books are still taking up space in his 'space'... What's been his MO so far..taking bits and pieces...sometimes whole people into his space. BUT at the moment it's stuffed with books! Lose some of the dead weight already!

Otto Kovar

I won't deny that that may be an incentive for myself or others to offer the help xD. In the long term you would benefit, freelancing as is provides some monetary gain but may not be very lucrative for the one offering the work, important is that you gain more free time, which should give you more breathing room or the ability to further expand.

Erick Thiemke

Thanks for the idea. I will put something together when I get back to states. Are you sure you just don’t want to get chapters even earlier by editing? 😅

Erick Thiemke

After he copies them he will always have them and can get rid of them

Erick Thiemke

That is a definite possibility. She understands how the amulet works and there are two at the mage academy

Otto Kovar

I agree with Silver Beard, partially. You have a small community of very passionate readers, they do pay 24,50€(here in Austria) to get chapters early. In your discord make a post adressing all Seraphim Tier Supporters. You are looking for a freelancing editor. within a week they have to edit 5 Chapters(4 for the weekly release and an additional for editing those that are already released). Like the first 5 chaps of book two for example. You choose which one you like and negotiate what they will be paid for. I would suggest pushing for a week or two hard to get a headstart and buffer for the unreleased chapters or reduce the amount you release for a time(the supporters will understand). This will give you time to review the suggested changes and if the editor gets sick or goes on vacation you could for a time still release chapters. Also you have to make clear that you are not employing them, only paying the agreed amount and it is on them to register their additional income for taxes(or what ever their country/state needs of them). The agreed upon pay should be a per chapter pay(they have to make the first suggestion, you can ask the other submiters and see what kind of pay is expected) and you retain the right of refusal if the quality is not up to snuff. I would also only reach out to the Seraphim Tier Supporters as they are already up-to-date on the story and are probably very interested in your work. Other prequesits must include Word or something that produces .docx files so you have an easy time comparing and compiling the changes you agree to. Something like that... I hope you make it work. PS: if you would go for idea, i would submit a draft ;)

Silver Beard

Off note- if he can win Zyna's trust... he should absolutely get her into his Amulet and have her create a copy of herself there to teach and perhaps other things if that's what's needed.

Silver Beard

How does adding books from his space into the amulet create more space?! IT doesn't. What- will he burn them after?

DimpleDipper

Eryk has been running nonstop for awhile. If he relaxes here, it might be nice to see some of the pent up emotions come out from surviving so much.

Erick Thiemke

Publishing companies give an author a flat fee for a manuscript. Then after they sell a certain number copies you start getting royalties. For audio books Amazon takes 60%. Then the author and voice actor split the remaining 40%. Since I paid the voice actor upfront, I get the 40% and don’t split it

Silver Beard

the prices you list are seriously over-inflated. WTF! Leverage your readers for proofing. One less chapter a week will be the cost though until you can find a publisher that won't constantly screw you over. I've got a novel I'm working on... but holy shit if this is what it takes to publish... no wonder Kong didn't get his disastrous last book proofed. You do know you are supposed to pick a 5-6th page publisher... not the first one?!

Silver Beard

I agree. I just got tired of pointing out mistakes since you've made almost no move to fix them for the published bits. Could save you down the road though when you want to publish. Just b/c- I don't do audio. I'm not deaf I just get used to the voice I attach to a character and don't care for someone else's opinion on what he/she/it is supposed to sound like.

Silver Beard

I totally agree that he needs to come clean with Zyna on his Aether burn and how he got it. Give up the Robe. Ask for help. They are in it together for now.

Silver Beard

Surely the application division of the Mage College has a solution for Aether Burn. Eryk's got the means...it's fitting all the pieces together to get the final product that's going to be a challenge

Silver Beard

He should get Renee, status of Mage should give her access to the city, to get him the revelation scrolls... once he has the belt figured out...and possibly cleaned out; he might have the wealth and leverage to get what he needs.

Otto Kovar

it was a good listen, but i already made the comment on it that it sounded more like i am being read a fantasical saga(like the hobbit or lotr) than the hard and gory viewpoint of a soldier. I felt the narrator was overselling some lines but he has a nice voice and good range in depicting many voices. I did pay for it using my audible credit as those had been piling up. I started listening but midway through I decided that the style was not for me and I dropped the audio book.

Erick Thiemke

Was the audio book bad?

Otto Kovar

I see... I hope you had fun in South America, there are some sights to behold.

Erick Thiemke

The audio book was $3200 to retain my rights

Erick Thiemke

My parents took me to South America to tour the Galapagos and Amazon. I have not been able to get Grammarly to work on the tablet I bought for the trip which has been frustrating. The trip has three days left. As far as content editors they are out of my price range right now. $5000 to $10,000 per book. I paid a grammar editor through Fivver for book 2 and she did a terrible job.

Otto Kovar

I know you have been writting a lot and your efforts are commendable, but as of late and with your releases on payed plattforms and audiobooks and should say you need to invest in a proof reader and editor, I and others do not mind pointing out errors, but we are paying to get early releases and some influence in future chapters. I love your work but also think using grammarly will at one point not be enough for the releases. I do not know how much you make on this but paying a freelancer a few hours a week to do some correction and catching any mistakes you made may up your quality by a lot. I am not demanding it but i am also not obligated to point out any errors. I love this book a lot and i would only want it to improve going forward and in terms of world building, characters and plot you are delivering, but in terms of grammar and consistency there is room for improvement.

Alex

“I would prepare a large dinner for all of us while they cook.” You probably meant while they “clean”

Erick Thiemke

As a Baronesss, First Citizen, High Mage and Chancellor she could possibly get such an essence. But if I wrote it correctly the monsters needed to get a magic attribute were dangerous. Very dangerous. So their value is as much as as an apex magic affinity essence. It will come up eventually.

Otto Kovar

I believe Eryk should leverage some of his goods to Zyna for some Aether Channeling Essences. Coming clean on that part will help him greatly and there is nothing to loose for him as it would reveal very little about him, though he may incidently reveal that he killed the summoner by himself. He may even get access to some other essences. As it is told minor affinity essences are needed in larger quantaties to raise points but Eryk can do so with probably only one. If Eryk revealed his Spellform for Convergence maybe Zyna would want to invest into him, she is planing to have him help with some exveptionally tough shit. But I understand him not wanting to reveal something so monumentally OP of an ability.

BubblyGhost

'not that I wanted to see the inside of a dungeon anytime soon.'. Psh, as if any respectable loot goblin can resist the allure of essence and artifacts!

Erick Thiemke

2 of 4 for cycle.


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