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World Sphere - 182 - Storm Clouds Gathering

🕑 Added 2024-04-24 15:32:40 +0000 UTC

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Mercutio Montano

This chapter might need a structural edit. Callystra's involvement and the existence of a shifter is well enough. The dramatic irony of the shifter's infiltration, perpetration of the dungeon murders, and consumption of the girl comes at the cost of mystery. It is extremely difficult for mystery and dramatic irony to coexist in the same story. Such a balance requires multiple levels of deception and some of the most intricate writing in the creative process.

Ivan Kanewske

Before heading to the capital, he sneak out and wander the city later that night to get a feel for this island. Planned to sneak out

Ivan Kanewske

The shifter could not believe he was tasked with with sweeping the floor of a lowly shop. Remove one of the with

Erick Thiemke

just got really sick in Ecuador. limited energy and focus was applied to Soldier updates. should have been a chapter two weeks ago. I am wiring World Sphere now and expect a chapter before the end of the day.

SoJoe

It's almost been a month, was there a schedule change to releases?

Otter Pops

It could be that this dragon isn't the leader of the moon. There might be more powerful beings on the moons. Also, it sounds like top members of the adventurer's guild can challenge her

PatronTurtle

The dynamics of the moons are still really unclear. Are they uncontested or constantly fighting each other to hold the positions? What's keeping this dragon from constantly working to dismantle the Adventure Guild so she can conquer more of the ring?

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, I loathe thee thou Cliff!!!


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