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A Soldier's Life - 195 - Blood Sport

🕑 Added 2024-05-15 17:07:24 +0000 UTC

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Battleborn

The young woman grabbed the gray napkins to wipe their faces hastily...should be plural, "women"

Oeon

I don't think you can compare a High Mage to some backwater bastard daughter maid Eryk. And they know many of your secrets already... in fact they are helping you hiding them. But betrayal still hurts, that I agree

Robert Biederman

Good chapter keep them coming

Erick Thiemke

would you believe I scored in the top 1% for math in high scholol?

Erick Thiemke

yes - grammarly edit, fixed

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Bloodorange17

How does Zyna helping with cleanup after dinner risk exposing some of Eryk's secrets?

Karnnie

It was too late, and the fight ended ten minutes later after the orcs had sustained a multiple of injuries. It was too late, and the fight ended ten minutes later after the orcs had sustained a multitude of injuries.

Karnnie

The dwarf scrambled and drove his blade under the chin of felled gladiator into his brain. The dwarf scrambled and drove his blade under the chin of the felled gladiator into his brain.

Karnnie

The sixth match of the afternoon was seven Bartiradian soldiers: four humans, three elves and a dwarf. The sixth match of the afternoon was eight Bartiradian soldiers: four humans, three elves and a dwarf.

Karnnie

I was certain the Champion could defeat me in easily in true combat as he had held back and fought at his opponent’s level. I was certain the Champion could defeat me easily in true combat as he had held back and fought at his opponent’s level.

Karnnie

Way back in the early chapters, as he was developing and learning, he was told that shaping was one of the rarest essences to get if I am not mistaken. The fact that he has not found one (and a few others) makes sense. Sure it is also being used to hold him back but I think that is more due to the fact that the author doesn't want Eryk to become too powerful too quickly. It has only been 7(?) months since he arrived to this world and while it may seem slow, he has grown quite a bit in that time and probably consumed more essences than 90% of the empires population.

Karnnie

I consumed a significant earth essence and retired to my room and the dreamscape. I consumed a (major?) earth essence and retired to my room and the dreamscape.

Nicholas Ramage

SEVEN Bartiradian soldiers: four humans, three elves and a dwarf 4+3+1 = 8

Grayson

After all the essences Eryk has gotten, he should get at least 1-2 aether shaping to improve his 8/8. It’s too obvious the author is holding his development back here to keep him a soldier and isn’t credible.

Lemes

Yes, I still think Erick should try to invest in a more intimate relationship with Zyna (for several reasons). But that won't happen. The author seems to dislike relationships between people of very different ages. We'll have to settle for Renna.

Monsi

Ahh caught up with the chapters. I have to say I like the way the story is progressing right now :)

DimpleDipper

So you’re saying there is more to come soon?!

Erick Thiemke

referring to the maid that discovered his secrets and told Boris about the Dreamscape Amulet. He doesn't want others around to get whiff of his secrets. fixing the other errors

Erick Thiemke

he gets time in the Imperial Legion Hall training yard

Erick Thiemke

he finds that out soon on the second knoll hunt.

Silver Beard

Eryk should ask for a fresh corpse or ask Zyna for a closer look...what if Orc blood is what his legacy blade needs to restore itself?

Grayson

Why not simply ask Zyna how to hire the best sword masters?

Eriach

Thankee kind sir

BubblyGhost

Also Zyna best girl

BubblyGhost

'I would have asked for help with the basic chores, but I was still sore from Lareen’s betrayal.' - Huh? 'One of the orcs roared with crowd and charged.' - Roared with crowd? “Is you interest for Antonia?” - your* 'There armor had dried blood' - their*

Erick Thiemke

Even though Wednesday starts a new week cycle this is 4th of 4 for last week's cycle.


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