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A Soldiers Life - 199 - Earth Speak

🕑 Added 2024-05-23 15:42:28 +0000 UTC

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Brianna Stormcloud

the answer could be the War Mage, Zyna, doing the rounds to evaluate each group ( and appearing just in time to stop any deadly attempts)

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

i think i corrected it

Erick Thiemke

edited

BloodStorm

Why didn’t Renna fly over the mud ?

Oeon

From how the aether restoration potion was percieved by our mage commander, an artifact that granted boost to such ability all the time would be much, much more valuable. Remember that the elven mage were one of the only top few summoner in the world.

Robert Biederman

I think it's kind of silly that he is so focused on the fear of that ring of channeling is on his fingers when he is wearing more than one ring doesn't seem too concerned about the others they're all artifacts any artifact can be detected kind of silly

Robert Biederman

There is a word in one of the sentences here that probably should not be there it doesn't make the Sense come out right that sentence is when to the towers reinforced doors and hour later the word too I don't think should be there

Kalidans2

Thanks for chapter!

jordicl

no need for a hole, just having a small piece of his sole (around the size of a button) replaced by stone should be enough. it solves the problem of getting pointy stuff in your toes.

Trevayne

Good update. I wonder if he could use a hole in part of his shoe to touch the earth? Bending down to touch with his hand in combat may not be practical. Granted, an opening for a toe has its own issues.

Karnnie

Looks like he will need to get his gloves modified into fingerless gloves so that he can make contact with the earth. Who knew you could have biker gloves in medieval rome.

Karnnie

“Thank you for guarding my tent all night. I woke a few times but always felt safe knowing you were there.” I nodded and didn’t tell her enemy had scouted her multiple times during the night. “Thank you for guarding my tent all night. I woke a few times but always felt safe knowing you were there.” I nodded and didn’t tell her, her enemy had scouted her multiple times during the night.

Karnnie

When I returned to the camp with my ten poles an hour later, I frowned. When I returned to the camp with my tent poles an hour later, I frowned.

Erick Thiemke

Pulling items is relatively quick. Storing items is a bit more complex because he has to put them into a free space and it is getting crowded

Erick Thiemke

Yes. The only time he needs to turn it on is when he bottoms out his aether. Think of it like a light switch and he blows the circuit board when he bottoms out

Daniel kanevsky

Does Eryks time spell form run while he's sleeping? We sleep around a third of our life times, so it could make a difference waaaay down the line

Daniel kanevsky

Would like earth monster leather work or will he need to have crumpled dirt in the leather?

Erick Thiemke

I am modeling it after the bat echolocation. The medium for sound waves is air. for this echolocation, it is earth/stone. if a bat had a piece of stone in front of it it wouldn't be able to see anything. So his earth radar needs to be sent into earth

Erick Thiemke

am i missing the reference in the chapter to of Mice and Men?

Eriach

Pair of boots that have a stone circle making contact with the heel of the foot through the heel of the shoe?

Eriach

I like that 2nd one, Of Mice and Mages.

Erick Thiemke

it is an aetheric echo, the non-earth material stops it

Victor Skaarup

As already suggested, as he gains mastery?

Victor Skaarup

I agree with Grayson. If he can cast air shields through his boots, why not earth sense. It’s magic.

Grayson

Need special socks, too--isn't this overly complicated?? I'd just edit out the reference to needing flesh to have contact with earth…

Mason W

No one can sneak up on him sitting on the toilet tho, so he has that going for him.

Erick Thiemke

Wednesday to Tuesday is a cycle since Soldier is the most popular story I base it off of the two chapters that I release of Wednesday. Seraphim gets four chapters in a cycle

Erick Thiemke

He needs aether channeling essences to repair them

Prinny Knight

Loud feet/Of Mice and Mages/Night in the Beau/Not Shreks swamp/Moles amongus/Mage Cashew & Onuts

Mason W

What do you count as a ‘cycle’? Output per week? It kinda confuses me but not a criticism of your output!

BubblyGhost

Was there anything that made using his 'inventory' more difficult? As it'd be a great thing to incorporate into his fighting style. Switching weapons at a moments notice

Mason W

Are his channels burned forever?

Erick Thiemke

He needs something to resonate the echo that has an association with earth. Special boots that either are made from material that is made from earth material or has its own affinity with earth

Scion

Boots, never again?

Immutably Empty

Probably just takes more practice. Like how he can now cast air step via his feet.

Notlimah

Perhaps there are aether transmitting materials or he could have part of his boot made from stone to sense through

Grayson

So wearing boots, earth sense is useless if flesh needs to touch earth to work. If so, not very practical…

Notlimah

Sound of Stone, Stone Sense, Sense of Stone, Echoes of the Earth, Earth Echoes,

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4 for last week's cycle. The next chapter should be tonight, but it will probably be a Maveith POV chapter to get an idea of how things are going with the company. This chapter needs a new title as well, so taking suggestions.


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