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A Soldiers Life - 202 - Terrible Odds

🕑 Added 2024-05-26 18:41:57 +0000 UTC

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Chaz Baz

Bloody excellent. ✓

Jordan Mayo

Eryk just preformed a Killamanjaro

Brianna Stormcloud

That was insane! 9-1 odds whoot! And more memories for his Orc trainer!

Justin Barnett

The arrow bounced two feet from me harmlessly away — the arrow stopped two feet from me and bounced harmlessly away?

Erick Thiemke

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Lord Rahl

That fight was amazing

J S

Ooooh

Fortunis

Nice. Now he knows what to use to get his sword back to shiney.

Ivan Kanewske

You do state in paragraph 32 a 20 foot for radius for earth speak, if the radius is 25 that will need fixed

Ivan Kanewske

The orc other pressed, seeing I was now weaponless The other or pressed

ImYou

Our boy is a badass now

Tetsu-nii

/I pulled my collector from my space and got work./ => /I pulled my collector from my space and got *to* work./

Tetsu-nii

/chance a peak and retreated/ => /chanced a peek and retreated/

Tetsu-nii

Suggestion: /The arrow was in just below the left collarbone of my shield arm/ => /The arrow struck just below my left collarbone, above my shield arm/

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /dagger in his offhand/ == /dagger in his off hand/.

Tetsu-nii

/the two orcs across coming from the clearing/ == /the two orcs coming from the clearing/? /the two orcs coming across the clearing/?

Karnnie

I will say that I love the fact that you did not make a stupid MC. He uses his wits and what he has a available to him. He thinks strategically as well. He also does not forget about looting his fallen enemies at the earliest convenience. Too many stories have an OP MC that is just dumb and does not take the advantages he has. For instance, 9 enemies and a collector, time is of the essence and he does not waste the time. He can loot them afterwards or during but the point is he takes the opportunity that he is given.

Karnnie

When the archer shoulder the bow to help the other orc run, I sprinted at them. When the archer shouldered the bow to help the other orc run, I sprinted at them.

Karnnie

The orc other pressed, seeing I was now weaponless as I wouldn’t have time to recover my spear. The other orc pressed, seeing I was now weaponless as I wouldn’t have time to recover my spear.

Karnnie

As I charged, both orcs skidded to a stop on the pine needles up to receive me. As I charged, both orcs skidded to a stop on the pine needles to receive me.

DimpleDipper

Btw that fight was easily followed and understandable. Seriously was one of the best fights I’ve read. I’m gunna study this chapter.

DimpleDipper

If killing always bottoms out his magic, could he get around that by making a spear appear above or in front of an enemy to impale them? Should and efficient midrange trap/attack

Trako

I want more, I need more. That fight was great.

Erick Thiemke

only if he wanted to not be able to use any spell forms inscribed on his core. you can not have both.

Erick Thiemke

it is 25 five feet.

Victor Skaarup

Could MC not use a tattoo, e.g., stone skin on his torso? I suppose there might be interference with the spell form on his core or the ones on his arms?

Victor Skaarup

In chapters 199 and 201 range of earth speak was 25 feet. In this chapter 20 feet.

Daniel kanevsky

Another advantage to hiding a few buddies is that he'll have access to their gear. If he ever wants to disappear from the empire, he'll need non legionnaire gear, and this could be a start

Erick Thiemke

He just never thought he would need it so soon. It is not an aether shield/armor amulet anyway. He just thinks it is

Erick Thiemke

Yes

Lazarius

Renna saw the black spear ?

Silver Beard

I wonder if the blade eats/absorbs the essences to restore itself; and what Eryk will get from the collector will be a lot less because of it.

Silver Beard

That would be an issue only if a Mage showed up before the essence disappeared. Pretty sure nobody's going to rush to his rescue. Not after the arena fight. The Legion knows to tread lightly with Orcs.

Deliver roo

Great chapter, a welcomed change of pace after the previous ones. Strange for him to realize only now that the aether shield amulet taken from Traeliorn might be useful but I guess he will always be slow in his gains.

Silver Beard

This would have been a perfect place to use Dimension door spell form. Could have her sent back in a second and possibly got support in return.

Daniel kanevsky

It'll be cool to see what essence they'll create

jean

or just shows he is a amazing fighter where would anybody think he has self healing if not a potion on him to heal him or renna???? again why is him wounding himself so important here when it gives more or less nothing :P

Erick Thiemke

Will hit this correction in a min

Eriach

That's cool and a way around the rules lol

Eriach

She only saw the 6 I believe

Eriach

Or, hear me out. They're a pre-emptive recon to see how the interior of the Telhian empire is and happened to fall upon the training mages.

Erick Thiemke

There was a doc explaining it. basically, what happens is the aether cost is exponential based on the target's aether existence, and the dimensional space closes with the part he highlighted because his affinity for space is so high. So far the only time he failed was with the Traeliorn whose aether resistance actually beat out his space affinity

Steven

Is that no matter how big his aether pool is? I thought it was simply it took X aether and he only had Y aether. That if he increased his pool he might be able to pull more than one head in a fight. Looks like I’m wrong 😂😂.

Jon

Amen man, this series has so much more going for it! This is the only reason I upgraded

Silver Beard

"I needed to keep Renna remain calm" needs some work. Too many words or not enough

Silver Beard

Zyna will come but the rest will haul ass back to the Campus pissing their robes the whole way.

Erick Thiemke

He has books on spell forms. That is all the tatoos are. The orcs don’t have the right affinity for the effect, so they grind up the right magic affinity essence and make it into a tattoo. Then the orc can release aether into the tattoo and get the effect

william wallace

keep his healing secret. better to be underestimated.

Victor Skaarup

I wonder if memorizing the tattoos (runes) will enable him to use them somehow? I vaguely recall him obtaining a rune or two in the past but could be mistaken.

Erick Thiemke

But thanks for an idea……when he removes the orc head the eyes will move briefly freaking him out

Erick Thiemke

No. Killing a creature always bottoms out his aether

Stephen

Would just removing a 1mm thick slice from the neck use less aether than removing the entire head? It would look like he beheaded them with a sword.

Daniel Hamilton

Guessing it was all a set up to take out him and his mage.

Daniel Hamilton

Wooooo yes!!! I’m guessing the next step is learning how to speak in the ork language, or trying to get a artifact that has to deal with languages

pizzaranger

Fck this hanger. I want more 🤣🤣

jean

why would he wound himself when he gets more epic and better results and respect for coming out more or less without injury than near death and fighting with arrows in him?????

Faa Diallo

Good chapter. Good to see the fruit of Eryks training

Notlimah

Clean up time 1. Essences 2. Spear 3. Loot the orcs, potions, weapons, Do they have any rings or amulets? 4. How many did Renna see 6? might be good to make some of the corpses disappear 9 ->6 to make it more believable but then could get trapped in a lie 5. will the rest of the mages even come they might turn around when faced with an unexpected real threat that killed off the hound trainers Eryk might have to walk back on his own again 6. Bit morbid but bathe the sword in orc blood to make it shine? 7. Self inflicted holes in clothes to make the win seem harder and hide the versatility of his air shield alongside answer of using orcs healing potions to explain healed wounds 8. Keep working on soldiers life over world sphere because we prefer this one 😜

Quasimotolovesbells

Great fight sequence! Nicely done. Sadly, our hard headed MC using his low jacked essence collector outside the dungeon and his storage where it can be magically tracked... I know the war is on, but I don't remember if someone has to be actively looking while he using it outside his storage or if it just records the use on some map somewhere, and the hounds are alerted?

Blorcyn

Yeah it really was. The odds were stacked against him and he still won. Very intense. Very fun read.

william wallace

When you realize erik is actually john wicks dnd character on a murderhobo play through.

Erick Thiemke

They are not the orc elite warrior, but you find that out next chapter. their tattoos are for stealth and camouflage

william wallace

Yeah probably. Just wish he was a little more self protective about some of this secrets.

Rocky Tkacz

I thought of that by the time they come it should be too late and they may not have a collector on them.

william wallace

Kinda worried that using the collector is a mistake. I mean the other mages probably dont have one… but still.

Gwalmeich

Could have been fake tattoo meant to intimidate potential opponents.

Gwalmeich

That's what it must feel like to fight the doom slayer...

william wallace

Theres a part of me that thinks he should put a few arrows in himself and give himself a few cuts to sell the fight a bit to the rest of the legionaries. Also please erik. Dont forget to grab your spear and take the head out of your storage.

1536539

Great action, the fight is amazing, though he should have prepared the smoke bombs and powders before Renna started freezing the lake so that he is ready at the beginning of the fight, i wonder why the orcs didn’t use the tattooed spells on their bodies.

Rocky Tkacz

So good can’t wait to find out what essences he gets!

Eriach

Holy crap!

striderfighter

This was great combat writing

Erick Thiemke

i posted 201 yesterday....my time

1536539

Yay 2 chapters in one day!

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. 4th will probably be Tuesday as I am starting work on World Sphere now. Some of you wanted to see the MC show his gains...this chapter was it. You will find out more about the orcs in the next chapter. Those that guessed the Mage Cashius was involved - the answer is no.


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