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A Soldier's Life - 221 - Aggrevations

🕑 Added 2024-06-29 18:38:56 +0000 UTC

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for the chapters 🙂 he seemed to have fun dragging Savino around town. 📖 🍿

J S

Uh-oh

Steve

It means he people watching him saw him use it which was obviously going to happen because he is dumb and doesn't even think about scrying magic

Robert Biederman

How would anyone no for sure that zyna does not have the dreamscape amulet the assumption would be that she would be the one to be in possession of it being who she is and what the MC's status was assumed to be

Jack Trance

Im confused why Zyna would have coded the message to hide a relatively common, but high demand item like the shield amulet, and then just straight up reveal that Erik has the Dreamscape amulet?

Erick Thiemke

i havent edited it yet, but I remember there being a hint that the seller might be called to serve in the war. he was, and therefore wanted to keep the amulet. as for the funds - i thought i wrote there was a delay in getting them back

Invalid Entry

This bit at the end seems ridiculous. Who is going to realistically Welch on Zyna considering her magical and political power? How did they get the money without turning over the artifact? Why didn’t she simply take it off their corpse after they refused to return the cash or amulet? After all they committed theft and she’s the chancellor and buddies with the emperor, I don’t see anyone complaining. Hope there’s more explanation for this, as is it seems like she’s just lying.

Fortunis

Sounds like another mage needs to die.

Tetsu-nii

Might leave it since it's dialogue, but: /Less things to pack./ => /*Fewer* things …/ The alchemist is, presumably, an educated man and has to be perceived as being educated; but most people aren't so pedantic in their speech. Especially if their conversation partner isn't (or doesn't appear to be) as picky about fine points of grammar.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /only a few to looked to be close to my size/ => /[…] few looked to be …/ You had an extra "to" in there.

Silver Beard

An interesting point. In the Sit down- K was talking about how any Legionaire who took service with a First Citizen was destined to lose their Runic Weapon. Now Eryk's being recruited by some big shot. What's he going to do if the first thing the guys asks is all his dungeon gear? That's not going to happen, so why the build up. RUN for it. Fuck Castille, Antonio, and their BS dreams

Roberto Dias

Uau The amount of mischief that can be accomplished with those potions is ... really fun. Can sow confusion in several ways. Good idea. Love it

Erick Thiemke

it was from the starvation in the shimmering labyrinth. you are right it should have recovered by now

dethrothes

At first I thought earth speak was like a domain he can constantly keep active to always be aware of everything around him, but based on what we saw when he used it I think it’s more like a one shot 3D photograph he gets which he can review rather than keep it active constantly. I hope I’m wrong though, we’ll see.

TheAlreds90

I wanted to ask as I've been rereading the previous chapters after listening to the first audiobook recently. But I wanted to know why MCs perception stat dropped from the first chapters since he took a major essence of perception for killing the Ettin. Shouldn't that have been fortified also wouldn't it have increased with the scout and hound training? Just weird seeing it lower than his starting stat for it. Sorry if this is explained before but just getting past the Ettin chapter again.

Silver Beard

if he can actually acquire the dragon skin boots before leaving town; the trip will have been a huge success imho. If he can use his earthspeak while walking; he won't get screwed over ever again.

JollyRodger

I'd just say it was stolen by someone powerful and keep it hidden. When pressed about it I'd then say how am I to keep such things when so many powerful people want it. I have no less than half a dozen people trailing me constantly. If I still had it, wouldn't they have seen it by now as it was clearly mine. Also, how can I prove who stole it. Why should I advertise that my stuff can be taken. I won't be believed anyway so why say anything when only my death will prove I don't have it.

Silver Beard

My take of this hound training is the Legion is weak, pathetic really. I think running for the hills (Stone Mtn) should be an option. Who will they send to hunt him down that Eryk can't waste? He's already holding back both his strength and his ability. War on 2-3 fronts. I'm sure he'll be missed, but there's nothing they can do about it. Already short of poeple. What the Empire will send a team away (assuming they can even cross the battlefront) into hostile territory to track someone halfway across the world while Empire's reputation is in the toilet everywhere they go? Giving up the amulet is not an option, better a live deserter than a dead Hound. Alone, Eryk might reconnect with Relia who could get him through; no doubt her brother knows- a general could manage any number of outcomes. Egg should have hatched by now...

Erick Thiemke

Remember Some artifacts need to be registered. So Boris and Justin had the Scholarium pressure Zyna to register it. She didn't have it

Scion

I would be upset if the dreamscape amulet disappeared. He put a lot of work into improving it. It's weird that she let it slit that she doesn't have it she could have just ignored the question or whatever. This is surprising.

Erick Thiemke

Ha! Nice catch did that in purpose.…

NightRider

Is the alchemist’s building red or black brick. In the directions given it is red and when he sights it is a black building.

Silver Beard

rofl... enjoy the bed; migth be the last one he sleeps in for a long, long while

Lemes

I thought people finding out that Zyna no longer has the dreamscape amulet was too forced. How could they know that? I only see one possibility if Zyna admitted this, because even if someone searched her quarters she could still say it was stored somewhere else and no one could say she was lying because she has the tattoos on her bones that prevent the magic of truth seekers .

Eriach

“All the recipes in these books?” I indicated the shelf.----"Are the recipes in these books?"

Daniel kanevsky

I'm all for it, they must be truly desperate to accelerate training like that

Andrew

Thank you!

Grant lee merrifield

Woot

Erick Thiemke

2nd or 4 for cycle. I changed a bunch of things and wanted to get opinions of how this minor 'break' chapter works. Probably going to push the entire urban tracking segment through in the next chapter


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