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A Soldier's Life - 222 - Deep Pockets

🕑 Added 2024-07-01 02:44:43 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected I think

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected....how are you marking suggestions now? just the * where it is confusing?

Andrew Crews

I knew I was close to finishing the spell form and silenced *the my manifestations in the dreamscape—with the exception of Oscar who happily sat in my lap. On my third cycle into the dreamscape, I felt the spell lock into place on my core. Relieved, I reviewed *on how to use the spell form before returning to the real world. I stored the amulet and focused. I knew I was close to finishing the spell form and silenced my manifestations in the dreamscape—except for Oscar, who happily sat in my lap. On my third cycle into the dreamscape, I felt the spell lock into place within my core. Relieved, I reviewed how to use the spell form before returning to the real world. After storing the amulet, I focused.

J S

Good stuff.

Apophixas

No time for the ones outside with all the specters.

GoodEnough Name

Seems odd that the summoner wouldn't loot the runic weapons from the 5 or so legionnaires he killed in and outside the dungeon

Space Cadet

I dont know about that. It is useful for other people, but is just a poor copy of his own skill. Most people already know he has a dimensional pocket, any first citizen is going to want the belt. It just adds some extra capacity for tools. If anything it is just putting a bigger target on his back. It is also not subtle to use as his arm disappears into the pouches.

Rayse

Essences might prevent that atrophy. Enough to hand wave the issue away, perhaps.

Jordan A

“Metabolize Essences” When he was reading spell forms with Renna in the first book this spell form was called ‘assimilation’.

Adunn

I feel like theres gotta be some consequences for purifying his poop away instead of just passing it. Like the lack of using those organs are gonna cause them to atrophy. Plus gut health and all that stuff.

Fortunis

Nice. The belt seems incredibly useful.

Ivan Kanewske

He took an empathy essence from the ogre, The way his score went up doesn't make sense

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /came as a sipped on/ => /came as *I* sipped/ (the "on" at the end isn't necessary)

Tetsu-nii

Suggestion/Typo(?): /I turned the pulsed aether/ => /I pulsed aether/ (remove "turned the" — artifact from a previous draft?)

Tetsu-nii

Another typo not too far past the last: /reviewed on how to use/ => /reviewed how to use/ (remove "on")

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /silenced the my manifestations/ => /silenced *the* …/ but only because I think it flows better. Could just as easily go with /silenced *my*/ there, but Mavik's sister really isn't his, IMO.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /Dungeon coins were only uncommon/ => /Dungeon coins were *not* only uncommon/

Erick Thiemke

Void magic makes it disappear forever

Ben Walker

During purify self do the toxins come out of his body (and if it is his first time I imagine some serious toxins will come out) or does the magic make it disappear? Could lead to some interesting situations in the future when people think they have him poisoned or contained and suddenly just get this horrible smell ha (alwa

Erick Thiemke

it was already described - aether compresses the air but yes there is another version of air shield for the air affinity

Lemes

I think there is an error reading the tablet. Like your air affinity is zero? So where does your air shield come from?

yohan gu

I've finally caught up and there is something that bugs me: if the conspirators pretend to want the good of the empire, which seems doubtful, but whatever, or even if they want to profit from the spoils of the coup, they shouldn't want the empire to be overrun by its enemies. Killing their best tool for preserving their country at a time everyone is attacking is odd. They should at least wait for him to wipe the floor with all their enemies, and after the crisis is resolved eliminate him, if that's what they really want to do. It is quite clear that he is harder to kill in the capital, maybe because of some convergene attribute that allows him to draw from the ley lines, so they would want to attack him during his trip, but it is my hope they plan to do it on his way back. Plus this way you also give someone else the chance to do your work in your stead.

yohan gu

Let's see what creatures they were called to quell. Konstantin mentioned the presence of many creatures who used illusion magic to hide in the cities, hope he gets some essence for that. Though I hope he holds off imprinting a spell form for illusion as long has he doesn't have enough for high quality magic.

Erick Thiemke

this chapter or last - just recently

Angus

When did Eryk obtain the purify self spell?

camelDetective

yo these last few chapters have been absolutely bomb. Keep it up, champ!

Jake Sori

Quick caveat - you want to pack the heaviest items last, so that they rest on your upper back, and the lightest items on the bottom. This makes the weight distribute evenly accross your enfire back instead of ot all resting on your hips or your lower spine. Also, when you get items out of your bag, its easier to just pull out the few heavy, big items, then dig through the light stuff until you find what you need, if you put the heavy stuff at the bottom, you have easy access to the light stuff, but whenever you need the heavy stuff you will have to dump your whole pack to get it out....Source - Light Infantry for 8 years

Daniel kanevsky

Someone said speaking languages and understanding people. I think that's more Clairvoyance then Worlds affinity. A lot of these are really clever. Nice job guys!

Erick Thiemke

aether shaping is the size of the brush. as noted, many mages use their hands to trace the patterns in the air while learning to lay out spell forms - pushing aether from their fingertips. however that is a crutch and the dexterity aspect noted is not needed, just the easiest way to learn

Victor Skaarup

I am surprised/ curious why the increase in the MC’s dexterity and coordination, combined with the number of spell forms he has imprinted does not result in an increase in his aether shaping.

Silver Beard

Unfortunately, the empire is more likely to bite him for his kindness. I'm not disagreeing with your statement or Author's approach. Candidly likeable. Warlike culture tends to see kindness and weakness as the same thing. It is never celebrated. Quite the opposite. More likely an act of kindness will see him seriously wounded than any act of brutality in the interest of self-preservation. I wonder if that will be one of Sergio's tests? Hounds live up to the emperor's will not their own. Jeopardizing his mission to save another could be seen as betrayal of the emperor's trust. Suggests the Hound can think for himself which is another mark against him. His goal now is to be less Eryk more stooge. Becoming the Emperor's loyal idiot won't be a fun read. Let's hope for another time skip.

Roberto Dias

Something i like in this novel is the "kindness seeding" The mc goes around doing random acts of selflessness and kindness. Save a horse, ... Buy carrots for silver from a broken farmer.. pay an extra gold for a burnt healer, ... Overpay for the stableboys... OverPay for the bathgirls survive the winter/war/famine & give the twin herbalists company and free workforce ... Give fight lessons, expensive daggers and handaxes, and even a runic sword for his fling and hers two friends (for that he got a little something in return) ... Cover for the clumsy couple in the library... Give magic food, apex essenses and a magic cloack to Zina, .. By the golden rule, some of this kindness has to come around

larback

Not having any more items is very good for him, because he doesn't know how to hide his secrets very well. And he already has the best items, the collector and the amulet of dreams, items that help him become more powerful through training and time. Over time it will become powerful enough to not need to rely so much on other items. He doesn't need more items, in fact he needs to get rid of a lot of useless things he carries with him.

larback

Erik's spells cannot be seen by other people, just like the air shield.

Silver Beard

Wondering though- what do others see when Eryk uses his spell form? He's so private, insolated. Is there any physical manifestation that will give him away? It's the Void- is he shaded in blackness when he purges his body?

Silver Beard

5-6 seconds to overcome poison is more than enough to remove a man's belt. I agree with your comment, but the belt is a cheat Eryk can't afford. He should gift it away or sell it. Zyna owes him big time- Eryk should give it to her... and trade for Essences...

Silver Beard

Eryk is not quite the intellectual you appear to be. Nice math though.

Silver Beard

Admit I'm a little disappointed there wasn't more dungeon loot to be discovered; but it's done. Finally. So looking forward to first idiot who tries to poison him. 5-6 seconds to counter the poison is more than enough to steal his belt. He should really consider gifting it to someone else. Eryk doesn't need a handicap.

Roberto Dias

About surprises Erick can pull from his storage. 16'x16' have a 22'6 diagonal. Enough for a hand crossbow drawn and ready to fire. And it can be 2 inches flat wt a 1,5x1,5 barrel, and roman crossbows doesn't had pistol grip. So Erick can have TWO crossbows stacked inside his publicised space, and use it in openly, for a "not today" moment. And still have a 12x16 space free remaining (and the voids in the 4x16 occupied by the crossbows, has its only the limbs, the barrel, the bolt and the string)

Josiah

If he couldn't access it unless he was wearing it a pickpocket might not be able to access it unless they are wearing it too. Or someone just has to be wearing it to activate it so who knows.

Andrew

Thank you!

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, the belt is very useful for him since he does not need to spend ether to retrieve or insert items, and in a battle more ether for the fight is always a good thing.

Erick Thiemke

No those are correct, empathy went up one and then down one due to his actions with the other pups

Silver Beard

As for stats- some seemed off. I thought he was 44 for Earth?! Empathy seemed pretty low... thought he got an Apex from the Mother/unborn? Two potential and nothing actual is off.

Silver Beard

He's as ready as he'll ever be for the nastiness ahead. I admit I'm not looking forward to Sergious trials of loyalty. Likely have to waste of lot of lives for nothing special other than getting screwed over for the war. Those will be dark chapters. Wondering if he will admit to K about the new boots or his spell form? or Sergious? He should, but he avoided the question with the truth-seeker; that's the big rub. No choice but to be weak and pathetic if he doesn't want to reveal he can beat empire audit.

NightRider

Now Eryk knows the Purify Self works on the paralytic poison, I would like to have him store the poisoned arrows, with the arrow tips pointing up in one of the pouches of the summoner’s belt. A nasty surprise for pickpockets and other curious characters. If Eryk was to accidentally prick himself he can always remove the toxin by using the purify spell form! That is if the arrows will fit in pouch of course!

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. Decided to take care of some plot threads in this chapter. The next chapter will be Tuesday.


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