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World Sphere - 189 - Monumental Task

🕑 Added 2024-07-07 02:28:50 +0000 UTC

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Ivan Kanewske

Remy should leave it up to decide on the price points for the artifacts. This needs reworked Suggest I WILL leave it up to REMY TO decide on the price points for the artifacts.

Ivan Kanewske

The spear, give it a metal core, then you can write runes up and down it,

Ivan Kanewske

A walked into the hallway and Bleiz was leaning against the wall. A to I

Ivan Kanewske

when it comes to siphoning from a dungeon, can destroy one.” Change siphoning to siphon

Manuel de Melo

Storme should come up with a "resale rune" and embed it in all his stuff. If a merchant tries to buy his stuff low and resell it it, the item slags or the runes melt. 😁🤣

Manuel de Melo

The age thing is getting really confusing. At the beginning of the story, there's a monumental effort placed into trying to explain to the reader how humans on the Sphere grow up faster. And Freya was said to be a few years younger than Storme. When we follow Storme and Gareth, by the age of twelve, the story constantly treats them as adults, even though we also get told the age of adulthood is 14. And all the girls are constantly trying to bed them and marry them even before that age. But now, Freya is 12, in charge of a strong merchant empire, and the story treats her still like a child?!? Where are her marriage proposals? She should be the most eligible bachelorette in Skyholme... Either she's a child, and Storme is justified in wanting to "protect his younger sister", in which case the age thing is bs; or she is tragically being plot armored into the role, in which case sure, author privilege, I guess; or she needs to be treated like every other girl in the story. And by that, I mean that Storme needs to let her be her own person and treat her as such.

Jake Sori

What i mean is that this mc has the ability to effect many different people all at once with his skills or magic, and if he can't do it, his money can find a way to do it. The soldiers life mc is so limited.... His skills will only ever effect a few people at once at maximum. He is very much op, don't get me wrong, but the world he is in prevents him from becoming what i would consider to be actually powerful for a litrpg. I'm thinking of things like azarinth healer or legendary mechanic. This mc has a path to that kind of power if he works hard enough, soldiers life mc won't be stronger than a grunt in han xiao's army

Tyler Itri

Really? I feel like this story has been a lot more limited in those aspects, where as in soldiers life he has convergence, time, space, etc. and is using the abilities in a way never seen before.

Jake Sori

After reading up to the current chapters for soldiers life then reading this... I hope this story gets more chapters and soldiers life gets less. This is really good and i enjoyed it a lot, there is also a world here where the mc can get genuinely powerful whereas the soldiers life story has an mc that is too limited

yohan gu

So, they're delving as a team? that's great (as long as they're leaving Freya behind, she's an inexperienced kid with little talent and has no business in a dungeon). I hope we'll slowly get to see lower layers of the dungeon, since they can get rings to go back to a particular level. We have been told what's in the 3rd and 4th layer, but I'm curious about the lower ones. Also, this is a repetition of something I sais on discord and in last chapter's comments, but in chapter 172 (quote from the chapter): She continued talking about the third floor of the dungeon. That was where Maerlyn spent most of her time. Fishing was a big industry on the third level. Her dimensional space was usually filled with blue mackerel to sell to restaurants in the city. The blue mackerel were aether-infused and had the added effect of improving aether recovery for a time after eating. It was only a ten percent improvement but could be paired with other ingredients to enhance the effect further. The fish sold for a whopping five gold per pound; each fish usually had about twenty pounds of fillets. They were hard to catch without specific magic—or a fishing pole. Anyway, I'm excited for the massive artificing.

Erick Thiemke

cant remember exact numbers but their father was 10 goldish a year in Hens Hollow and mother half that. In Aegis City they would make three times as much I guess...so 50 goldish--a year. Freya is making 6,000 gold a year but has to fund her new career as a mage

yohan gu

Freya is getting way too spoiled. She's what? 12? Making 500 times what her parents were making at the start of the story without even working, since she won't in Skyholme for the month. The courtesy contract Storme gave her should be rethought. Also, she's annoyingly arrogant, good on Bleiz for taking her down a peg.

Silver Beard

Your contact says is supposed to be Your "Contract"? Thanks for sharing

Erick Thiemke

last weeks chapter. hopefully this weeks chapter on Monday. working on Town Builder now


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