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Soldier - 226 - Conscientious Assassin

🕑 Added 2024-07-08 01:35:13 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

thanks, corrected on the master

Justin Barnett

I didn’t have enough aether to store as well “Store her as well”?

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected - damn I even missed this on my read/edit

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Brianna Stormcloud

It took me a moment to recall *the coins **that would prevent the dead from rising. It was also symbolic of paying for passage for the ferryman on the River Styx.  *That not the **Remove 'that' Thanks 📖🍿happy that Eryk didn't kill them regardless of the possible consequences.

Andrew Crews

“Show me that Marius and Clara * still alive, and I will do whatever you ask of me,” she said pleadingly. “Show me that Marius and Clara are still alive, and I will do whatever you ask of me,” she said pleadingly.

Andrew Crews

Only the wealthy could afford to bury their *did, and by the freshly churned earth marking recent burials, it had not been a good winter for them. Only the wealthy could afford to bury their dead, and by the freshly churned earth marking recent burials, it had not been a good winter for them.

Andrew Crews

The last thing I wanted was to be sent there in * center of an inevitable battle. The last thing I wanted was to be sent there in the center of an inevitable battle.

J S

Very messy!

Kevin O'Malley

Depending on how gap space is handled it n the stage, less than that.

Kevin O'Malley

Homophone alert. Grizzly is a bear, a corpse can be -grisly - horrific or disgusting.

Erick Thiemke

Moving objects takes less aether and doesn’t require opening the dimensional space. That is why he can retrieve the collector much quicker than reset of his dimensional kill ability. Back in book 1 it took two hours before he could use his dimensional kill again. With all his gains, it is down to 30 minutes …prob 15 minutes if he is wearing the channeling ring. We did the math a few months go

Styx

After moving the mother to the bedroom he makes a glow stone disappear, despite him saying it would take half an hour for him to recover his aether. Seems like a mistake.

Jeff Hughes

This merchant had done well for himself, he was definitely a beauty. "She"

Jeff Hughes

Only the wealthy could afford to bury their did, and by the freshly churned earth marking recent burials, it had not been a good winter for them. Dead

Fortunis

But it's not a switch. He burned three freshly dead bodies and nobody who's against him knows his storage is actually massive. He's also not planning on releasing them for a while. The father's grief will be genuine.

Manuel de Melo

First rule of life - Never assume you are smarter than anyone else... Does Eryk really think an Empire's secret service hounds can be fooled with a switcheroo? 🤔😔

Victor Skaarup

Woman and two children would need (6x5x4) 90 cubic feet. He has over 1,100 cubic feet.

Erick Thiemke

no blood to track if they are charred corpses

Win Rar

Depends if they are going to use the blood tracking to confirm they truly are dead

striderfighter

"bury their did"

Erick Thiemke

did a read edit, hopefully better now. i need to write when I am not as tired and give myself a chance to do a read edit...prob not going to happen though

Erick Thiemke

fixed

Erick Thiemke

i may have caused a writing headache with this but it makes sense. if you have ever used a metal detector on a virgin site there is a crap ton of silver coins around

Erick Thiemke

he cleaned it up and it also expanded with the space essence

Erick Thiemke

fixed

Erick Thiemke

fixed

BubblyGhost

His space isn't 'that' big with all the shit he keeps putting in there.

Bq

My general assumption, based on all the previous descriptions, is that circumventing a truth spell is pretty much impossible (unheard of). This leads the Empire to be pretty reliant on that spell which is apparently also heavily used in legal proceedings. Unless he is caught in a blatant lie (i.e. I am the king of Denmark) he should have nothing to worry about A quick questioning by the Centurion (Did you kill the kids?) should this be enough to remove any doubts by the Empire.

Blorcyn

My hope is that necromancy requires some usable structures (for example if you chopped the legs off they couldn’t walk). Hopefully, although the corpses aren’t breathing, it will have burned away the fat and muscles of the neck that are needed to talk. If I was Eryk (weirdly for a magical world, I’m glad as fuck I’m not) I might have stabbed the corpses to evidence killing wounds, through the neck. I’d also have considered the possibility this was a plant, a test victim who was in on it. A loyalty test guarded by a hound or something.

Silver Beard

Any corpse would have worked; it's the necromancy he has to worry about. Not likely to come up in this situation, but it's always a possibility. Eryk has a lot to protect, told a lot of lies, and is in enemy territory now.

Daniel kanevsky

You're right, the mission was a failure and his new boss won't be happy, but to be honest a trial is only a secondary objective. This does send the message to others that would test the emperor. Not that it matters to Eryk, since it shows "his lack of training" from being a half trained pup

yohan gu

Saving the kids while making it appear they died: great. I wonder what he'd have done had he not found a graveyard. I also hope he facilitated the house personnel's escape, they might get trapped in the fire or suffocate because of the smoke. The problem I see is his task was to kill the kids, not kill the kids, the wife and burn the house. Not sure this zeal will earn him points: what is the implication was that the wife had to stay alive?

yohan gu

True. I think the hope is the Hounds will just check if the targets are dead and the city will not run an enquiry, or doesn't have access to a necromancer, or a necromancer can't do anything with charred bones. As for the time reversal, I'm pretty sure this spell is etremely rare.

JollyRodger

Or that view time reversal spell. That'd be a great big pain in the ass to explain.

Angus

Great chapter 👍

dethrothes

Other than some typos this was a well written chapter. We can see and feel his dilemma quite clearly.

Quasimotolovesbells

TYFTC, although I think you may need to add "don't" or "don't use a necromancer" somewhere in the last sentence. Now it seems to read that you want them to use a necromancer on the corpses he left, and I think that would be, no bueno.

Ben Walker

Epic treasure hunting! Palm it off to some collector and pick up some goods! How often can he go around now and just collect coins as part of his recon.

Silver Beard

totally screwed up I know- but if he could keep his wife in storage. Never truly separated, always there when he needs her, she doesn't age, and never worries in stasis, and there'll always be more exotic places. Eryk's not the kind to settle anywhere. His space is big enough. He could/should start collecting a team that he can always have with him. He's going to live for 4500 years.

Silver Beard

Epic failure for a first mission though. Centurian wanted the Father to rush home to his bereaved wife; but with all 3 'dead' he'll remain outside the Empire's judgment. Holding the wife is a problem for me tbh; she'll be a serious pain in the ass eventually. When will he release them- 3-4 years? The Husband will take a new wife thinking she's dead and Eryk will get stuck with her. At least she's a beauty? Or was that planned! lol

Silver Beard

wager a 3rd is taken up for the family; does present more options though for an exit. I want to laugh out loud at how Eryk keeps connecting with folks outside the Empire.

BubblyGhost

You can never return to the Empire, and (or) your lives and mine will be forfeited.

MrGroxy

Probably a flacon - falcon

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, he made the best out of a bad situation, it was a pretty nice chapter. Though a significant portion of his space is occupied for the foreseeable future.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

3rd of four for the cycle. Town Builder is coming next. Not sure if this chapter is a stretch or not.


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