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A Soldier's Life - 212 - Plans Within Plans, Zyna POV

🕑 Added 2024-06-12 02:24:32 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

It should be decades thanks. I hope it is right in the book

OJCOPACABANA

Not sure if it's a typo "Zyna had owned very few artifacts over the centuries." She could easily have been lying previously about being 80-something, and maybe this is a reveal that she's actually centuries old. I'm not sure though so I thought I should bring it up

Chaz Baz

She's a great character.

Erick Thiemke

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Brianna Stormcloud

Zyna *prepared to her apartments after another meeting for the city’s defense. *retired or returned Love the background story on Zyna!

Andrew Crews

As they traveled across the Empire *moved across the Empire, Taurus’ father passed, and his estate was seized by the Duke of the province for taxes owed. As they traveled across the Empire, Taurus’ father passed, and his estate was seized by the Duke of the province for unpaid taxes.

J S

Turns out she burned the wrong one, haha.

Alexander Belousov

"to seek pleasure for their men" --> "to seek pleasure from their men", presumably?

Erick Thiemke

how so? perception is in the eye of the beholder and sometimes people see things things the way they want to see them

Adunn

The way Zyna describes Eryk is not at all how he comes across.

Tom

time to let the whole capital burn, start over fresh. Too corrupt. Antonia's head gonna end up in a dimensional storage, taken out for just long enough to see all her ambitions fail.

Michael Salamon

What is the other story you mentioned at the top? I thought the same thing but couldn't remember which story.

Deadmoo53

MC too suspicious - should've given Zyna a good time. In other news, a fun fact! In the wake of Commodus's assassination in 193 AD, the Praetorian Guard set up an acting Emperor, killed that acting Emperor, then auctioned off the Empire to another guy, who they then killed just a couple months later after not getting the money promised. Bottom line the Praetorians definitely had a habit of playing kingmaker in Ancient Rome during turbulent times.

Fortunis

Awesome. I really like her.

Unwired Rob

:) nice end.

BrycenBeans

Best girl on god

ImYou

Zyna mvp

Moatdog

They already had a blood sample from when he became a Legionarie. They only take an extra for the nobles and mages, ur ahead of me but the hounds shouldn’t have to take another from what I understand.

Tetsu-nii

Umm … Typos: /let everything think all legionnaires … cursed abyssal/ => /let *everyone* think … cursed *by/with* abyssal/

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /Zyna cursed Eryk for putting her in a position to lie to him./ => /[…] lie *for* him./

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /his men, in a failed sortie/ => /his men in a failed sortie/ (omit comma)

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /seek pleasure for their men/ => /seek pleasure *from* their men/

Karnnie

Another story that I follow, the MC likes to say that he puts very little trust into institutions but instead prefers to place his trust in people. This is a great example of how a good person has been turned by loss and yet is still a good person and chose to protect a good MC because of his personality and demeanor towards her. Really well done.

BlaueFeder

I now believe that Zyna would have made the better lover by a long shot. Can't beat a proper MILF imo...

Jo

This was a great pov, it's good to see some depth to other characters. And to get some insight to what's being plotted

DheeAreBi

I don't often love the POV chapters but this gave some great insight into Zyna's motivations, brought her character into better focus, and was very artfully done.

Daniel kanevsky

Wait but won't the hounds take a blood sample from him anyway? So they will still be able to track him? Or is that what Antonia wanted it for?

Roberto Dias

About powders/pellets: Can't he make one with the ingredients bought on the adventure guild. For ninja infiltration...

Daniel kanevsky

Can't wait for eryks hound arc, normal training is 7 months, but his will be accelerated. I guess he'll never complete a non accelerated training course again lmao

visigoth

Atonia is a fool. Brilliant, but still a fool

Daniel Hamilton

Three may keep a secret, if two of them are dead." –Benjamin Franklin.

jean

it would take 2 years to get the mages blood and as mentioned the replacement for the emperor is the duke and his rule will be short meaning the moments the current emperor dies the new take his mantle and when the blood is destroyed or compromised the mages can book it and give the empire the finger so im guessing octavian is the short replacement until the archive of blood is destroyed then he dies to >P

jean

right antonia piss of the walking flamethrower and expect not to get burned or lose her support great idea .....

Jake Sori

Question: mc was looking at something like two years in the hounds before he's placed in the archives, is that the case? Because if they are gunna move on the emperor while he's away from the palace, they will have to delay him A LOT

Jake Sori

This interlude really thickens the plot and shows it's exactly what to expect in the near future, i like it!

Andrew

Thank you!

I forgot my name

I dont know if you’d care to do this but I would recommend sprinkling Zyna’s background throughout the time Eryk and her spend time together, so when it comes to this scene of Antonia asking for the blood it becomes a lot more impactful. Also you don’t need to fully describe her inner thoughts. Just her contemplation at first and then her pulling out the cloth with blood is good enough leave it to the reader’s interpretation even more. Just my opinions tho

1536539

Well Zyna turned out to be a big softie.

Thaabit Rivertree

Wow.... good chapter! I'm glad she gave the pigs blood and not Eryks. Something tells me it would be more convenient for him to die after all this, by Antonia's view.

Da Worst John

Who's you thinking for the next POV options? Maybe one for the dungeon goblin?

Erick Thiemke

i am surprised no one is harping on the fact the Empire doesnt have the MCs blood and he thinks they do. Not hard to get as Zyna demonstrated but still he could run and not be tracked. Second half of the book 4 will go into how it works

Faa Diallo

Let's go. this was a really good chapter. really showed the human side of Zyna and her motivations

Erick Thiemke

corrected, thanks

Erick Thiemke

it was that their deaths were pointless and could have been prevented

Jeff Kollada

So is Zyna against the empire/emperor because her family died while serving? That seems like a weak reason to turn traitor. Or, is it in the way they died?

Mitchell

Way to go Zyna! I knew you had it in ya

Xonian

Slight mistake: “The loss of Nila was it for her” Mila*

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4 for next cycle a day early. The politics part is finally over and back to the MC being a soldier/Hound. The end of book 4 is the clusterfuck of the plot so I will ask for whose POV you want of that in July


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