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Chapter 214: A Day in the Life of a Pup

🕑 Added 2024-06-16 03:34:18 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Brianna Stormcloud

Oh boy fun! Another truth seeker who knows Eryk if only peripherally

Anel Alic

I’d love to see him with the greatsword

Dar-Angol

Right,the beach running..

J S

Ooooh

Fortunis

10 silver says he ended up a freaking goblin king somewhere.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /Now the Hounds of Empire are fabled/ => /[…] Hounds of *the* Empire …/

Irene Al

Lol. What happened to that goblin?

Mark Corwin

"The Eye if the Tiger" plays in background

Roberto Dias

That book Zina put over the reading table about harvesting in dungeons. Does it teach how to harvest spider venon, paralitic centipede spit, and others toxic ingredients?

Erick Thiemke

i added the pause in the last chapter with the sentry asking someone behind him

Erick Thiemke

He can use them more effectively I guess. You need to wait for the residuals of a potion to be metabolized before taking another potion. He can eliminate these residuals and take another potion of another type immediately

Erick Thiemke

So when someone unlocks an affinity it unlocks at 1 even if it is a minor affinity essence. For the MC it unlocks higher making the changes to his core/body painful. The more essences he takes the less effective they are. Also the closer he gets to 100, the slower. but yes he can pass 100

Blorcyn

He might get an eyeful then.

jean

hey from what i have understood with essence for eryk is that the first time increase his cap but give less to increase his cap until only a apex essence can increase his cap but he will always get alot more out of any essence no matter what aka a 1+ at least but maybe not a cap increase or am i wrong?

1536539

Thank you for the chapter Can he still use potions if he imprinted purify self?

Blorcyn

[Cozy,” I muttered. The. The walls had a thin layer of salt, probably from violent storms getting salt water through the tiny window over the centuries.] Double The. [I mediated using the exercises Castile had taught me, but my focus was on the spell form for purify self.] Mediated -> meditated.

Blorcyn

[I pointed behind me. “They should be along shortly. Can I come in and get some water?” I held up my empty canteen. “No. You can wait for Centurian Cornelius if you are truly one of the new litter of pups.” He then disappeared over the wall. I shook my head, filled my canteen from my dimensional space, and waited on a rock sipping cold blood orange juice.] I haven't finished the chapter yet, but reading the first lines, I went back to check what happened when he got to the fort in the last chapter. I think it'd be hilarious if you had a pause here where the guard checks with someone first, before he denies Eryk entrance. I checked because I thought it was hilarious and wanted to see if it was there. If it becomes clear in retrospect that the guard has checked with Konstantin and Kon has left himside for the drama/to be a shit, that'd be hilarious and it's a really easy edit.

Jairic

Hope he schools everyone and surprises konstantin in the sparing and he notices eryk having to hold back some

Erick Thiemke

There is an event coming that will cut it short …about three months

Otto Kovar

Well it is mostly a throwback to the Legion-Training, just on another scale and intensity. I do agree a bit more detail would be nice, but I do not mind it greatly as it is stated that many tasks are repetitive and MC is supposed to act a loner, so there is little interaction. Also Eryk has been consuming many essences before and is reaping many times their benefit, and occaisonally even raising his potential from the minor essences, so he is probably ahead of anyone present in the camp, even Konstantin And you are not wrong about it reading like a summary, but that is a theme about this book, it is like a journal, and sometimes you just make collective statements as the details get lost.

william wallace

This is a bit nitpicky but much of this seems very ‘flat’ I guess? Lots of passive voice. I get that this is basically the start of a training montage and it will probably flow better when I can read several chapters back to back but this chapter really feels like it needs something. The plot and direction seem fine its reading almost like an outline, particularly the bit about questions at the end. Wish I was better able to describe my issue here. Sorry.

Andrew

Thank you!

Aiden Wilker

How long will his training be in world time?

Eriach

Tftc

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. Not sure how fast I am going to go through the Hound training. You can assume he is taking essences every night as part of his routine. I will probably add something in there about him using earth speak in his room to see its improved range and get an idea what his fellows are doing


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