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A Soldier's Life - 215 -

🕑 Added 2024-06-18 05:28:46 +0000 UTC

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Sean Kauffman

“Truthseeker Yanis. It is me, but now I am Hound Eryk now.” -> “Truthseeker Yanis. It is me, but I am Hound Eryk now.”

Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for another excellent chapter, a title suggestion: Truth is often painful. He patted me on the shoulder once. None of the other Hounds were present so the outpouring of affection went unnoticed. This made me laugh! 🤣🤣🤣

Robert Biederman

There is no such thing as infallibility which is why when the polygraph is used the one doing so will always start out with questions that are known to be false to test the system and the individual being questioned

Robert Biederman

There is a word missing in this sentence here the sentence reads and we handed a pack here the word were is missing

J S

Ooh, good stuff.

Erick Thiemke

call me the grinch. but it is a web serial so every chapter is meant to have a tiny cliff

jordicl

THAT CLIFF WAS MEAN!!!

Firstname Lastname

Not being able to disable the bone etchings in an incredible weakness and it really really stretches the suspension of disbelief. Modern polygraphs (even though they essentially don’t work) start with a test truth and lie to attempt to “calibrate” the machine. If the Empire is aware of magic that defeats Truthseekers there is exactly 0 reason they don’t start every interview with the same.

Ivan Kanewske

With his current character, hunting magicians would be dark for him, slow grind with the occasional mage, shaman, or what have you mixed in a group, and the high end monster for those essences, maybe come across a duke's stash ect for a boon of apex essences, They never went far enough in the haunted elven city, there is still a kings treasure to plunder, could be a bunch of essences there as well

Wyatt

The truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth. Haha

Erick Thiemke

before the end of the book, yes. not sure when it is going to happen but he has the tablet reader

camelDetective

They need a compass-compass. The most skilled navigators use compasses to plan out their routes by their degrees off north. It's a must-have for navigating long distances off a map in the wild. . Maybe a manticore-wing tarp to make their shelters rainproof. It's pretty compact. And it could be tied on the outside of the backpack when travelling to rainproof it. You might not realize how much it sucks to have literally nothing dry available to you. Come to think of it, you should probably note somewhere that the jacket and leggings are waterproof.

Zurko

supposition->superstition

Daniel kanevsky

Would it be possible to get a status update on the characters stats, around the time he finishes his hound training? I feel like he's really coming into his own during this training and it would be nice to see his hard work paying off

Erick Thiemke

Centaurs taste good

Erick Thiemke

Essences return less the more you take and the closer he get to 100 but he can surpass 100

Erick Thiemke

Thanks for the question. Chapter 190 has the description of the spell form. His earth affinity is currently 38 so that about 12 yards or 36 feet. In a dungeon with small cells on both sides of a corridor it should be enough to see most of them

Samuel McCarren

Dessert>desert tftc

TKC iCorey

Since Eryk can live more than 20,000 years, I think that for the future it would be good for him to gather essences of magical affinity, for example clairvoyance, it would be interesting that when a person has more than 100 in clairvoyance and has the form of a seeker's spell of the truth, nothing can evade the spell, not even the runic signature on the bones

TKC iCorey

Imagine a not too distant future, about 200 chapters or more, eryk with all or almost all of his physical statistics around 100, with a blow stronger than Maveith

TKC iCorey

and with this I caught up with the story... it feels good, but also bad because I have to wait for another chapter :(

TKC iCorey

I love this story, I would love to see Eryk hunting magicians to take away their magical essences, hopefully there will be essences from "Aether Reserve" - ​​"Aether Channeling" and the most difficult to get "Aether Modeling"

Caledon Smith

You stated that Eyrk ground vision extends 25 feet and should be 30-35 feet now that he has used all the earth essence. The thing is, the way you describe him using it makes it seem like your describing yards or meters and not feet. 30 feet is just 10 yards and that’s not all that far, certainly not far enough to be spying on all the other recruits in their rooms. Just a thought that you might want to change it, or better, remove all hard distance like feet from it and just say that he can discern an area around him that will increase the higher his affinity goes. That way you won’t ever have to worry about distance.

1536539

There is no reason for him to declare any new spell forms, and his natural inclination is to try and hide stuff, since he is so young and fit, no one would suspect him for not showing signs of aging for at least another decade.

1536539

Thank you for the chapter.

Silver Beard

Oh- jump on that Eryk, put Konstantin down.. finally!

Silver Beard

Mixed feelings: Eryk should have owned up to more of his spell forms and put them on record: slow aging in particular. He has the capacity to beat it; but why push his luck so soon? I don't want him to be next emperor; but I'll happily give Antonia an ulcer or three and then some... the conniving Bitch.

Aiden Wilker

Oh almost forgot. Excellent chapter!!!

Aiden Wilker

If I may ask. I noticed in the first book that you stated that the first people to come over as the first legion lived to 1500 years old. If this is true does that mean their minds did not degrade like natives would over time? So would Eryk not have to worry about losing his mind?

Eriach

Tftc!

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4 for cycle. Dont get excited - I am going to do a read edit when I wake up. I added 300 words to chapter 214 yesterday as well. Edited on 6/18 at noon - added about 350 words. Also taking suggestions for chapter title and additional gear I should add for the Hounds


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