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A Soldier's Life - 216 - William Tell

🕑 Added 2024-06-20 01:08:28 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Robert Biederman

This is how the MC should be I never really liked when he was in the tranny circles training against the imperial legionnaires it didn't match with all the essences and all that extra training he's been doing while asleep using the necklace you could see that he wasn't holding back and yet even the least capable was mentioned as being faster and stronger than him here in this scene he was more true to form it matches up with everything else that he has been doing behind the scenes out of sight

Space Cadet

Erik was supposed to isolate himself from the others, and he made himself a hero. Emotions take over when you least want them too!

Alexander Belousov

"You will not be changed to replenish your stock" --> "You will not be charged to replenish your stock", presumably?

J S

Hmmm. Wouldn't he like to know.

daniel dantas

Mc has taken away so much that it's hard to tell what he wants to know

daniel dantas

this is definitely one of the highlights of this work, the feeling of progress is intoxicating, how everything is so close to reality and we literally see point by point him improving, everything seems so realistic, natural and satisfying, good job author( ps: we just need to find a rune bow that can create magic arrows and we'll have eryk more deadly than ever)

Jordan A

“Means nothing if he can’t hit a target, a moving target during a fight,” Remove ‘a target,’

Jordan A

“You will not be changed to replenish your stock.” Changed -> charged

PatronTurtle

He's using the true-shot during training? That's pretty bad

Ivan Kanewske

Most Hounds will exchange the light quiver for the larger 17 the first chance they get. I suggest you do the same. You will not be changed to replenish your stock.” Should be You will not be charged to replenish your stock Not changed

SodaBoBomb

Hmm. First I would like to say that overall I like how he fights. That said his style is all over the place. Didn't he start out most comfortable dual wielding? Why hasn't he been training that? None of his swords are so long or heavy that he wouldn't be able to do it.

Moatdog

They’re the Dai li

Tetsu-nii

Typo: Missing the closing quotation mark after /foot left as well./ Probably should break the paragraph there as well.

Daniel kanevsky

I think that this only applies to the pups training. He needs to be their drill sergeant, which means he needs to have authority over the pups. Period. That said, outside of training, I don't think he's antagonistic to eryk.

Vitor Rocha

I've always seen Dogs more as henchmen of the first citizens. The defining element is loyalty to hunt others. It's more of a kind of secret police, not an army.

Blorcyn

Idk. I get what you’re saying but.. Konstantin killed Flavius (or the other guy) who was almost on to Eryk because it threatened their plans. He’s fond of Eryk and he’s committed to the cause. So I think he’s both earned a little trust and we also do r want him coming to wrong conclusions and think Eryk is a liability to the mission. Or that there’s ‘witnesses’ that he needs to kill for Eryk, which are both possibilities.

Caledon Smith

I agree, I know the author said he didn’t want to go into detail about the others but their portrayal makes the hounds come off as just a regular scout group instead of an elite boogie men organization.

striderfighter

I have a comment about this whole pup training in general.... Like these guys are supposed to be the special ops group of the entire empire correct?... The special ops don't take normal soldiers, these would be the best soldiers of the best soldiers and all of them should be able to shoot a bow...should have dirty tricks fighting the sword, they should be capable... I'm not saying our hero can't be better, but I get the feeling of like these are like regular troops not the cream of the crop.

Silver Beard

Eryk is growing stronger, yeah? All the essences he takes with his spell forms. It was only a matter of time before he grew beyond Konstanstin... but the problem is that K can't handle losing to Eryk. period, ever. Sore loser

Silver Beard

Konstantin is pinging him for the essences he took; he's not an idiot and it's clear Eryk's attributes are growing at an accelerated rate, but he doesn't know about his Aether confluence spell form... so he's got to assume Eryk's been hogging 10x the essence anyone else could possibly have or an artifact...which he doesn't have.

Roberto Dias

Konstantin is Erik true friend, second only to Maveith: killed Flavius to protect Erik secrets. Did not told Antonia about him. Spent a lot of time training him. In scouting, gathering, patroling, hunting, fighting, ... lots of teaching and mentorship... lots of personal investment. The guy deserve some credit. And is kind of dumb to show perfect marksmanship after that poor showing in the archery test in Macha. Too good to be true... Became obvious he is using some enhancement... Good plot twist.

Silver Beard

Reread the duel and my earlier statement speaks louder than ever. Konstantin is on the wane and is desperate for some dirt to use on Eryk.

Silver Beard

As for the cliffhanger: don't say anything. Konstantin isn't his friend he's the Master here. Don't give him anything. Tell him he hasn't seen anything Eryk hasn't won in 'honorable' combat yet. And if something comes up...there always do you 'expect others to fight fair'?! When Konstantin had the upper hand he could be counted upon; but now Eryk is growing beyond him his authority is in question- he's looking for other dirt to maintain his dominance. Don't give him anything.

visigoth

Return of the Elf princess ranger!

Andrew

Thank you!

TKC iCorey

I think Konstantin has gained a certain amount of trust, he didn't report a couple of things to Antonia, so she reproached him for that, so yes, regardless of whether he serves Antonia, Konstantin knows how to keep secrets.

Erick Thiemke

100 paces is about 250 feet I think. 30 inches to a pace

Otto Kovar

If Eryk does decide to come clean, or rather if he decides to get some secrets of his chest, I think Maiveth and Konstantin are the only ones worthy of Eryks honesty. Eryk would then ask to go on a stroll maybe, asking Konstantin for complete privacy and to not reveal anything to Antonia. And then just... talk. Konstantin asking questions, Eryk explaining, maybe even some banter about the precarious situations Eryk had been in. All in a banterous manner maybe, so they truly bond. Something like "Well the wyvern rushed in to swallow me. I took a chunk of its brain out, with my space. That killed it, but the body was already in motion crashing into me. I flew several feet through the air, passing out when I hit the ground. When I woke I was all broken bones and limp unable to move. Took lots of aether to heal back up. And then after all that, I cleaned my self at the stream and Maveith found me. The rest is history. I did think about just leaving. But I did feel... guilt at leaving the company behind. What can I say, that band of idiots grew on me, rather quickly actually." I do not know your plan for their relationship, but I always felt that Eryk wants to confide in Konstantin but felt hesitant due to Antonia, but Konstantins character would suggest if Eryk asked to keep a secret or two Konstantin by now would comply with his request. He did seem very suspicious after uniting in the labyrinth but that was understandable, all seeming so incredible only two people conquering so many rooms of the dungeon. At least thats what I think I want. TFC

Daniel kanevsky

Anyone else on the fence about the MC learning archery so quickly? Even with dexterity, strength, etc, being able to hit a moving target 200 yards out with wind picking up 13 times in a row, no test arrow? After 5 mimutes of training? Idk man.

Erick Thiemke

It is a good point. Konstantin would know their spell forms but they might be hiding some. I edited in that the MC reviewed the list I the dreamscape in the last chapter already. Maybe I will change this to after everyone is off to their cells he talks to the MC

Notlimah

Wonder why Konstantin is annoyed and questioning him where others might overhear if they have the spell form for it which we still don’t know because he hasn’t checked the list yet in his dreamscape

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4 for cycle


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