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A Soldier's Life - 230 - Old Acquaintances

🕑 Added 2024-07-15 03:32:51 +0000 UTC

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Battleborn

"A knew it was trying to get em to run, so it could take me down from behind. " I and me fix. Should be, "I knew it was trying to get me to run, so it could take me down from behind."

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thank you 📖🍿

Andrew Crews

There are * many things that give me trouble.” He nuzzled me affectionately, recognizing me as the alpha predator. There are not many things that give me trouble.” He nuzzled me affectionately, recognizing me as the alpha predator.

Jordan

“There are many things that give me trouble.” Are -> are not

Tetsu-nii

Capitalization: /head to Empires that were/ should be *empires* unless it's a realm named "Empires", which would just be odd.

momo2009

roll not role

yohan gu

@lemes It turns out their are indeed traitors, but anyway. Eryk is a hound. His personal sentiment towards the empire, that is unclear, does not matter much. These are legitimate targets, he can do his job. (I insist on the legitimacy of the targets, it’s not just a “I was only following orders” situation, the orders were legitimate, contrary to the kids-killing ones). As for the description of the Empire: Imperialist is anachronistic and, how would it be relevant anyway? It’s shown to have a relatively high level of corruption indeed, but that seems to be limited to the games of the highest sphere, he just was unlucky enough to have too remarkable a profile. But again, how is that relevant? Finally for the violence: nothing particular, but, again, specifically the highest spheres seem to be brutal. This should only spur himself to adapt himself to his context.

Broke Boy

You should add links for the next chapter for a easier read. I’ve seen it on other books I’m reading

Silver Beard

Beauracracies aren't that efficient. Look at our of RL government! He will need to keep the Mage for years. Same as the kids from before. His space is huge, but it's not infinite. At some point he's going to have to kill someone he'd prefer to save.

striderfighter

trip into a role...

Caledon Smith

Most likely either A) Eyrk keeps her alive and let’s her go later and makes her an ally to fight stage newly installed emperor. Or less likely B) Eyrk keeps her and kills her later for water essence. Given the author, I’m rather sure he will go with option A.

Erick Thiemke

no there is a list of their trademarks online. i have had to scrub a lot of monsters from stories that are...displacer beasts, mind flayers, beholders, ect...

Karnnie

They are not.

Da Worst John

So silly question, aren't Owlbears trademarked by Wizards of the Coast?

momo2009

if he had been ruthless since the beginning then kill all 3 would make sense, but so far their been no life altering event to make him become more cold and hard. He has army buddies, he has a lover, an milf friend, a backup escape location in an Elf and M friend. Life has been good and he hasn't suffered anything to make him do thing against his current characterization. The only mistake was sleeping with the servant and that changed him into not having relationship with people he cant trust. So unless he lose an arm or one of his buddies dies in front of him due to him not being ruthless enough, the mc shouldn't change.

momo2009

I like it. He shown to do naive things but it is a part of his character. If he had killed the mage in battle is one thing but since he store her which will removed the tracking of the blood compass, the hound leader can't prove that he save her. The MC isn't ruthless and act with moral from earth, which make the story more endearing to the reader. Seeing as how the future is the mc fleeing and the story is a "soldier life" him getting more people for his mercenary group is a must.

Lemes

I don't understand this reasoning that seems to assume that if Erick doesn't kill her he will be condemning himself in some way. He only needs to keep her in his dimensional space for a day or two until the centurion Sergios checks his blood compass and determines her death for sure. After that she would be free to leave the empire. Erick will also be leaving very soon. I doubt it will be long before the conspirators are forced to act against the emperor. When this happens, regardless of the success of the conspiracy, he will no longer have any reason to remain tied to the empire. Today he has the resources and knowledge necessary for his escape.

Lemes

I don't see it that way. She is a talented mage and a noble by birth. She would hardly live the life of a peasant in the Kingdom she is trying to escape to. She is probably carrying resources (money and jewelry), and wherever she goes there must be something prepared for her. Nobres has contacts and resources. Surely she must have something planned to guarantee her livelihood.

Silver Beard

I'm honestly confused by all this anger and frustration over a few deaths to achieve his goal of freedom?! A small price to pay given the era he lives in. | You'd rather him become wall fodder for the wars just to hold his head up and he's decapitated and say "at least he was honorable"... ????

Silver Beard

@Lemes agreed with most of what you had to say; but the life of the mage is forfeit. There is no way a privileged woman, and a mage who can cast true spells, will live the life of a peasant. At the mercy of all her betters?! That's not going to happen no matter what she promises, begs, etc. She has to die; and Eryk has to do it.

Silver Beard

I'm hoping he will rewrite it- mage dead, spear user bleeding out. If he opts to spare the staff wielder that's on him. That should be enough for the Centurian. Loot and collect the essence and haul ass before whatever predator forced the owlbear out comes looking.

Lemes

Well, none of these people that the hounds want the MC to kill are "enemies of their country". He is a foreigner who resents being forced to serve a highly corrupt and violent imperialist power. I don't think he has any sense of loyalty to the empire. He's killed a lot of people before, but it was always in combat and out of necessity. The personality that the author created and has been developing to date is that of a tough and pragmatic man, who does not hesitate to kill other men to survive, and not that of a murderer who kills anyone just to stay in the good graces of his superiors.

yohan gu

It is not setting up to have him kill the mage, now she is in his space he will most likely spare her. I don't want him to become a cold blooded killer either, but killing the enemies of your country is quite typically a soldier thing, not a gangster thing. As far as I'm concerned, in this fantasy world I relax my irl moral code and so: it's a traitor or an enemy? they are fighting on the opposing side of the mc? they're fair game. So, if you were referring to the mc going out to do his duty in hunting this mage as "being a gangster thing" and unbecoming for the MC, I'll have to disagree.

yohan gu

Should be "Don't attack, Selene!", but it's Helena. She's telling the mage not to attack Eryk, she doesn't know she has just been taken in storage.

Lemes

There would be no point in having the body burned if they wanted it to carry some proof of death. It would make more sense if they asked Erick to take his head if they needed proof. Most likely, when the body is burned, the target's blood will no longer be registered by the blood compass, and this will make the centurion Sergios certain of his death. Erick would not need to keep her indefinitely in his dimensional space, just the time necessary for his superior to give him orders to return to his guard post, which would prove that he was convinced of the water mage's death. As for not wanting the MC to become a cold-blooded killer, it's because that would go against everything he's demonstrated about his personality so far. He is tough and kills whenever his life is at risk during combat, but he has never killed anyone who did not pose a threat to his life. It would be a very drastic change in behavior and personality if he went around killing anyone he was ordered to kill.

Caledon Smith

I disagree, but you have to keep in mind that the story has set up ways to tell if he has killed the person he has been set to kill. The family was able to be saved due to them not being overly important and not having their blood on file. The first citizen mage though does have her blood on file and they can use it to see if she’s alive. Eyrk’s space prevents them from tracking so it will appear she is dead. The problem is they requested her body to be burned which means he has to turn in a body which they can check to verify if it’s her with speak to dead, the blood compass or some other unseen means. The empire has been hunting people like this for thousands of years so they have a system to verify if the person is actually dead. They are not just going to trust the word of a hound as he could be misinformed, thought he killed the person but it was an illusion, doppelgänger, he could have his memory altered so he thinks he did and so forth. We have been shown that the empire is run rather competently even if some of their abilities are exaggerated. Eyrk saving every person he is assigned to kill risks him endangering himself and all his loved ones that are part of the coop. Anyway, I’ve typed enough, I like that Eyrk cares and wants to save thoughts that he can, but it looses meaning if he just saves everyone all the time, because MC reasons.

Lemes

I don't like the idea of ​​the MC becoming a cold-blooded killer. It's okay to have to kill in combat, you have to prioritize your own survival. Going out killing just because you are ordered to is a gangster thing. This excuse that he enlisted is not justified. He didn't enlist, he was forced to enlist. So far all the deaths he has caused have been in combat. I hope it stays that way, otherwise I'd better change the name of the story to "The Life of a Gangster".

Erick Thiemke

it is changed to Track and kill the traitor. (singular) but of course it was implied the legionnaires should be killed too

Erick Thiemke

thanks - i will correct the text in chapter 229

Victor Skaarup

Who is saying “Don’t attack Selene”? The flow is awkward

theend

I think Silver Beard or Karnnie have some good arguments. Eryk knew what the Hound's are doing. He cannot always protect and save his targets. That he managed that with the children and mother is already good enough. Eryk seems a bit careless with showing off. He cannot know when he is being watched. How often did Castile find out one of his secrets with her All-Seeing-Eye? There could be easily another Hound keeping an eye on him right know. I also assume that this Hound Arc is there to force Eryk to do things he despises. It makes him feel guilty, but it also toughens him up.

yohan gu

first few cchapters, in the legion training camp. She's the woman who taught him to fight with a staff. She was not reallly a friend, but her companionship was the best thing he had at the time, apart from the healer's tutelage.

Jairic

I liked it. Seems like there is more to the situation than just hunting down a mage. I dont see why he wouldnt use an opportunity to get more information even if be does kill them in the end. He is already in a conspiracy to remove the emperor and has disregarded orders from the current hound group already.

Silver Beard

Brings up an interesting question- what drove the owl-bear from it's hibernation? It wasn't the ladies... another Pathfinder group?? Eric might have a lot less time than he thinks for the BS. if there's another apex predator around this fight will attract it

Silver Beard

He didn't consume it. Since he burned his channels his acquisition of essence has become 'an event'. He's hunting- he doesn't have the time to 'enjoy' it.

Silver Beard

@Prinny Knight Situation absolutely sucks; but it's the gig he signed up for. He was a conscript with 4+ years to go. Now he's a Hound and if things work out he might be free in 2-3 years or less. Eryk already called them a crime syndicate... are you really that surprised that he's been asked to do shit he wouldn't otherwise? He saved the kids which should be a win big enough to ignore what he's got to do now.

Karnnie

I used the collector when my aether recovered, getting a major power essence. Did he consume this essence or store it for later? (Note takers need to know) The shards shattered in the rocks, echoing like shattering glass in the night. The shards shattered on the rocks, echoing like shattering glass in the night. After I killed the mage, I would give her the chance to run. I had not been ordered to kill the legionnaires after all, just the mage. “A First Citizen has betrayed the Empire. She is being protected by two legionnaires. Hound Hercule will bring you a blood sample of the First Citizen. Track and kill all three. ” (Chapter 229, Paragraph 27.) That looks like an order to me. Anyone else?

Karnnie

Personally, I would reverse it. Make the other person, the staff wielder run through the smoke, blinded and not holding her breath so that she is paralyzed and out of the fight. Then I would have him use the Runic spear and face off against Helena, that way he can at least get a good sense of her fighting prowess before killing her (unless you have plans for her in the future, in that case incapacitate her). Then he can add a copy to the dreamscape for practice. After the two guards are taken out, he can fight the mage. He should not place her in his storage space, he should kill her or incapacitate her with the mage bane blade, question her and then kill her. He cannot continue to keep his hands clean. You can be a good guy and still have to do bad things. He is conscripted, disregarding orders is a fast way to be executed or just outright killed. Perhaps bing in castile's company made him think that he had more freedom than he actually does, that should be corrected post haste. It adds both realism to his situation and gives motivation for killing Sergio when making his escape.

Korviz

Nice call back with Helena

Karnnie

Not when given orders by your acting commander it isnt.

Silver Beard

Am a little curious what she has on her that might be incriminating to the Empire. Another storage device? Definitely looking forward to taking that armor amulet.

Prinny Knight

Abit blood thirsty. Diplomacy is always the primary goal when available.

Silver Beard

No chit chat; and don't take the whole mage into his space... heart or brain would be enough. Shit, even both feet via his connection with the earth would be enough in this weather. Get this ugly business done and get back to the watch site. Talking is just going to make what he has to do all that much worse. Hunting women is already ugly; why make Eryk suffer more? End them and move on. Isn't he haunted already?

Caledon Smith

If you do I would like to see Eyrk engage with Helena exchanging blows before disarming her. Doesn’t have to be much, but would make it more believable. As is she thinks her friend is dead and is asking the mage to not kill the murderer. For someone fleeing the empire knowing what that will entail, it seems a little to heavy handed. Add some more to the fight, show that her trying even though she’s blinded before having to give in and listen to the hound as she has no other recourse, could even have her tell the mage to flee instead of just not attacking the hound. Just some thoughts, enjoyed the read keep it up.

BubblyGhost

Damn, if only I remembered who that was

1536539

I remember someone called it on Helena being there.

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, great fight!, it’s getting crowded in there.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. So just getting impressions for this encounter and may rewrite.


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