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A Soldier's Life - 232 - No Rest for the Wicked

🕑 Added 2024-07-20 15:07:48 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

At the top of chapter release notes

GioAnime Sensei

Where can i find the discord server link?

Erick Thiemke

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corrected both

Erick Thiemke

rewrote this mess, hopefully clearer now

Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks 📖🍿

Andrew Crews

I threw my dagger at him to slow him, not expecting it to kill him as it thudded into his chest and *hacked at the * downed orc who tried to roll away. I threw my dagger at him to slow him, not expecting it to kill him as it thudded into his chest and I hacked at the other downed orc who tried to roll away.

J S

Dang!

Jonathan Gleeson

and moved it to slay the horror. and moved in to slay the horror. He was shouldn’t be able to see into my dark crevice. He shouldn't be able to see into my dark crevice.

Trevayne

I think he goofed. If he really wanted the essence, he could have just put the orc in storage and killed it later on when he had time and privacy. Eryk goofed. I think making occasional mistakes makes for a more realistic character.

Walead Abdelhalim

I assume since he's affecting another being with a spell meant for objects, any interaction with it toggles their full resistance. Since his aether pool is still mid 20's it always drains it

Robert Biederman

What the f*** is up with this continuously bottoming out his Ather that's just dumb it should be based on volume and weight of what it is that he takes into his dimensional space it sounds like what you're saying is he even if he would take off a fingernail or hair from a body part it would bottom out his Ather which is just fracking stupid

Jordan

Short clips of the orc language rang out in the night as I worked the arrow out and used purify self to cleanse the poison before healing the world. World -> wound

Johan Timmers

I am wondering why cant he just put something in his enemy body like posion instead of removing parts should that not cost less mana to do .

Sean Kauffman

I don't understand the below. Doesn't taking the head or entire body both cost the same? So could have taken home alive and just popped him out and killed/collect him later. "With the aether collector generating strong aetheric blue light, I couldn’t risk using it. I could wait for my aether to replenish and take the entire body, but right now I was hoping to escape unnoticed."

Tetsu-nii

Punctuation: /archer—once I got a little aether…/ Em-dash not appropriate there. I'd recommend changing to ellipses and replacing the ellipses at the end with a period.

momo2009

or the girl he had a crush on.

momo2009

He need to try to collect the essence, it always seem so wasteful when he doesn't. Or like the other say take the whole body and ask for information instead of just taking the head. Great fight scene. more please

Erick Thiemke

I will try to edit it better. He was taking a path to get away with only having to face one opponent. I edit in that Pathfinder was 'above him' had his back to a stone face as well, so no sneaking up on him. Quick silent kill and then run... but he was still spotted

Karnnie

At thee cost of his defensive magic if discovered. The Mc needs to start thinking tactically and smartly, he has a small aether pool, he needs to think about options and by removing the head he removes one of his biggest defensive trump cards.

striderfighter

were a welcome site.... should be sight

Caledon Smith

First, it’s a world with magic so you can not bring in RW expectations. Second, not everyone mental trauma the same. There are people that prefer to be alone, those that can handle it but prefer people, those that can’t handle it but are fine when introduced back into society, and those that just break. Our MC has shown that he falls into the 2nd group where he prefers to have people to talk to and can function just fine without them. I fail to see how in this story you would jump to the conclusion that because the MC is talking to himself, a normal human function for processing information and problem solving, is going crazy and needs to be killed off.

Caledon Smith

I’d rather he not just run into her, into people that know of her, sure, but not directly into her.

yohan gu

Agreed for the stealth aspect and the essence collection possibility. But at least this way he has a dead-friend-decapitated-head jumpscare, which can be fun (for the desensitized reader)

yohan gu

Not a fan of the complications that would bring

Juarez Tavares

Eric tem de seguir endurecendo, se não ele não poderia sobreviver neste tipo de mundo

Jon

I can understand that. Maybe he can say something a little cooler next time or have some reflection on the need to hear himself speak no matter how cheesy it is.

Caledon Smith

To armchair general a little, why would Eyrk only take the orcs head into his space? If it’s going to bottom out his mana why not take the whole orc so he can interrogate and then kill him later. Least that way he could at worst get the essence. I know we are saying he’s low on space, but based off the descriptions of the things in his space and the size of it he has enough room for an orc. Given he wanted to get away unseen at the time, a missing orc from its post is less alarming than a headless orc at its post. Just my first thoughts. Thank you for the chapter

Erick Thiemke

I was drawing on Castaway with Tom Hanks. The more time alone, the more you talk just to be heard even if it is to Wilson

Jon

Idk about the trash talk. It seems a little childish, plus he doesn’t really do it in general so why start now especially with a monster that can’t understand him? Personally it seems more realistic if he is thinking this stuff than just saying it out loud. If he was trying to distract the opponent or provoke them then I can maybe understand them talking during the fight. But the trash talk during the fight with the ant lion is a little lame in my opinion. Calling it ugly or asking it out loud why won’t it die I Think is a little cliche and not like our cool clear headed MC. Still loved the chapter and the story though, just this instance I felt could’ve been improved.

Silver Beard

Makes you wonder- all those glorious likes and replies that want him to keep true and narrow... did they really want Eryk to live to die (and the for the story to die) right now? [There are the fiction rankings; and you are climbing; perhaps your potential pissed someone off. It's not just wanna-be's you need to guard against for other authors!]

Silver Beard

"Any aether" you meant? Those are meant for close up and personal. A quick assassination; and he truly doesn't know the extent of their runes so it would be reckless gamble

Silver Beard

That would be epic and unfortunate. She'd be a broken memory of what she was.

Silver Beard

Now that his life is in danger and needs a distraction- release all his captive in storage and move on. Surely no different than the goblin- let them serve a purpose and allow him to escape. Let fate decide their future. If he loses- they'd get expelled anyway, right? No life is more important than his own.

Erick Thiemke

but rather than risk getting that close, he can remove the head from 15 feet away

Silver Beard

Thanks for sharing; as liked above- it was a great chapter.

Lemes

It's Sunday! 😂

1536539

Does he have any myconic powder in his belt? Blinding the orcs and masking his scent at night would give him a great advantage, if he had the spores in his belt it wouldn’t cost him any aether to pull them out right?

Karnnie

Rather than risk an alarm, I got behind him and took his head, bottoming out my aether, but improved my odds of leaving unnoticed. A Garrote is an assassins weapon meant for quick and silent killing, making quick work of enemies by cutting into the skin easily and cutting through the windpipe immediately if enough strength is used. With adrenaline pumping through his veins, Eryk would probably use more strength than needed and just about cut to the bone within a second if he used it. It would also show use of his training in action from the Hounds which I think the readers would like to see.

1536539

Damn you Cliff!! Than k you for the chapter.

Daniel kanevsky

Awesome chapter, can't wait for the orcs to find out 😂

Daniel kanevsky

Is Sundya maveth's sister?

Sam

"He was shouldn’t be able to see into my dark crevice" he shouldn't

Erick Thiemke

You are thinking of konstantins blade. The orcbane isn't as addictive

Lemes

I have a feeling we might soon meet the lost sister of a certain goliath!

JollyRodger

Killing invading, slaver scum orcs and feeding orcbane is definitely a boss move. Bet he is being influenced by the sword. It does need to be fed orc blood after all to restore its power.

Quasimotolovesbells

Great chapter... but a personal question, after all the rewrites your perfectionist tendencies required of you... on a scale of 1 - 10, how much did you enjoy posting a combat cliff hanger chapter? :)

Angus

Thanks for the chapter!

Thresher

Great chapter. I wonder if orcbane will try and influence him to kill more orcs. Or maybe it already has.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

1st of 3 for cycle. Just 3 chapters this week. Paperback and Hardcover for Book 2 are finished and available on Amazon. Next chapter is Sundya and tonight is World Sphere


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