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World Sphere - 195 - Shifter POV

🕑 Added 2024-09-01 00:21:24 +0000 UTC

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Oguz Kilcan

This was unbelievably unsatisfying!!

Russell French

Gotta agree. This chapter was extremely off putting.

fulli Jelly

Nah. Too annoyed right now... I'll drop this book. At least the soldiers life is still a banger.

Anthony Dupuis

I agree with just about every one here, this tower was teased for so long and this is what happens when it’s opened? All the books the adamantine, the essences. Gone just like that. What a huge disappointment.

Wallaby Vonwise

Oof, not my favorite chapter. Wolfguard and Sana really dropped the ball on this, especially after all the assurances. I kept expecting it to have been a clever trap since Sana had mentioned the tower was a possible target last chapter and the shifter was so arrogant, setting the queen back to up the ante later when she figured out he got caught. I wasn't expecting them to just be completely unprepared and the tower unsecured, no guards on the door even. Oh well, on to the next chapter!

Erick Thiemke

in the edit when I get to it, I will have the shifter kill a pair of Wolfsguard...

IURY TAIA

Yeah. Me too. They know they have a room with secrets that are beyond imagination and it's pretty much unprotected. Makes everyone involved seem incredibly incompetent. Not the vibe I got from Sana or the Wolfgards.

BloodStorm

I’m going to be honest I’m really disappointed in this chapter and couldn’t finish. It. The setbacks were bigger than the reveal after all this build up. Like what happened to the guards? I’ve binged here after the book 1 audiobook release and loved this story,the world building and the characters but I’m beyond disappointed after this

Ivan Kanewske

tossing the gnome of the horn Of to off

Ivan Kanewske

He opened it eagerly to find a runic controls and no aether crystal Remove the a

Ivan Kanewske

The shift rolled away and turned it hands back into remorhaz claws Shift to shifter

Ivan Kanewske

dust moving to fill the feet prints he was leaving behind. Feet to few

Ivan Kanewske

vortex. It was a poor duplication of the machines unused to Unused to used

Ivan Kanewske

“Errol, that old ox? He still owes me a drink,” the gnome tapped hands tapped anxiously in a poor attempt at acting Second tapped to together Add a his “Errol, that old ox? He still owes me a drink,” the gnome tapped his hands together anxiously in a poor attempt at acting

Ivan Kanewske

He morphed his body in a black squirrel In to into

Ivan Kanewske

He licked his teeth, remembering how she had treated him when their brood had This is not complete

Athena Jagger

Not even into the disappointment of the reveal. It seems very likely that anything useful he could get from it is noted by the shifter or taken by the shifter.

Athena Jagger

so the gnome which was watched 24/7 with multiple guards just so happened to not have any guards when he went back in? What? Why?

michele 00

You were not too 'harsh' this author is a complete disappointment.

MJ

It really does not make sense that the gnome is watched 100% all the time until right now? When the door is almost open?

Zadar Thule

Breaking into the floor was not that important. He could have delayed the break in for a month without a problem. The thief was after all unable to break the lock. Surely Storme could have constructed a drain himself.

Zadar Thule

I actually expected the shifter to break in. Opening the floor with a powerful shifter on the island was beyond risky. Without the drain array the shifter would not have even inspected the tower. No guards on the door to the 5th floor and no watchers on the thief is stupid.

Zadar Thule

Yeah, he had 10 watchers. Even with guard shifts someone should be always there. Storme has ~50 guards at the tower. Where is everyone?

Josh Turple

Kinda crazy build up for this how unfortunate. I can't see the gnome being without his guards though and what happened to people supposed to be watching the place

Mark Corwin

Biggest let down. I mean seriously unsatisfying. I can't believe I reas this whole thing.

Invalid Entry

Yeah, pretty heavy bullshit. Waiting and waiting for Storme to open the tower and maybe finally get the power up he needed and instead the shifter just happens to stumble on it at the perfect time and steal all the best items and the stupid gnome just fucking deletes the best books by dying with them in his inventory. Like being a kid and waiting days or weeks to open your presents under the tree then on Christmas morning just as you’re unwrapping the best one the author comes along, takes a big fat shit on it, then stomps it to pieces while giggling.

Patrik Rosén

Agreed.

Tuck

Man this is super unsatisfying after all that buildup. -5/10. I’m not opposed to there being setbacks, I think they’re needed, but this one left a really bad taste in my mouth I didn’t even finish reading the chapter. Hopefully there’s some retribution at some point

C. Dias

I probably dropped it

EsZeus

I most likely will stop now. Bingedy and this is just the last tip of the iceberg of failures (characters). The MC is too dumb for my taste. All he does all the time is throwing around money. Playing hero. Giving up everything for everybody. And everyone can play with him as they want. I am so sad, really. I binged the whole story from chapter 1 up to now. And now I leave with such a massive bad taste in my mouth, I am more than sad right now. And we better don't talk about the massive grammar issues the story has. Grammarly is the biggest and worst thing an author can use. Hopefully it's not too harsh. 🫠😅

Erick Thiemke

he get needs to catch the shitter (i mean shifter) before it gets away

Erick Thiemke

Also of note...the Shifter's sense of danger was those people rushing to the tower to find the gnome who disappeared

Erick Thiemke

it was probably a storage device and not a spell like Storme. Maybe a ring or bag like Sana has. In the belly of the beast now

Silver Beard

So breaking into the tower was ultimately for nothing since Storme is off doing something else. Sounds like a great recipe to shit can the Islands as the tower was the only thing that really tied him down.

M van Dongen

LMAO. This is what you get for abandoning your most important project. Storme is an ass

Jack

hell yeah

Steven Savage

I could be wrong but the gnome's dimensional space should empty out to the physical world when he dies, right? So nothing he stole should be gone. Just the good stuff that the Shifter took.

Liam Andrews

He was trapped in here with no only one way out. —> remove the no

Liam Andrews

He licked his teeth, remembering how she had treated him when their brood had —— You left this sentence open In this first sentence I think the word for can be removed, given its indicated he is talking to Sana a few sentences later. —— “I don’t want to wait for Sana. I can have the door open after a long rest.” “It is not your tower Toblin and you are being well compensated. Storme will return in two weeks. Go enjoy some frost mead in Aegis City. Annallee and Lycia are teaching at the Delve Academy there,” the woman named Sana said.

Erick Thiemke

He was being watched and was at the Shiny Platinum but the sneaky little guy teleported himself back to his array…

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, man the shifter is really lucky.

Roxanne

I thought the gnome was on surveillance 24/7. So he gets the vault ready to open and you quite watching him? Doesn't make sense to me. Two guards walk by the castle every half hour. And nobody is guarding the vault or house inside. Sounds like anyone could've just walked in.

Win Rar

Dang did all the books get lost too?

Erick Thiemke

ok I still owe a World Sphere from last week and this week (so two behind). I am going to finish the Town Builder chapter next (it is at 800 words right now), but I will have a World Sphere tomorrow


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