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A Soldiers Life - 259 - Elven Customs

🕑 Added 2024-09-07 03:43:35 +0000 UTC

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Marnie

Hammock Definitions from Oxford Languages · Learn more noun a bed made of canvas or of rope mesh and suspended by cords at the ends, used as garden furniture or on board a ship. Bunk Definitions from Oxford Languages /bəNGk/ noun: bunk; plural noun: bunks a narrow shelflike bed, typically one of two or more arranged one on top of the other. Berth Dictionary Definitions from Oxford Languages noun: berth; plural noun: berths 2. a fixed bed or bunk on a ship, train, or other means of transport.

Marnie

Are these hammocks fabric or netting? I feel like they should be netting, but that's not consistent with laying swords on them (earlier chapter) or how the are snuggling or so hot with the blankets. Maybe the captain should have a bunk? Larger than anyone else?

Kevin O'Malley

Possible edit: Your adventurer’s medallion?” He held out his hand, and I pretended to retrieve [it from] my belt.

Erick Thiemke

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think i fixed this

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Erick Thiemke

no. he travled on sailing ships when he left and befriended a goblin sailor in the text

Jonathan Gleeson

Wasn't Maveith a sailor when he travelled from stone mountain island to the Telhian Empire? I think something about that should be mentioned.

Richard Thorn

Aesop mentioned

Richard Thorn

Were (where) the old elf...

Richard Thorn

Had to endure and (an) hour of questioning

Richard Thorn

Purified but (by) some ancient...

Andrew Crews

He was the finest cook I served * on a ship, and his stuffed crab cabbage will be missed. Whatever god rules, * the sea will now be blessed with his services.” He was the finest cook I ever served with on a ship, and his stuffed crab cabbage will be missed. Whatever god rules the sea will now be blessed with his services.

Robert Gzivna

Typo: … rung of sustenance should be ring if sustenance

Silver Beard

It's the reliability of the chapters that keeps me loyal. Given to a lot of authors last 5 years, and for one reason or another they all burnt out. As long as the author can keep going- I'll support him.

Silver Beard

he cooked for Zyna; wondering why he didn't make any attempt for the crew? Pretty sure he could have done better than trail food.

Bananaboat

I keep telling myself that I need to get off seraphim but the cliffhangers like this keep me here lol

Tom

Excellent story! I read a ton of WNs, but I can't remember another one that still kept my attention after 250 chapters. Normally they die off after 150 or so, and then it's just milking it or rehashing old plotlines, but yours still has so much more actual story to go, not just McGuffins that are tacked on, but legitimate plot threads we still want answered. You did a great job on the characterizations--that's what really kept me reading. You seem to understand that it's the characters that make the story entertaining, not the numbers going brrrr or the fights, which is where so many others get repetitive. That latter's only good until the MC becomes strong.

Jordan

Another random question. Will Eryk have more magic items identified in the eleven cities or duchy?

momo2009

Making Mavieth used other magic elements essence to learn some other magic to help Eryk rescues his sister and girl crush would make sense. Erykah can't carried Mavieth the entire time in a fight.

Jordan

Random question/thought. Are there plans to get Maveith armor and/or a shield? He’s a good friend who Eryk really cares about, but he’s constantly getting wounded in combat.

Win Rar

The truth seeker will be interviewing different people. People that came with him know things he might want to lie about. If the truth seeker talks to them they will find out that he is lying.

Tetsu-nii

Well, he's wearing the belt, so if the old elf had a way of detecting artifacts lying would've been counterproductive.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: Unnecessary "the" in /we approached the Sanco./ … also later in /One thing about the Sanco/ unless "Sanco" means something beyond the city's name?

Otto Kovar

Well, he did thats the problem... The Truthseeker was prob. suspicious of him forgetting his belt, or something like that and now they want to simply validate his claims. If he forgot the belt, what else did he forget?

Thresher

Plot :(

Kbzzy

Can’t he just lie to truthseers because of his bone tattoos? Why tell them anything?

Eriach

Tftc

Asadbek Abduxoshimov

It feels like this chapter shorter than others

Chachi

hopefully he can trick the elves when he clears his storage.

Andrew

Thank you!

Liam Andrews

Maveith and I had to endure and hour of questions And —> an I guessed he ‘accidentally’ removed his rung of sustenance again. Rung —> ring

Silfir

Ty for the chapter

Thresher

I was slightly worried Dee would try and steal his ring or something. Or possibly snitch to the elves about his storage, since they were conversing in a language Eryk didn’t know. Hopefully he can make it through customs fine. I will be thoroughly disappointed if some of his artifacts get confiscated or he is forced to sell them as a sort of nerf for the plot. Especially if it’s the essence collector or the dreamscape amulet. Thanks for the chapter. Very excited for all the world building!

saber

Oh man I didn't think it was gonna be that soon! Now I am looking forward to it!

Erick Thiemke

Yeah, should be quick. Portal to Grand Duchy of Manch....three or four chapters there as he unloads the passengers and Castile show up. Then swing back to Artira....and then you get what you want

saber

I just ment were in elvish lands now.

Erick Thiemke

not Raelly....so what i did there. He is going to Gramney first and on the way back he encounters her. But she might get a POV chapter before that...we will see.

saber

Closer and closer we get to getting to see raelia again

Erick Thiemke

2nd of four for the cycle. Next up is Town Builder tomorrow. So, this chapter title was supposed to throw you off. I was having trouble thinking how in-depth a fantasy customs office would be for foreigners entering their country. In the end, I went with my experience in Ecuador.


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