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A Soldier's Life - 234 - Threads of Hope

🕑 Added 2024-07-24 01:38:53 +0000 UTC

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Amon

“Pathfinders chased me and *I have delayed me. I will be there in a few hours.“ * remove the “I”

Erick Thiemke

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Andrew Crews

The other three joined them, nervous at my appearance, and the first one said something in the orc tongue *I sounded like French to me. The other three joined them, nervous at my appearance, and the first one said something in the orc tongue that sounded like French to me.

Andrew Crews

As they got closer, I could see a large anklet on each of them, clicking against rocks as *the climbed. As they got closer, I could see a large anklet on each of them, clicking against rocks as they climbed.

Jack Trance

EXISTING: The elves took Comporjo, and they will could threaten Caranhagan soon. NEW: The elves took Comporjo, and they'll likely threaten Caranhagan soon.

Erick Thiemke

I move two chapters every Wednesday to book 4 from the drafted chapters folder. The Seraphim tier people was started a year ago and was a way for readers to make me write faster. I add 4 chapters a week for Solider for them

PhantomCarnival

I'm currently in the kitchen sink tier, is subscribing to the seraphim tier the only way to keep reading the story after this chapter?

Dar-Angol

Great book

Jordan

“The elves took Comporjo, and they will could threaten Caranhagan soon.” Either the ‘will’ or ‘could’ needs to be removed.

Erick Thiemke

think the first 'as' should be cut

Ivan Kanewske

Are all the Pathfinders as dead, as dead as the one on the beach?” The as dead, as dead Is that to add to the fact both are speaking another language and not well, or a mistake??

Ivan Kanewske

and the first one said something in the orc tongue I sounded like French to me. I responded calmly in Telhian, no weapons I sounded should be It sounded

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /they will could threaten Caranhagan soon/ delete either "will" or "could".

yohan gu

Ah, love it

Erick Thiemke

No, it is an inside joke. From a long time ago and my friends and I playing Shadowrun and running into a French Orc Samuari….let’s just say as the GM I don’t do French accents well

yohan gu

Is orcish French? That would hint at the orcs actually being way more cultured and refined that we would be lead to expect.

yohan gu

Absolutely, would have been a great throwback and payoff

Erick Thiemke

No he just took the bear essence a day ago

Karnnie

From the tattooed Pathfinders, I managed to collect only four essences, as it had been some time since this encounter started I was lucky to get anything. Two minor perception essences, a major strength, and one minor coordination. Did he consume any of these essences? readers NEED to know

Thresher

Damn that would have been awesome. But I guess we’ll have to wait until he gets to Stone Mountain island for that

Tyler Itri

Damn that’s true

jonah suer

Thanks, nice Chapter, would have been nice if he showed the goliaths the pouch Marveith made for him as proof of trust

Caledon Smith

Enjoyed the chapter, this part of the story is enjoyable so don’t overly rush it :-)

Jon

Thank you! I love this series

NightRider

Could Eryk learn to speak goliath in the dreamscape amulet from Maveith’s sister Zorana? She was created from Maveith’s imagination and should have a complete vocabulary of the language.

Andrew

Thank you!

David Weller

There's no telling where things are gonna go... I love it when everything is in flux.

Thresher

Thanks for the chapter.

1536539

Thank you for the chapter.

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 3 for cycle. Next cycle will have four. I meant to rewrite the last chapter but got tight on time. World Sphere is being worked on now. Hope to finish in the next few hours.


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