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A Soldier Life - 235 - Muddied Waters

🕑 Added 2024-07-26 00:06:23 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

it needs to sound friendly

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected all

Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for the chapter! Lucius or Quintus are my suggestions 📖🍿

J S

Ouch!

Jack Trance

Aesop was talkative for Hound --Aesop was talkative for a Hound “Were you parents from the Telhian Empire then?” -- “Were your parents from the Telhian Empire then?” We waited for a quarter an hour -- We waited for a quarter of an hour Perhaps the Centurions need to be more open-minded and let more foreigners into or ranks like you.” -- Perhaps the Centurions need to be more open-minded and let more foreigners like you into our ranks.” “I will take a watch and get two hours of sleep.” -- “I will take the watch, you've got two hours to sleep.” EXISTING: We continued our flight south, and Aesop chuckled after a few miles, “That was exhilarating. We can start to angle back to Kraken Bay and slow down.” He asked as we moved silently among the trees angling west. NEW: We continued our flight south, and after a few miles Aesop finally spoke up “That was exhilarating" he chuckled, "We can start to angle back to Kraken Bay and slow down.” True to his word we continued slowly and silently among the trees, angling west.

Robert Biederman

This chapter was outstanding there were no errors that I could find

PatronTurtle

That also makes them a better leader. Being charismatic is being likable and his father isn't likable at all in his actions. Someone who is charismatic knows enough about how people work to know how to change their behavior to get their goals and influence the person positively

Abdullah Abdulhameed

Nah charismatic people are far more dangerous than any other cuz they make u lower ur guard around them.

PatronTurtle

Aesop seems like a way better person than his father. Or a better actor at least

Fortunis

Smart move snaking a skin and blood sample. I like it.

ImYou

Thats such an op ability how do u even fight that?

Jazmine Gladney

Maybe names like Timotheus, Tyris, Avitus, Cassius, Titus? Also, great chapter!

Silver Beard

But chances are good he will need to be eliminated when Eryk hits the Archive which will be soon.

JollyRodger

Most of the Roman like names I can think of are always alphabet busters. Like Gaius Julius Caesar, everyone has this huge important name. My gut though says everyone also had a nickname they used in life. Only busting out the full name for something important. Big declarations. Cassius Marcellus is just gangsta if you need a name. That character needs to be harder than woodpecker lips though. The real life guy was the most lethal dualist in the north before the American Civil War. He killed more slavery supporters in duals than Colonel Sanders killed chickens. Check out the fat electrician video on him. It's great.

Karnnie

I like Marc. or a more time period acurate name Marcus. Or Titus. For some reason Those are the names that come to mind when I read his parts.

Karnnie

Aesop was talkative for Hound as he remained a few steps behind me. Aesop was talkative for a Hound as he remained a few steps behind me. He started in front on me but I was not going to deal with his odor so moved ahead of him. He started in front of me but I was not going to deal with his odor so moved ahead of him. “That was exhilarating. We can start to angle back to Kraken Bay and slow down.” He asked as we moved silently among the trees angling west. “That was exhilarating. We can start to angle back to Kraken Bay and slow down.” He stated as we moved silently among the trees angling west. “The Hounds have been taking on unqualified men the last few years. Perhaps the Centurions need to be more open-minded and let more foreigners into or ranks like you.” “The Hounds have been taking on unqualified men the last few years. Perhaps the Centurions need to be more open-minded and let more foreigners into our ranks, like you.”

Erick Thiemke

maybe in book 5 when he is in the Boutan Caliphate as the orcs have more honor than the Telhians (at least they are not openly backstabbing each other for power). right now the FUBAR coming is kind of set in stone to facilitate the MCs departure from the Empire....reached that 'point of no return' in the writing

Caledon Smith

Thank you, you have made a point that has been bothering me. Over the past couple of books, the main drawback has been that the villains are simply portrayed as bad because they do bad things. I would love to see the story develop more charismatic villains whose goals conflict with the main character's. Dynamic villains should strive to achieve good or great things from their own perspective. For example, consider characters who are deeply loyal to the Empire and work tirelessly to see it grow and flourish, yet clash with the main character, who desires the freedom to leave. These villains are doing what they believe is right, but their actions are at odds with the main character's goals. It's a nuanced concept that I'm struggling to convey succinctly, but I believe it could add a lot of depth to the story.

Lemes

Aesop is Greek. I think a Roman name would make more sense for this hounds since he is the son of a nobleman in a society based on ancient Rome. Aesop was very strange.

Lemes

I have no doubt that the emperor must be a monster when he uses his void spell, but I imagine that the elves must have some very powerful wizards too. They have life expectancies of over a thousand years and it would be strange if they didn't have at least a few wizards who could stand up to the emperor. There is also the fact that the more powerful the spell, the greater the ether expenditure. I think that for us to have a well-balanced plot, the emperor's power cannot be excessively off scale.

Angus

Thanks for the chapter!

Noah

I like Aesops character, good chapter

yohan gu

Affinty scales like Affinity = A0 + 10*ln(spell power). (spell power [the scaling characteristics of the spell] increases exponentially with affinity). This means that if you want a spell to be 1000 times stronger, you just need 100 more affinity. I don't remember what banishment spells were discussed, but if there is any that is just decent at ~80 affinity, it would become totally busted long before reaching 200. Ultimately it all depends on how much essence the Emperor could get and how effective it was. In any case, the Emperor destroying entire armies by himself has been discussed since Macha, so it is consistent with prior lore. As for the enemies: the emperor is the empire's security guarantee. He can singlehandedly destroy armies, but in doing so he exposes himself and, if he died, the Empire would lose its protector. In most cases the calculus of risks to the Empire is in favor of the Emperor not intervening. Now that everyone is attacking, the hope they have is to overwhelm him. He cannot be everywhere at the same time and the more he does, the more he risks dying. Their strategy hinges on - either the Emperor not coming to the front - or him going to face another army first and eventually perishing (orcs, Bartiradians and elves are not allied that we know of).

TKC iCorey

It could also be called "Corvus" it sounds like both a hero and a villain.

Rhys Jones

You could use the Roman way, and the first son is after the father and he could have a nick name untill then?

Thresher

I knew a guy named Alsop and every time I read Aesops’s name I just pronounce it Alsop in my head cause they sound so similar. I’ll suggest Alsop. Thanks for the chapter.

Lemes

Yes, I can imagine a lot of things that these spells can do. The issue I'm questioning is that the elves had hundreds of years to plan and prepare to face this power. It's not possible that they would risk invading the empire and knowing about the emperor's power without having some countermeasure prepared. It would be a testament to their stupidity. But my question remains, what would be the area of ​​coverage of their powers? 100 square meters? Two hundred? A thousand? Well, I imagine that for something like a thousand square meters of coverage, the emperor would have to have something close to 200 in his void affinity.

Knightfire

Instead of Aesop try Vorenus. Lucius Varenus was a Roman centurion written about by Caesar

Erick Thiemke

there was a something about void magic when he learned his spell form for it. void magic overcomes resistences easier. you can also read the names of those higher tier void spell forms and imagine what they could do

Erick Thiemke

Definitely get her books 1 and 2 for Christmas

Lemes

The chapter is very good. It's good for the story that not all of MC's enemies are portrayed as vile and unpleasant people. This gives more dramatic depth when MC has to fight them. It will be interesting to see how Erick will manage to invade and destroy the archives. I have a question for the author. What is the range of the Emperor's Void spell? I ask this because I imagine that taking into account everything we've seen so far about statistics, for an area spell to reach something like a few hundred square meters the caster's affinity should be something close to 200. Taking this into account, no matter how powerful the Emperor is, he would still have to get dangerously close to his targets. I think the elves, with their longevity, must have come up with several countermeasures to face him.

Daniel kanevsky

Thanks for the chapter!

Shane clark

My wife is laughing at me at how excited i get when a new chapter comes out.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

1st of four for cycle, not sure I like Aesop's name. I am taking suggestions to change it. Next chapter will be Saturday. I will be finishing the audiobook review and writing Town Builder next


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