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A Soldier's Life - 238 - Follow the Trail

🕑 Added 2024-07-31 04:39:49 +0000 UTC
A Soldier's Life - 238 - Follow the Trail
A Soldier's Life - 238 - Follow the Trail

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Erick Thiemke

it is in his dimensional space so no

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someting was added to this chapter

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Labola

I had thought he’d have an order from the secret leaders telling him to go awol. This felt abrupt

Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks 📖🍿

Andrew Crews

I removed the last of my Hound armor, dressed in the common clothes I had received in Hound training, and started walking * Ogala. I could really use a bath. I removed the last of my Hound armor, dressed in the common clothes I had received in Hound training, and started walking to Ogala. I could really use a bath.

Andrew Crews

The chase was a distance *for my perch, but the shadowy silhouettes matched my guess. The chase was a distance from my perch, but the shadowy silhouettes matched my guess.

Andrew Crews

The first decent-sized branch was fifty *off the ground. The first decent-sized branch was fifty feet off the ground.

Andrew Crews

Something I thought might have been a basilisk burrow * the worst of the dangers for the day. Something I thought might have been a basilisk burrow turned out to be the worst danger of the day.

J S

Air disc

Robert Biederman

It was still confused and disc over it here's another misspelling

Robert Biederman

It accepted my challenge ad chargeed here's another one

Robert Biederman

Here's another sentence that is off I confirmed the shark like parting of the Earth

Robert Biederman

There is a sentence here that doesn't quite sound right. I ran for air Shields trying to conserve as much Aether as I could

Joseph Snyder

.....what is filling his space at this point is massive. It is 11 ft tall and most of the telhians aren't even 6ft he is carrying 4 people. Some food and whole bunch of small weapons. He could fit like 2-3 moderate sized horses in there where is all this space going.

Zurko

i think Erik will become an adventurer after he leaves the empire. just a guess but it makes the most sense for him to get essences and get paid.

Caledon Smith

Thank you for the stories, keep it up! Wish I could stay but I’ll set aside some money each month and I’ll catch up again in December hopefully.

Karnnie

The first decent-sized branch was fifty off the ground. The first decent-sized branch was fifty feet off the ground. I decided to burn aether to make air shields to cross the rather than swim. I decided to burn aether to make air shields to cross the river rather than swim. I raced toward the larger of the two, and it accepted my challenge ad charged. I raced toward the larger of the two, and it accepted my challenge and charged. dressed in the common clothes I had received in Hound training, and started walking Ogala. dressed in the common clothes I had received in Hound training, and started walking toward Ogala.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /started walking Ogala/ => /started walking *toward(?)* Ogala/

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /my challenge ad charged/ => /[…] *and* charged/

Tetsu-nii

Suggestion: /one or two, if I were outnumbered, I would be in trouble and have nowhere to hide/ => /one or two, *I would be in trouble if I were outnumbered* and *had* nowhere to hide/

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /was fifty off the ground/ => /was fifty *feet(?)* off the ground/

Tetsu-nii

Yeah, I agree with a comment from the previous chapter that this latest Patreon update is $#it. I got so used to comments being displayed oldest first that the switch is really jarring.

momo2009

Could you expanded on what adventures do and maybe find something in the city to reduce his chance of being charmed again? Seen likely on hints that being mind control is his greatest future weakness from that girl who got his charmed amulet and now the Aesop guy using his charm powers on him. And find or buy an aether restoration potion or make that alchemist friends of his make one when they meet again.

momo2009

Wish he could explore the ruins or find something on his journey with his earth speak power. I have to ask is the empire just collapsing into multiple pieces? Or will it totally be destroyed? Because based on your description the empire is one of the strongest nation on desia but is stretch too far with defending such a large border, thus it totally collapsing seem unlikely. Plus with the giant city of atlantium shouldn't the magic or items found their help the empire? Plus the three nations attacking the empire maybe have one enemies for now but once the center of the empires falls, they would most likely fight over spoils like in real history.

momo2009

Apparently their all but they aren't as welcome in the empire. I wonder if adventure are like in other ln and show where they go hunt monster and dungeon dives too . I hope the author expand on their roles in other countries later.

Victor Skaarup

Does the hound identity disk or amulet that MC got during training allow him to be tracked - I wonder? Chapter 225.

Zurko

wonder who those 5 men on horses are, and what they're doing in the dangerous wilderness. i forgot, does the empire have adventures?

Andrew

Thank you!

1536539

Thank you for the chapter

Blorcyn

“I thanked my host for the accommodations,” I really enjoy little asides like this. Eryk isn’t a CHA based character but he can be funny. And I just wanted to say that. Also, there’s a typo when he leaps the auroch and it says ‘and disk’ which may be meant to say ‘an air disk’ or ‘a disk’. I always enjoy these vista chapters. Quite tense as it goes on, and interesting as he gets closer to his goal. Love the false trail ideas. I also think the difference between Eryk now and Eryk at story start is amazing. If it was me trying to write a progression fic, I’d never have the self restraint, but you’ve taken your time and it’s been so so gradual. It feels earned. There are few more dangerous than him but any mage who is is far more, as are many of the creatures. It’s good.

Doug

Is there a place to find others maps you may have released. I only found an old link that didn't mention the empire on it.

Jake Hartley

Map is awesome, love the update and progression. Have to build so some exposition is always welcome. Cheers mate

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4 for cycle. World Sphere is coming...just missing some info. A lot of exposition in this chapter as the MC has no one to talk to and he is getting from point A to B. I will do a read edit on the prior chapter tomorrow reflecting some comments. Should get more interesting the next three chapters (think that is all that is left for book 4 before an epilogue or two of chapters) Also attached a map of the area....i will see if I can trace the MCs path on it


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