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A Soldier's Life - 240 - The Archives (minor edit 8/4)

🕑 Added 2024-08-03 19:21:21 +0000 UTC

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Alex Zajfal

I would love to read the story of the First Legion! A series of books about how they landed and conquered the lands of the Empire.

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for the chapter, I'm kinda surprised he's letting Aesop see his face, as he probably doesn't have room for his body, and if a necromancer is used, the Empire will know he's alive 📖🍿

Andrew Crews

I could retreat and look for different * access to these lower levels, but I had already been in the underground network for over two hours. I could retreat and look for a different access to these lower levels, but I had already been in the underground network for over two hours.

Andrew Crews

The soldiers were guarding six * of Emperor’s Heralds. The soldiers were guarding six the of Emperor’s Heralds.

Space Cadet

Just knew that the cat was going to cause problems, reminded me of a certain goblin running amok

Random Guy

casks of Lamp Oil which are quite small about the size of a human head

Anel Alic

No that’s the orc blade erek is holding the spider one he got from the spider room. He fought the elf mage with it.

Robert Biederman

All right hold on here I thought that mage blade could only be used like this on orcs it would stop their aether cold but it would not do that on humans it is a blade developed specifically to kill orcs

Joseph Snyder

Hey, he just went from having only a corner available in the bullete fight to having room for 9 casks.

Fortunis

Ngl I hope he keeps the cat 😹

momo2009

Free essences plus maybe equipment to survived. What happen if they wake up?

Erick Thiemke

thanks, corrected

Lemes

There was an error between chapters 239 and 240. In chapter 239 he discovered the entrance to the archives in the temple of Juno, while in chapter 240 he was in the temple of Janus.

Lemes

The moment he stepped into the archives, he was in a combat situation and every hound inside was a legitimate target. The fact that they were asleep doesn't make them non-combatants, it just makes them easier to neutralize. No special operations soldier (Erick is basically in the middle of a black ops!) would leave a potential threat alive just because he was asleep.

yohan gu

Resisting mental attacks is given another stat, fortitude iirc. Empathy has something to do with interactions with other creatures, human and not. The cat’s reactions may be due to Eryk’s empathy increase for example

yohan gu

@lemes he is not in a combat situation with sleeping people.

Lemes

I also don't understand MC's choice to leave those hounds alive. I don't like Erick killing unnecessarily, but now he's in a combat situation, outnumbered and on enemy territory where his life is at stake. This kind of decision has everything to come back and bite him in the ass. It's neither logical nor intelligent.

Erick Thiemke

It was mentioned that drake riders require a minimum empathy so in a sense yes

striderfighter

Does the empathy pen make animals like him more?

Enk

pff! you might as well say that the film "cats & dogs" was not a documentary, sir!

Lazarius

Yep, You have a point

Silver Beard

It's not the current Emperor's fate that's in question; but the rise of the next. Will Castille suffer Octavian's rise?

Erick Thiemke

Monday - unless I postpone Wolrd Sphere for a day and post it tonight. Drafted 800 words already

Erick Thiemke

this was going to be an upside down pyramid but found the concept too hard to write. so i went with ant-people. but yes there are air shafts

Erick Thiemke

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Lazarius

Mmmh don’t fool me I didn’t see Castile in the spoilers of the books in the excel sheet, and i think you want a death, everything is a bit too nice in term of death since the academy.

Jesus De Guzman

Haha!!

Erick Thiemke

interesting - how much are we betting? because, ya know, i could go either way...

Lazarius

Yes you are right, and I bet that Castile will die in the Emperor fight 😨.

Erick Thiemke

it is kinda of a standard plot structure. need to have the readers feel fulfilled at the end -- although this is a minor MC fight compared to the Emperors POV coming in the prologue

Erick Thiemke

no to be a spoiler but sometimes a cat is just a cat--sometimes not

Erick Thiemke

he probably could not have crossed the well lit chamber unnoticed. he also was trying to find out if they thought he was dead

Thresher

I was thinking it might be tamed by a summoner.

Lazarius

You really like to end your books with a fight 😄, the wyvern book 2 , the mage book 3 and now the hound Aesop

Deliver roo

I actually tought the same, but I think the cat is just the excuse for the MC to overcome his dilemma and start killing, not a trasmuted mage watching him.

Deliver roo

Same it doesn’t seem like he has much time to waste talking. Also, once he killed the first hound I expected him to do the safe while unempathetic act of killing the sleeping hounds. At this point it doesn’t make much sense to risk being overwhelmed by hounds he could have disposed of.

Karnnie

I know why he did not attack Aesop (temp name) while he was distracted (plot). But in reality, I would think he would take every advantage he could get.

Karnnie

My feline friend darted down the stairs ahead of me, and I heard them draw his sword. I heard a clang of metal on stone, and I thought—stupid cat. I rushed down the stairs to find the Hound half-turned, watching the cat and waiting for a second chance. I didn’t recognize this Hound, but he reached for a whistle around his neck as he defended with his blade. My air shield prevented him from stopping the magebane as I drove it into his sternum. I had chosen the magebane since Hounds could use aether. I could see the confusion in his eyes as he tried to reach for the aether to use whatever spell form he had imprinted. I yanked on magebane to destroy his heart and extracted it, lowering him softly to the floor. The above passage is a bit confusing to read. It sounds as though the Hound attacked the cat but hit the stone. he was half turned looking for the cat but still saw Eryk as he descended the stairs? Did eryk attack the hound? I mean it seems like it because all of the sudden he is defending against an attack but from our perspective, Eryk never attacked him, simply rushed down the stairs. A rewrite/rewording would be appreciated as this does not paint a clear picture of what is happening.

Bananaboat

I think it's more like being more able to understand people's emotions, in this very chapter Eryk states that his past girlfriends broke up with him because he was selfish and didn't make considerations for them, and empathy is his lowest mental stat I believe. But obviously being able to understand someone's emotions will make it easier to get someone to like you since you will know the right things to say.

Enk

trying to think of how to tell if a cat is a shapeshifter

Justin Garrett

I know you’re only human but can we get the next chapter soon so I can stop thinking about what’s happening next. Thanks for good chapter.

Jesus De Guzman

Presumably there is constant air flow, otherwise the folks guarding the archives would die from bad air. Plus fire once started usually eats up half the oxygen before embering out. A fire in ember state could burn for days and weeks. What’s more concerning is that the archive might have fire-counter measures to begin with…….

Gwalmeich

Solid kitty, do you copy? Your mission is to infiltrate the archives and destroy the prototype for their new weapon. A weapon to surpass Metal Gear. Do anything in your power to stop the empire's madness. Over.

Juan Magallon

“I passed a desk with a massive that looked to be some book to catalog the blood samples.” Is there a word missing? Idk how I feel about him causally walking in on Aesop. Should’ve ambushed him and ended it quick.

Silver Beard

He should have silenced the hounds at his back; he wrestled with the delimna and decided it was necessary... kill them all. He can't afford more danger at his back when he's wasting the Archive...however he can. Will they live if he truly can start a fire? It would have been a mercy before...now it'll be torture Slowly asphyxiated; much better than a quick cut to the throat. So Honorable and Wise! Most important- no new nightmares about leaving brother hounds to slowly, horribly die in the holocast he created. Yes, I'm being factitious, but many readers all seem to think killing is bad in every circumstance. How you read medieval and not know there's a lot of ugly boggles the mind. Sending his brother [Hounds] off would be considered Grace. Better by his hand than some random element like the Uber Hulk in the woods

Silver Beard

Sticking him with Magebane will be all the resistance he needs now; but down the road you might be right about the perks of empathy.

Jesus De Guzman

Nice!!!

Silver Beard

Lousy cliff but thanks for trying! He's got his magebane out... should be wounding the bastard even as he says 'often make that mistake'. The real problem with fire in a tunnel is a lack of air... you know O2 that makes fire possible. It's a contained space so Eryk's going to die a lot sooner than the archive if he lights it up. He's not going to be able to draw enough from this access point he made into the inferno he wants to create. Even if he had the spellform...and he doesn't.

JollyRodger

"The rumors of my death are often wildly exaggerated, obviously, do you know how many times everyone thought i was dead? Until you actually SEE my corpse figure i'm still alive"

Silver Beard

gold coin on the [shelf] self. The [they] appeared to be some type of

JollyRodger

The bump in empathy will help resist this guys spell form I bet. Maybe it's just like passive charisma, making people like you

Prinny Knight

Nice

SodaBoBomb

Oh man. All caught up now. The waiting game begins...thx for chapters!

Nick Nicholson

Better kill that dude quick considering he can mess with your mind

Knightfire

Cliffhanger but great. Curious if mages can shape shift into cats? or maybe Elves can.

Erick Thiemke

2nd of four for cycle. Hitting Target for dinner and then back to writing Town Builder. Will probably add more detail of the ancient underground city in an edit.


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