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A Soldiers Life - 245 - Goliath's Creed

🕑 Added 2024-08-12 00:25:59 +0000 UTC

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Marvin Amann

Still think its inconsistent character wise that they would not wait for the other Goliath's

Damien P

I know this is it but can you please have Eryk snap at Maveith please??? Yes, he's opposed to it but he KNOWS Eryk, and after being stuck in the dungeon? They wouldn't be in there if they weren't meant to be dead... sorry... needed to vent that out lol

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

download on the pinned page. It is on the Chapter Release notes page. If you cannot find it let me know and I will post the link here

johnathan reese

Wow I'm new here, anyway has there ever been a map? I'm so lost on the where everything is.

Richard Thorn

Was he to(o) oblivious to...

Bryan Schnebly

I'm surprised that Maveith didn't want to wait for the other Goliaths just to get better intel on where his sister might be. He wouldn't have the language barrier that Eryk did.

Andrew Crews

Yeah, I know only *able to see out sixty feet is a limitation but I still manage,” I said smugly and kept walking as Maveith had stopped, stunned. “Yeah, I know only being able to see out sixty feet is a limitation, but I still manage,” I said smugly, continuing to walk as Maveith stopped, stunned.

Andrew Crews

If we are lucky, a ship *captain’s I am familiar with will be there. If we are lucky, a ship captain I am familiar with will be there.

Erick Thiemke

what are you referring to? Chapter 43?

Robert Biederman

I'm sorry dude but I cannot wait for you to complete that last chapter 43 it doesn't make much sense to me why it has been taking you so long if it was so important as you are claiming it to be because you are already well into book 6 anyway I am starting to read book five and I will come back to that when you do finish it

Apophixas

Definitely a great start. I love the big goof. His sincerity and straightforwardness are refreshing and endearing. And he has a good affect on Eryk's conscience, tempering his greed and occasional boughts of pragmatic bloodlust.

Erick Thiemke

the final edit of that chapter had them free to go their own way with Eryk suggesting Gramney as a place to escape teh influence of the Empire

John Donovan

Just for continuality of the story Eryk also has Helena and sylphie in his storage at this point. The two guards of the first citizen. He gave them the choice of following the mage.

BrycenBeans

I think when the coup happened someone at the capitol was supposed to burn those but I could be wrong

momo2009

Great first chapter.

momo2009

Store Marveith in the space

Silver Beard

Just occurred to me that if he's using Castille's sample from the remote archive, shouldn't he be getting a pull in the Capital as well? There's where the 'original' archive is? Originally, it was going to take him years to wipe out the remote site and patriots would take care of the site in the palace; but Eryk's upset all time frames. Will he try for the Main too? And Raid the treasury while he's at it. In for a penny...in for a pound. Nice thing about gold and essence- they fit around other things rather well.

Silver Beard

Stash them both then.

Erick Thiemke

i dont think so. but i could be wrong. i didnt want him to have knowledge of what was going on in the Empire, to keep him in the dark

striderfighter

Wasn't Eryk given a notebook to use whenever he destroyed the archives?

Erick Thiemke

they are a day from dire wolf territory. Maveith will not be going into the capital - too easy to recognize him. MC will go in using the same disguise he has on now

Erick Thiemke

he has not used the water essences - everything else has been

Angus

Thanks for the Chapter!

Silver Beard

Mavieth already mentioned the dire wolves- then goes shouting like it's no big deal. Also going to the Capital is a BIG risk.

smpx

The road is near Caelora and as far as we know the plans to open them up again and make expeditions into Caelora and the dungeon are yet to begin. The war is probably the only reason they can use road, because it delayed the plans the Empire had for Caelora

Silver Beard

So he's leaving the library he stashed in Zyna's closet essentially forever? Not that he's got any space with his current passengers...and Ginger will need to go in too soon. Are we just assuming that he's consuming essence every chance he gets? Not hoarding any particularly save the Water ones?

Silver Beard

Good to be among friends; but they are moving into danger. Need to work on their battle coordination, situational awareness, etc. Goaded or not, Mavieth can't be that loud hunting prey...or being hunted in turn. Little off; the empire is at war 3 times over...and they are wandering down the road without a care?

DheeAreBi

Sometimes Maveith can be a bore, but I really liked this chapter. Maybe because we can see Eryk being more himself again?

Lemes

I wonder if Erick will have an unpleasant encounter with the first citizens in the capital before boarding. Thanks for the chapter.

Lemes

Curious to see what the duchy is like. I hope we have some adventures there as the MC leaves his cargo and heads to the orc caliphate. I'm also looking forward to reading the emperor's chapter and finding out what happened during the coup attempt. Thanks for the chapter.

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

yes, from the MC's POV. there was a prologue with Raelia

Kbzzy

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Da Worst John

Is this the first chapter of the new book?

Quasimotolovesbells

I wonder if the Orcs would allow them to buy Goliath slaves freedom? Might make it easier to sell to his people, that Maveith went to work as an adventure to earn enough money to get slaves free from the orcs, along with finding his sister.

Moatdog

The duchess is interested in a Goliath, but the neighbors will talk

BubblyGhost

WOOOO! YEAH

Erick Thiemke

2nd of 3 for cycle. Just three chapters this week cycle as book 4 finishes. The last chapter of book 4 is due on Tuesday and is the Emperor's POV. I finished this chapter and have been rereading it and editing to set up book 5. I think i touched on everything and wrapped up some plot threads from book 4.


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