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A Soldier's Life - 248 - Vigiliante Justice

🕑 Added 2024-08-20 05:40:41 +0000 UTC

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Justin Barnett

I kind of expected Eryk would spend a little time thinking about Brutus after the fight. They were friends, even if Brutus betrayed him in the end.

HappyNoms

He's readily capable of using a foot of his 11x11 space and 1/11th of his mana to establish a 1x11 stone wall, but he camps out with three sides covered and the fourth just wide open. He can also topple huge trees easily by slicing out a minimal mana cost thin slice of cross-section, and seriously impair the terrain on a side, but doesn't. For someone with Ranger training, and advice from expert woodsman and specialists, he is awfully simpleminded about not using his skills. You would think he would have at least one rattlesnake, acid, and grenades in his dimensional inventory, as trivially available, but instead he goes with sneezing/blinding powder. But then kills three people out of hand when he could have blinded them, or at least tried to blind them. You went out of your way to have blinding powder, Eryk - what are you even doing with your life. (being a villian, apparently.) I love this story, but the protagonist is such an exasperating bag of walnuts about skill/equipment use.

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

I removed two in the dialogue for you

J Watrous

Does he need to say Maevith after every line?

Erick Thiemke

SPOILER - he is headed back to the Shimmering Labrynith in book 7 or 8 as he works to find a way for Evie to return to Earth

J. L. Mullins

I wish that Eryk would at least consider going back to get the Elvin armor and massive sword, maybe dropping through the dungeon for some easy essences and major healing potions from literally every bear in there...

Space Cadet

Except for Raella, she will still be alive

Space Cadet

With the diminishing returns from essenses, is it realistic for Erik to get a high enough mana shaping to be able to cast spells. I recall that you needed ~60.

Kevin O'Malley

The library, a set of rune armor and a rune great sword, the most powerful dungeon any of the characters have ever seen.

Kevin O'Malley

Maveith is his closest friend in the literal universe.

Kevin O'Malley

Eh, Boris has earned it by being a selfish pest. Not only does Eryk have a personal grudge against him for trying to kill him several times, but Boris’ own sister will have an easier time running a peaceful province with him gone.

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter.

Andrew Crews

I had to agree *the shadows of the glowstone made the large goliath look more menacing, especially with his impassive visage. I had to agree that the shadows of the glowstone made the large goliath look more menacing, especially with his impassive visage.

Apophixas

Bro, he didn't even come close to wiping out the resources of the dungeon. They didn't even explore half the thing. Not to mention there is still a ton of shit to gather in the ruins themselves like some of the books still in the library. Or the elven runic greatsword and chest plate, which I'm surprised he didn't consider going to get on his way by. Could maybe have found a way to disguise it and use it once he became an adventurer.

Apophixas

Nah, thats how a selfish ass thinks. Maveith is his friend, almost like a goofy little brother to him, and even though he didn't need Maveith's help in that situation, he will in the future, or hell, in the very next chapter. So of course he would share, if he has no reason not to. It was only a minor essence, not a major and certainly no apex. He's gotta keep Maveith strong too with all they are gonna lijely end up going though. It's especially important if Maveith hasn't yet had all his stats reinforced, which can help him not lose too many stats (especially permanently), if they end up in a starvation type situation again (unlikely with their rings though).

Apophixas

Exactly. The only oaths he has are to himself, Maveith, and formerly to the coup makers up until he finished doing his assigned part in burning the hidden archives.

Steve

His 'oath' was forced conscription, no better than slavery, to a detestable and rotten empire. It is not oath breaking to emancipate yourself.

ChocoSongi

Wtf are you talking about

sdf

The necromancer absolutely was his enemy, being in the service of his enemies. Killing him made as much sense as killing some scout on the outskirts of an enemy camp, some guard on a city wall. It made as much sense as killing a witness, which is a special circumstances crime that gets you the death penalty where we come from ;/ In this world, or setting, this doesn't make Eryk a villain, just a pragmatic realist. If he lets the Necromancer live, Eryk is now targeted by several FIrst Citizens who can turn their resources to hunting him down. Eryk could tell a certain blacksmith there's a fortune in books in a hidden wall, if he were so inclined.

Enk

the topics of the books taken were quite limited tho fairly varied iirc - but i still got the impression that they came from a particular tower where those skill summaries were concentrated, and that what was taken was only a drop in the ocean.

Karnnie

Honestly, in my opinion, this is simply the MC becoming numb to death like he is to pain. As a soldier, you learn to essentially flip a switch where you can do some truly horrible things without blinking an eye. It isnt a nice thing but as a soldier, think of it as a coping mechanism. It is just something we learn to do. What he did was essentially killing because it needed to be done in order to cover his ass. He tried trusting and he has been burned more than once, especially by those that work for the empire. I applaud the author for finally doing it. He is right, a lot of the military members that support him have been saying it for a long time. do what needs to be done and move on, this is exactly what he did. He was not malicious about it, he did not reville in the fact that he had to kill and he did not torture. it was quick and clean and is exactly what should have been done,

Deliver roo

If I remember correctly the requirement for the stone skin spell form, the only one possessed by Boris, is 30 in earth affinity. While not shitty it is still a mid-low affinity, so low infact that Eryk didn’t obtain a minor earth essence but a constitution one, which could mean that the affinities don’t always influence the result… I’m actually more confused by the fact that the MC gives essences to Maveith even when he doesn’t do shit, I get that Eryk is already physically resilient and that magic essences are the gamechangers but physical essences seem still valuable, especially to maintain his high stats.

Deliver roo

Honestly, the moment Eyrick got all the info he needed about Boris and his party their death was the only outcome that would have made sense. Glad to see the darker tone, I’m curious to see if it will last the next encounter with an enemy woman.

Erick Thiemke

I will try to shade the necromancer a little more but the point is the MC has overcome his reluctance to kill. people wanted this to occur earlier in the story but now with Aesop, the father of the teeenage boy and now these three, he has finally crossed the moral line becoming judge, jury and executioner. I am going to add some more Boris/Justin meddling when I edit book 4 so the readers hate them more

Erick Thiemke

Blood Archives and Imperial Archives would be under the palace but different rooms

Erick Thiemke

it is just a mark that they have poor quality spirit. most essecences harvested are minor. major essences are uncommon/rare. apex essences are very rare - the MC just has been able to get into a powerful untouched dungeon and fight powerful people

Ivan Kanewske

He is changing, but who wouldn't, He basically went military special forces. Multiple life and death situations, will be interesting how he hardens or crumbles, All of that and he can live for thousands of years and keep his mind, but his friends, and future family will die, Going to have to be hard

Jeff Kollada

Oh I agree, I like how hes handled those situations

momo2009

Loyal to mavieth and a little to his old legion group. Now his path to independence begin and let hope he doesn't turn to dark. I like him being still saving the weak and sparing innocent, fight injustice etc.

momo2009

Well the necromancer didn't know he quitted being the hounds so I wished he had try to trick him to gain more knowledge or convinced him to work with the group for awhile. But yeah now he only oath

Jeff Kollada

You aren't wrong but for good or bad, the necromancer wasn't his enemy. And he's a traitor so his word means nothing anymore. Once an oath breaker always an oath breaker. He still choose to make a confrontation that was needed

momo2009

A villian is someone who hurt innocent. For better or worst the necomancer served the empire which mean he a threat to any traitor of the empire which Eryk has become. Still wasteful killing him without learning everything or trying to ask him to join mc group. Mc has been harden and less forgiving of past enemies.

Jeff Kollada

To me we this chapter is the turning point of watching the MC become the villain. He has become quick to kill and is at this point immune to it. He didn't need to approach the group, they could have easily gone around. He wanted to and even stated they couldn't live after showing themselves

Ivan Kanewske

Upgraded my membership, just read all of book 4 to this point, Work so sucks today now, I like the direction with Eryk and Maveith back together, The horse Pet is a current sideline that doesn't make sense to me, he didn't fight from her back, she is not some great mount or beast, Unless you are just showing trying to hold onto some form of normalcy as he has changed so drastically in the past year. Anyway thank you for this story it is one my absolute favorite

DheeAreBi

Good mix of action and world building in this chapter. I don't always love a cliff hanger but I'm excited for the next chapter!

momo2009

Well we know Konstantin lived, so maybe he did took it.

momo2009

Or even ask him to go with you. Adventure party or mercenary group perhaps? Since you still have hound badge, in the name of the emperor etc. He aid you need necromancer fire to burn each soul to empty the soul prison, so that something new to figure out. Well with the empire being invade by gnolls and globins this will be a lot of chance to get essence and experience. Maybe give ginger some essence.

momo2009

Well he also plan to save mavieth sister and friend in the orc land and who know if their are magical dead in the country or dungeon. And he did say he wanted to get all the books in the city but not enter the dungeon. Which is a shame because the dungeon is more valu

momo2009

I find it realistic but kinda wasteful. Maybe force the necromancer to used the amulet and gain more knowledge about necomancey spell, items etc. Taking his blood to track him or store him made a little more sense if you plan on having someone help you talk to the dead later. Why only minor essence, wouldn't a first citizen have strong magic or abilities leading to a major or apex essence? Why wouldn't the third guy produce an essence when it hasn't been over half an hour plus his dungeon collected is better then a normal one and it alway get an essence.

momo2009

Flying or talking horse soon.

Lazarius

« The Count wasn’t able to obtain the artifact the mage company used. It was moved to the Imperial Archives » The imperial archives was also burned by the traitors. Perhaps Konstantin obtained the artefact ?

Bejan Bosc

Minor essences only? That’s doesn’t seem right. Given that Boris is a first citizen shouldn’t he have pretty decent affinities?

Silver Beard

without the kettle of souls- he'd be better off selling the secret library he left in Zyna's flat then trying to raid a resource he already wiped of most of it's useable goods.

Silver Beard

That makes no sense from what readers 'know'... much less the MC. Not to mention- why would he want to go back there to begin with? Thought the whole point was to go N to become an adventurer to maybe save Mavieth's sister. ''

Silver Beard

I suppose this is a tell tale of the Empire's future. The sheer amount of death will attract everything that feeds off that. Likely a dungeon or three in the making. Eryk will have more essence. He should offer the next constitution or quickness to Ginger. Time to see what feeding his mount will get him.

Thresher

Thanks for the chapter. Glad to see one of Eryk’s haters finally die, and it was by his hand too.

Erick Thiemke

The soul prison? It is a tool that he can use to get back into the Elven ruins in the future

Silver Beard

Thanks, but I'd a little disappointed. I suppose curiosity is still a thing; but Eryk can't use it so it's useless trivia of the moment. Why save a soul that will rat you out given a chance?!

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle.


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