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A Soldier's Life - 251 - Captain Desdemona

🕑 Added 2024-08-25 19:37:10 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

he planned to ditch them with teh Adventurers Guild but it never materialized as an option

Justin Barnett

Why mention his extra four passengers? It makes the deal more complicated and if he brought them out at this point, it would just complicate things.

Marnie

I knew *he was going to want to move as quickly as possible to find his sister. Maiveth (sp?) has not been mentioned for a while this point so you might want to use his name.

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

i dont think this one .... i will let the editor decide

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

they are in the chapter release notes already but I will post some updated ones there as well

Marvin Amann

The book series really needs a map. Getting increasingly difficult to keep track of all the place names and where they are in relation to one another

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter. It was an essence I would unlikely never use, so using it as barter was acceptable. I think this should be likely not unlikely to avoid a confusing double negative and so it reads I would likely never use. Alternatively, change never to to ever and add be so it reads I would be unlikely to ever use.

Andrew Crews

I was relieved when there was still a pull *a weak pull on the compass, letting me know she and the company were still likely alive. I was relieved to feel a weak pull on the compass, reassuring me that she and the company were still likely alive.

Andrew Crews

Since I was getting some adventurer leathers, I thought getting the earth drake bracers would be *advised. Since I was getting some adventurer leathers, I thought an appraisal of the Earth Drake bracers would be advisable.

Andrew Crews

He reached under the *encounter and produced a scale, and I was immediately confused. He reached under the counter and produced a scale, and I was immediately confused.

Andrew Crews

My long shot exit strategy seemed like *this was going to work out. My long shot exit strategy seemed like it was going to work out.

Robert Biederman

With all that gold that he has on him that's all he needs right there just give the captain enough gold and she will go right along with the idea

Robert Biederman

What the hell why is he giving up that major essence of clairvoyance it's too useful you can use it himself

Robert Biederman

I'm assuming the author means one other and a horse I don't know where the other three are coming from

Apophixas

They were together more than a week. And went through quite a few things together both before and after getting to the college. But it is correct that they never actually talked about commitment. I also think it's foolish of him to fall for a normal human when he's going to live for hundreds of years.

Apophixas

That's why he was unsure. They never talked of commitment, but he likes her, and he wasn't interested in sleeping with anyone else when they were together at the college, but now they've been separated for months, and she's not around the capital. I'm sure he'll loosen up eventually. Especially if he runs into Raelia in Esenhem(?) and she shows some interest in him.

TyrTheFallen

If both archive's are completely destroyed it will not end well.

daniel dantas

What he means is that it doesn't make sense for Mc to feel that he's 'cheating' on renna, they were actually together for what, a week? They don't have a relationship, at most an affair, wasting opportunities because he slept with renna isn't cool.

Erick Thiemke

Thanks for letting me know. It is fixed. Patreon is broken, it deselects collections when inupdate a chapter so if I miss checking the box again it drops from the collection

Xonian

Where is chap 252? Don’t know if it’s just me but it isn’t there

Karnnie

Cheating on Renna? Since when are they in a relationship? They never even discussed being together long term

Erick Thiemke

??

BrycenBeans

Dude I fkn hate when he gets like this fr

Brett Ulakovic

Will Eryk go back and get the Eleven books that he entombed in the closet?

Lemes

This fixation on Renna will still bring great disappointments and problems for the MC.

Deliver roo

True but his main goal and that of Eryk would still remain to free Maveith's sister and other Goliath prisoners and take them to safety. This will probably require many dead Orcs in the Boutan Caliphate so it would only make sense if the interaction with Orc adventurers is temporary.

Silver Beard

Hope the Capt stops calling him legionaire or this might be a very short trip

Alex Galaitsis

Fun chapter. I’m excited for the next arc.

Silver Beard

Wonder if they will be allowed to leave; big news in the Capital but not necessarily something to be shared across the border. Not yet at least.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /still a pull a weak pull on the compass/ delete either "a pull" or "a weak pull"

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /securing the room and coming out with/ => /[…] coming *up* …/

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /would unlikely never use/ => /would *likely* never …/

1536539

Thank you for the chapter. Edit suggestion: I was relieved when there was still a pull a weak pull on the compass I was relieved when there was still a weak pull on the compass

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

Chapter release notes has links or use collections here to find the chapters together

Thresher

Seeing Maveith interact with Orcs would be interesting. Even more so if they delved dungeons together. Thanks for the chapter.

Jordan

Thanks for the chapter!

Ivan Kanewske

How do I access your other work, but the starting books, I don't find anything else on kindle Kindlet hank you

Eriach

Tftc

Erick Thiemke

2nd of 4 for cycle. Third should be tomorrow but need to write a World Sphere tonight. I lot of the delay of the chapter was figuring out the logistics to get teh MC where he needed to be. I actually spent two hours trying to edit the world map in order to cheat but ended up going with portals instead


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