Patrefans
alwaysrollsaone from patreon
alwaysrollsaone patreon

A Soldier's Life - 278 - Handle With Care (Final Edit on 6-17-25, but still taking chap title suggestions before sending to editor)

🕑 Added 2024-10-15 02:35:38 +0000 UTC

Comments

Natox Biohazard

When Erik is going back to the others and the predator shows up "It was faster than I was, and it had the advantage of four legs. I focused on running while I tried to identify what beast it was." It just read a bit awkward

Woodchuck

I love these action packed chapters.

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapters. Looking forward to seeing the reactions to the seven? werewolf heads, Raella's in particular.

Bryan Schnebly

I thought the rule was 1 magic and 1 physical essence a day. He should have waited for the earth essence or suffered some discomfort for having taken it too soon.

Erick Thiemke

changed to At sunset

Kingtie

Eyrk should do the sword slash when removing a thin slice. It'll hide his true ability

Dennis Crocker

“As the sunset, the woods shifted from bird song to night insects” I believe this should be two words, sun set.

Karnnie

SInce this is based on DnD. It would be great if he were able to get a displacer beast.

Jon

Yeah, it’s a horse not a human… it’s getting pretty childish

JollyRodger

Eryk definitely needs to pick up a pet other than his horse. Maybe a super sneaky cat that can jump into his storage space at will. Something smart but a huge aggravation to

Salvo

I think of it more about how Eryk had to change so much in the empire’s service, him naming a horse was the start of his defiance. He also missed his dog from earth and ginger get the benefits. It’s very similar to the Witcher Gerald.

Erick Thiemke

when you talk to yourself it is always odd phrasing. he is just making an excuse why he isnt outdistancing it

hrs

ahhhh that is correct, still feels abit odd though

Lemes

I thought the same thing. The dynamic between the two is boring, actually kind of irritating. They seem like an old couple. Maybe a heroic death for her would be something interesting for the narrative.

Jordan

I don’t have strong feelings about Ginger either way, but it would be pretty cool if Eryk had a more exotic pet (dire wolf, drake, etc.)

Erick Thiemke

he is saying that the creature was only faster than him becasue it had four legs

Erick Thiemke

yes - almost always, it would yield an essence, minor essence with an average collecter and average person

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Andriy Karpus

Honestly its sad to say as I really liked the Ginger dynamic at first, but the last couple books it has become annoying and felt forced to me. I wish she was taken for the war. It could have bin a sad moment and we would have just moved on.

Silver Beard

Ugly side arc... Imagine the feral one wouldn't have to die if Eryk had kept it in his space... in stasis until a healer powerful enough to rid it could be found.

Jordan

I don’t understand why Eryk didn’t harvest the drakes teeth and claws as those have value based on discussions he had in the shimmering dungeon with Maveith. He can put the feet and head in his space if he doesn’t want to extract them right now and have his team help him later.

Jordan

I sheltered behind a massive oak, expecting to snake around to one side. … massive oak, expecting ‘it’ to snake…

Jordan

As it closed, I was mostly certain it was an earth drake on the feedback from earth speak. …earth drake ‘based’ on the feedback…

C

I don't think it was about keeping his secrets; I think it was because he was pretty sure he could do it himself, but on the off chance that he was not able to, and something happened to him, his team would still be able to help Maveith. On top of that, he has still managed to keep his humanity even though they tried to grind it out of him, was the reason he went. Kids needed help and he could help so he did.

Ivan Kanewske

I think it was a way for the author to give Eryk more essences, as well as protect his crew from potential infection.

Antti Kunttu

I don't know, this miniadventure felt really out of character for me. Maybe it's opened a bit why he went solo as he had backup near. If he wanted to protect his secrets. But the Ogier was right there whom he had shared slot if his secrets with, why not take him as back up? Have to wait and see.

Ivan Kanewske

Good chapter Feels like Eryk is coming into his own, getting comfortable with what he can accomplish

Ivan Kanewske

wish I had someone to watch me back when I cleaned my clothes and gear, Watch me to Watch my

Brett Jr.

Raelia best girl

Jordan

I got a few kids if you want to tell the elves. few -> couple

Steven Savage

It was either stated or implied that the Emperor had being doing that for years on living people who had certain affinities to yield the best chance of an apex essence.

hrs

"it was faster than me, but had the advantage of four legs" doesnt make sense. it sounds like it should be "it wasnt faster..." or "it was faster... and had the advantage of four legs"

Devourerofwords

Yeah maybe it's got insane regeneration and normally can survive being stabbed in the heart and much more. But the magebane stopped the regeneration from activating.

TheAlreds90

Something for our MC to note that the alphas are probably highly magically resistant. I imagine the backlash would have been severe.

Andrew

Thank you!

1536539

Great chapter!!, thank you. I can’t remember if using the Collector on living creatures yields a better quality essence, or has a greater chance of yielding an essence regardless of the quality? Or both?

liltigah

Yeah but it was aether resistance so maybe it’s strength just didn’t come into play during the fight

PatronTurtle

I'm honestly surprised the alpha gave up an Apex. It didn't seem that much more powerful

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4. Next is due tomorrow but I have a big fight chapter for World Sphere to write first, so maybe Wed


More Creators