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World Sphere - 202 - Gift Exchange

🕑 Added 2024-10-18 05:45:46 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

i dont remember....no note on it. that was the premice in Soldier - that everything was destroyed - but I changed it

Igor Chmurski

I thought you said that the contents of pocket spaces were lost once the caster died when storm learned the spell? Might be mistaken though. Also if the shifter dies here it would be advisable to make him warried about how he will escape nie that they detected him instead of being do confident in the chapter where it takes the Items from the tower to make the chapter feel more like a begining of the finał step on aquiering the loot rather then a loss of said loot.

Erick Thiemke

possibly

Ivan Kanewske

Can the dungeon add a shifter as part of its minions now? In a future evolution?

Ivan Kanewske

“No, those were the contents of the shifter pocket space. Shifter to shifter's

Erick Thiemke

I am getting confused between stories. In the origional Soldier, that was the case - you die - everything disappears forever. I edited to that everything appears. For this story I do not remember the mechanics

Big Fig

Thought it was explained earlier that if one dies their dimension space disperses into the void and all items disappear

Ivan Kanewske

The only dragon I had killed was Black Maurader, known as the Sky King. Add a Was A black marauder Also spell check your marauder

Michael Masters

All the loot the shifter got from the black tower

Bryan Schnebly

Shifter just dumped its own storage so that they'd think they got all of its pieces. One last defense mechanism

Jason Long

hill giant vs fire giant

M van Dongen

Sun Tzu disagrees. They knew themselves. They knew the oppo. They prepared. And they kicked arse.

Win Rar

Ahh you did have him drop everything that was in the shifters pocket space! Can't wait to learn what items it had.

Ha dug

Honestly like this fight being sort of anti climactic because it’s showing how experienced and deadly he’s getting and the threads that are going to have to be sent after him are ones truly destructive and WMDs by our scale. Magic is just one of those setting elements where you can never be 100% sure you can counter something your enemy has because there is 1 million different ways to do something like a switch or flight, etc so a counter to 95% still leaves you vulnerable and with levels as shown if you go for broad band coverage you can leave yourself open to just having someone with a higher ranked spell or item brute forcing their way in. It’s a great example for the MC about never getting to confident and the benefits of having a support base AND ACTUALLY INVESTING IN FRIENDSHIPS AND GROWING THE ISLANDS AS A WHOLE! Because no matter how much of a monster you are individually you just can’t be strong enough to counter everything out there. Groups can and will spec to bring you down if your strong enough and the rewards good enough and there’s not much you can do for that without support

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, I actually liked the fight, it may have been anticlimactic but they were prepared for the shifter, they knew it’s strengths and weaknesses, an d they had the toolset to counter them, it’s a well deserved win.

Erick Thiemke

yeah i understand. 25 chapter build up to it. it was supposed to be an entire chapter...i was trying to think of reasons why the Maven Seekers hadnt been able to contain and kill the shifter. also the main plot point was to make sure the MC knew the shifter came form the Black Maurders Moon

Chad cline

I wonder which tier 7 spell he will find?

Talen Drake

This was indeed a bit anticlimactic. I get that our MC and team are OP, but the fight was like every other fight switch - dead. Maybe instead write it from the Shifters perspective to show what all the arrays were supposed to do, and have all his plans invalidated by the shift to explain the anticlimax better? It would at least be more amusing that way.

Tetsu-nii

Typo: /went to us himself as bait again/=>/[…] to *use* himself …/

Gravonhaft

Hmm... I think it needs more dramatic scene when the shifter is about to die, but well... thanks for the chapter

M van Dongen

WARE CLIFF. We wants teh fat loots.

Erick Thiemke

sorry i didnt finish this last night. I had a lot of stuff to do today and didnt get to a computer until after dinner


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