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A Soldier's Life - 265 - Forging Bonds

🕑 Added 2024-09-18 16:15:00 +0000 UTC

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Kevin O'Malley

I enjoy conversing with unique individuals.” I was[n't] sure if he was referring to Maveith or me.

Erick Thiemke

Dungeon forged are 1000, man made are 100

C Smith

Ha 100 gold. It was described in previous books that an aether blade would cost at least a 1000 gold. What did it change?

Erick Thiemke

this was the armor from the Duchess not Zyna

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Kevin O'Malley

Looks like a typo from a sentence edit. “What is fair then?” I asked. Everything I had laid out a number of items I didn’t consider useful. Everything I had laid out were items that I didn’t consider useful. Or I had laid out items that I didn’t consider useful.

Kevin O'Malley

“No, I… the duchess,had it crafted for me after I did her a service,” I replied,

Andrew Crews

No, I, duchess, (→ Duchess, I) had it crafted for me after I did her a service,” I replied, but she raised her eyebrow (→ eyebrows) suspiciously. No, Duchess, I had it crafted for me after I did her a service,” I replied, but she raised her eyebrows suspiciously

Andrew Crews

On the way to a formal dining room set (→ was set) with an array of dishes for us. We made our way to a formal dining room set with an array of dishes for us.

SleepingNight

Same

Erick Thiemke

I just made his recovery 2 weeks instead of one in 264/265. That gives about 25 days from the Emperor's death to the present. Still.a stretch covering 750ish miles in enemy land but more realistic

Erick Thiemke

the armor has been change to the Duchess' armor and not the Imperial Legion Armor

Zurko

well I definitely remember he grabbed Zynas blood from the archives. I don't remember if it said he used the blood compas specifically for Zyna.

Thresher

Man idk know tbh. I read so many stories at the same time I lose track. This one already has a lot of characters as it is. Plus it’s been a while since we saw them.

Asadbek Abduxoshimov

I'd say I'm a bit confused. I didn't see High Mage Zyna's mention in old chapter's at all. Erik did check Castile and Renna but not Zyna. And Ceremonial armor is said It is stayed at college. I think I need expanation.

Salvo

You could give her a spell form that helps, like the earthen sprint or maybe celestial buff like ‘marathon’s mission’. She did finish repairing Eryk’s armor in record time, so she has endurance. It could even be the excuse why she got robbed when she was too exhausted and also the limp from over use.

Ivan Kanewske

Left it behind when grabbed by the hounds

Silver Beard

Thought it was Benito that always wagered he'd walk back alive?!

Silver Beard

I didn't read that at all. Eryk can't do any spellcraft so that reference was essentially meaningless where he's concerned. Had you said they never have more than 2 spell forms... that would have made a bigger impact. I still don't see him as a threat. He's got nothing to gain by revealing him and everything to lose. Anyone who truly wanted Eryk for his abilities would equally want to silence anyone that knew he existed. Pretty sure the Elf is mature enough to know this. I would think even the elf might have a vested interest in Eryk achieving magecraft. Eryk won't make it for any human 'friends' he has; but the elf might live long enough to see Eryk cast regeneration or stasis on himself. Hypothetical, but still a vested interest in Eryk's success.

Erick Thiemke

hmmm. I checked the milage on the map. it is 800 miles through Bartiradian lands to reach Gramney...two weeks is not enough time to cover that on foot. Even on roads. I will revisit the journey plot hole. Both Ignis and Castile had the same distance but the Ignis could travel more in the open than the company

Erick Thiemke

the healer knows he has 14 affinities but showing how high they are might be a risk. i did slip into the conversation that the healer thought most of them were not usable

Thresher

I wonder how much coin Mateo will make when Eryk is discovered to be alive. His bets are one of my favorite things about this story. Thanks for the chapter.

Silver Beard

Rereading the chapter- the Healer gave a perfect lead in for a status update. He was trying to map his affinities; Eryk could have offered to let him see how well he did. Still not too late depending on what they discover with Mateo, Castille, etc. The Healer is not a political risk, centuries old, and has deep pockets- he might know of spell forms or where to find them for the affinities that haven't been touched yet: worlds, displacement, etc. Like Ignis- his favor would be another good investment.

Silver Beard

I imagine Ignis has some local gold when she ran which likely quickly ran out on the run even before she was mugged

Silver Beard

I remember speculating that he could use the Ginger as a trade for Aether burn solution before the charm amulet trade went live. He certainly didn't leave it in the pantry for Zyna when he left for Hound training

Salvo

I do think before the hound training, there was an inventory dump that commented on leaving the armor. The thousand year old ginger and cava seeds are still in there, I think.

Salvo

He has been ill for the past week so canon, the time is already there. It’s the personal funds of a private ship was my hang up. So he didn’t use empire transport, which was better. I’m just a new reader, so just ignore my scaling problems.

Silver Beard

I was more of less pointing out it's use as a Legion palace armament which might not be the best kind of recognition/advertisement to show off just now. Jordan makes an excellent point about proof of skill

Erick Thiemke

I don’t see it in the excel spreadsheet so maybe he left it

Erick Thiemke

Someone mentioned he didn’t take the armor so I will have to double check

Erick Thiemke

Maybe…it would make sense but his core is already crowded

Erick Thiemke

Eventually, yes. I have everything on my excel sheet

Erick Thiemke

If it doesn’t work time wise for you, I can add a few more days with him incapacitated

Erick Thiemke

She ported from the capital to the border and crossed Bartiradian lands. Eryk spent 7 days on a ship. Two days porting and five days laid up, giving Ignis the same amount of time as Castile and company to reach Gramney

Jordan

Regarding the selling the armor comment: Generally, finished goods requiring high skills to create are the most valuable on the market. If the purpose of it is for Ignis to sell it for gold then the armor as is would be the most lucrative. Eryk made comments back when he first received it about how nice it looked. My opinion is that she should keep it as a display piece showing her skills. The ruin swords are probably worth enough to get her started on their own.

Jordan

I think there is a ring or two as well as his spear that hasn’t gone through the identification process. Maybe other items I’m not recalling as well.

Silver Beard

Surprised he didn't use the blood compass as soon as his access was restored. Not sure it's worth selling the armor...might be better to repurpose for resources.

Salvo

How is Ignis across the sea? She was in the capital Eryk just left and then teleported twice. She even knows of the emperor’s coup. Also, she probably made Helena’s armor. It would have been more sound if ‘she knew a soldier was gonna escape here’. Eryk still hasn’t let that person out.

Lazarius

Do we know what was the jewelry with etchings of birds and fairies along a chain, that he found in the dungeon in the gnolls room ? Or we will know later ?

Sloth

I’m assuming if he were to increase his aether capacity it would be safer for him to add new affinities? Considering that should translate to a larger core?

Salvo

In this scene 1 person needed to guide her to their lodgings, and Ignis just met ‘the Goliath’. I will say Mav needs more skills to be contributing to narrative. His hammer is a crafting hammer, but I’ve yet to see him do any since the cloak and pouch was made. He could have been selling the dungeon apples or teaching himself Orc language. ‘While you were recovering I asked traders what sells well in the Bouton region, should we need to trade for my sister’s life.’

Chachi

bro yes this would be kino

Chachi

man i cant wait for the reunion

Kbzzy

How old is Ignis, though? You keep saying she’s really old so is it wise to plan long term with her?

Tetsu-nii

Fun chapter! Loved the twist with the identity of the mage healer! Thanks! ^_^

Tetsu-nii

Missing article (the part of speech)? + a typo: /defending the honor of waitres/ => /[…] of *a* waitress/? ++ /others made it to./ => /[…] made it *too*./

PatronTurtle

Eric really is treating Mav more like a servant half the time; dictating when they're leaving and to go fetch stuff. It's odd, given their current long term goal

Faa Diallo

Rip you can't leave us hanging like this

Faa Diallo

Lol can't believe I laughed at the joke

mehmed zepcan

Love this story, really well written and i enjoy the world. I tried world sphere but the first two chapter "prologue" was a harsh turn off with years of story glossed over but I love the creative concept just wish it was in a different format slice of life/ super slow build up ( wondering inn style;P) please continue wishing you even more success

Jordan

In the chapter where Eric joins the hounds in book 4 I believe there is a comment about him leaving the ceremonial armor behind. It’s mentioned specifically. That’ll need to be retconned.

Commander Lobster

Would love to see him heading a mercenary company

Nick Nicholson

Stoked for the reunion.

Gwalmeich

It's all coming together! I wonder if Eric will start his own PMC (private military company)? If he continues to gather allies, he might end up at the head of one.

Andrew

Thank you!

Zurko

Yesss! the company finally meets up again. been looking forward to it. also glad he helped Ignis. got rid of useless stuff in his space while also securing a talented Smith and her business. win-win.

Erick Thiemke

one of the interludes between books is Ignis teaching him the skills of a smith

Erick Thiemke

I like it - done

Mathias VG

Forging bonds?

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4. Next chapter will be tomorrow but writing World Sphere this afternoon/tonight. Any ideas on a chapter title? I am a bit slow dealing with the fall flu


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