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A Soldier's Life - 270 - Konstantin POV (Complete - 6300 words!)

🕑 Added 2024-09-29 02:46:24 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

Yes, they are primarily silver with a little bit of gold. Gold is found in small quantities when you mine silver. It might be a 20 to 1 or less....never went into it. i know in large scale mining operations when they purify the silver, they get some gold in the process

Jordan A

Konstantin paused in and thought and murmured to himself, “Did he now.” Remove the first ‘and’

Jordan A

“They had her killed for her family’s silver mines,” the woman spat. Konstantin searched his memory; there were only two silver mines in the Empire. Barons manage both.” I’m pretty sure in book 4 the mines are either gold mines or both gold and silver. Reference the chapter when Eryk captures both female soldiers and then lets them go.

Jordan A

“You will never get in without someone competent holding your hand,” Gilda finally said flatly, and Konstantin he smiled to himself.” Removed the ‘he’ in “and Konstantin he smiled to himself.

Brianna Stormcloud

Doing some catching up, after a break from RR, had RL things to do! 🤣Have to say I’m happy about Konstantin etc getting Sergius, and the Kettle of Souls. Also happy Ignis made it out, and all their immediate plans, it will be interesting if Raelia is waitingfor them.

Space Cadet

Couldn't tell if Helena was passed at Eryk or looking forward to seeing him. Was really getting mixed signals.

HappyNoms

1) hyper-alert -> hypervigilent 2) "I left them there,” Gilda said, non-plussed. -> delete nonplussed. It means surprised/confused, the opposite of what you intended to convey. It's notorious for accidental misuse.

Kevin O'Malley

Good crew headed for Gramney....

Hernando

With this chapter I feel like a spine was removed from my rib

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter. Good to see that there might be another Konstantin POV in the future and that Sergius is dead.

Lindasm

Loved it!

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Fast Lance

So glad that disgusting pixie was killed, vile animal

OJCOPACABANA

Same

J. L. Mullins

"...was quieter than a cat on the prowl." In a world with silencing spells and the hound boots of silence, why is this notable/surprising?

IndyBart

I’m just now reading this as I started reading this series a few days ago, but damn it’s nice to think they may all meet up again.

Andrew Crews

A stiletto pierced his eye, and he grasped (→ gripped) it momentarily before his brain realized (→ registered) he was dead. Seeing Sergius dead gave her a satisfied nod (→ she gave a satisfied nod). A stiletto pierced his eye, and he gripped it momentarily before his brain registered his death. Seeing Sergius dead, she gave a satisfied nod

Andrew Crews

If he *let use of his other hand, he was dead. If he lost use of his other hand, he was dead.

Andrew Crews

The Greko mine even produced some gold if (→ if he) recalled. When he was with Castile’s company, they had cleared some kobolds from its depths The Greko mine even produced some gold, if he recalled. When he was with Castile’s company, they had cleared some kobolds from its depths.

Andrew Crews

“They had her killed for her parent’s (→ parents’) silver mines,” the woman spat. Konstantin searched his memory; there were only two silver mines in the Empire. Barons manage both. (→ The barons manage both.)” “They had her killed for her parents’ silver mines,” the woman spat. Konstantin searched his memory; there were only two silver mines in the Empire. The barons manage both.”

Andrew Crews

A dagger appeared in her hand, and slashed (→ she slashed) the throat of one of the servants or (→ on) her way by (→ through), causing a spray of blood across herself.” A dagger appeared in her hand, and she slashed the throat of one of the servants on her way through, causing a spray of blood across herself.”

Andrew Crews

The irate mage eventually turned away and denied entrance (→ was denied entrance) The irate mage eventually turned away and was denied entrance.

Andrew Crews

He slowly made his way to a dimly lit alley nearby, settling in among the discarded debris that should have been cleared away long ago and hauled far outside the city to refuse pit (→ the refuse pit). He slowly made his way to a dimly lit alley nearby, settling in among the discarded debris that should have been cleared away long ago and hauled far outside the city to the refuse pit.

sexy Squidward

My glorious king, I know I’m about to be eating good🥹

Tyler Lanza

When I read the end I started yelling KONSTANTIN U BETTER GET THERE

Erick Thiemke

there were three edits to that chapter - all were posted. only the last is cannon

SleepingNight

Mark Corwin

This was good. Very good!

Blorcyn

I enjoyed this a lot. It was tense. There is one mistake I noticed where you use ‘I’ pushed aether into the lock rather than ‘he’.

Labruta146

My favorite pov yet! Thank you

momo2009

magic jumping due to plot is possible with author writing

momo2009

you expect character in this story to be smart?

momo2009

So one of the mastermind is too dumb to have more then one bodyguard even though they been a leader of a group of assian for years.

Erick Thiemke

Just a relative but also a changeling. Not important to plot but not sure if Gilda is going to follow Konstantin to Gramney. She needs someone to direct her to a purpose

thomas johnson

So was that the skin changer's (Gilda) son, or was he just a random snack/human?

Silver Beard

He should destroy the two-way books to further hobble the Hounds left. Sucks he can't read the cypher; but minimizing the hound's efficiency could be crucial.

Erick Thiemke

they are actually printed to order. so they are printed one at a time here in the United States

Jo

Ebooks

Jo

I have the books as I live in rural Australia so hard to get hard copies here

1536539

Can we get Octavian after that?

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

no i meant relation - southern drawl included

Erick Thiemke

all dead most likely

Erick Thiemke

no - there is an epilougue with Renna. You will get Octavians view from that

Erick Thiemke

tons of ebooks though

Erick Thiemke

hard copies? one of the few. think there have been less than 100 sold between the first two books

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

no, he is weeks behind and has a long way to travel

Erick Thiemke

this is hiralious as in high school all my papers came back with tons of red marks - "Run-on sentence" and I still never really got it. If my teacher found out I was trying to make a living writing, she would probably think I was joking

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Jordan

“Konstantin! You should have stayed whatever rock you crawled under.” A word is needed between ‘stated’ and ‘whatever’. Probably ‘at’?

Jordan

“A mage in white robes approached the pair, and they were too far away to discern the words, but the mage eventually turned away and denied entrance. “ A bit of a run on sentence. How about the following: “A mage in white robes approached the pair. They were too far away to discern the words, but the mage was eventually denied entrance and turned away.”

Lemes

There was a small mistake, apparently there was an ether medallion on Sergius' body and no one took it. It will be very interesting to see Konstantin meeting Erick again, I'm waiting for the scene.

Ivan Kanewske

Actually should be Gilda Nice catch

D375

My guess is that Octavian will end up ruling over a much smaller version of the empire. The orcs will retake their historic lands. Territory will be heavily depopulated by the goblin horde if not lost outright so the empire may claim that land but they probably won't have citizens living there. The bartiradians shouldn't be a threat considering the defeat they just suffered. However, I could see the Esenhem elves make a push for the giant city ruins with the remnants of the bartiradians forces.

Bananaboat

perhaps in a dramatic rescue scenario, it wouldn't do to have Konstantin to pop in unceremoniously

Telclivo

Also Hilda should be Helena no?

PatronTurtle

Octavian seems like a snake and lacks the power of his father to back up his goals. If that's the plan that's fine, but as things are I don't see him ruling for long and nowhere near the amount of land as the previous Empire

Deliver roo

In a previous instance the author said that the empire will still live so much so that Octavian has got a plan to keep his power. But if key characters like him never manage to get a POV chapter it is difficult to foresee when we will know more.

Prinny Knight

Let's have Konstantin join Eryks crew!

Chachi

kino is served tftc

Zurko

it definitely greatly weakened, but I don't think it'll collapse yet. there are still some strong mages and nobles left, like the earth mage that tutored zynas apprentice. and I don't think another country is gonna finish off the empire just yet because once the empire backs off from the titan ruin the other countries will fight over it. their priority is the titan artifiacs from the ruin, not ending the empire. of course, I could be wrong

Ivan Kanewske

Konstantin didn’t hesitate and changed. Hilda was on his left Changed should be charged

Andrew

Thank you!

Jo

This was a great way to finish alot of loose ends tied up. Can't wait for book 6. I just buy all of them as they are published and still read all the patreon chapters as well

PatronTurtle

Empire is pretty much dead at this point. I wonder if a new country will form or if the land will just be divided around muffin city

1536539

Next POV chapter should be Octavian’s

1536539

Thank you for the chapter, Duke Octavian is pretty much screwed at this point, he will be the emperor to an empire besieged by all major neighboring powers, he has no centurions which means very little no control over the hounds, he lost most if not all of the high mages in the empire, he antagonized the other first citizens when he grabbed power and ascended the throne, he just lost the ability to explore quelora. It would actually be impressive if he managed to survive the year.

D375

Thank you for the Konstantin POV chapter. This wraps up a lot of loose ends and sets up a lot of potential plot lines for the future. My hunch is that Konstantin, Helena, and Sylph will go to Gramney and meet up with Castille / Selene. From there, I would like Konstantin to meet up with Eryk and the rest of the company to rescue Maveith's sister. It could work if Eryk and company are held up by Raelia.

Gravonhaft

Thanks for the chapter, really a good adventure with Konstantin. Wonder what happened to the other legionnaires that they rescued and wreak havoc. Kinda confused with 'Gilda' name now, so many times it was typed as 'Hilda' which make me wonder which one is the right one 😂. Also, did Eryk and Aesop conversation with Sergius using those books also using cypher? Kinda forgot about that. As Eryk can also read Aesop book too.

Alex

also - instead of " relation " i think you meant relative

Jordan

This is probably the best chapter I’ve read in this story so far. Really enjoyed it. Great writing!

Alex

Awesome outline of a Grand Chapter!!!!! thank you

Dominic French

Konstantin is badass lol, love it.

Jordan

“Konstantin didn’t hesitate and changed.” Changed -> charged

Erick Thiemke

they were 1) Konstantin goes to captial and gets help getting into the palace 2) Konstantin finds and kills Sergius 3) Konstantin retrieves the kettle of souls 4) Konstantin learns from Helena that Eryk said Gramney is a fine place this time of year

Erick Thiemke

2nd and 3rd of 4....6300 words, 3x a normal chapter so counts as two! Needs some work and maybe a plot point forced here or there. Can you beleive the outline for this chapter was four sentences and it took 6300 words to address those four sentences - ridiculous!


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