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A Soldier's Life - 275 - Final Preparations (final edit 6-13-25)

🕑 Added 2024-10-09 23:01:32 +0000 UTC

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Kevin O'Malley

Tyftc

Rich Larson

"approval to accpet." Should be accept.

Erick Thiemke

thanks - fixed on the master and there was a seoncd occurance as well that was fixed

Booleans

"griffin’s basket for Blado" Typo for "Baldo".

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Adamant

I know I’m late joining this but just bought my membership and am catching up. All that to say that I think it’s hilarious Konstantin’s leadership style of grunting seems to be what Erik is emulating, even if subconsciously.

J. L. Mullins

... Why has he stopped asking about healing potions since he left the empire? He was hunting them up trying everything he could to get more of them, and now he's out of the empire interacting with adventurer guilds that should have them available, he doesn't ask after them anymore. It's a bit crazy making. 😋

Andrew Crews

I took a seat next to Blaze. “Any fortune?” He (→ he) asked as he shifted in his uneasily (→ uneasily in his) seat. I took a seat next to Blaze. ‘Any fortune?’ he asked as he shifted uneasily in his seat.

Anel Alic

He had the other horses when he was a hound

SHANE SMITH

Was his horse always named Ginger? I thought she was named something else.

Jordan

Ginger was also setting the pecking order among the horses, even bossing Maveith’s massive black mount. …even bossing ‘around’ Maveith’s massive…

hrs

i cant remember the details from earlier chapters but he can always study generic info about displacement spellforms if he hasnt picked one already. also the occasional mention that he studies magic or combat skills in general in his amulet prevents the character from feeling broken, skill progression-wise

hrs

ehhhh thats a seems like a stretch as far as story mechanics go. the guild master can be an asshole indefinitely / as needed for the plot. the elf scout just trying to join the group is enough to get the point across without wasting more time by actually having her join the group.

Jordan

I 100% agree that Eryk using his dimensional space to kill is OP. However, it has some limitations. It bottoms him out and doesn’t work if his opponent has a protection amulet (I don’t remember the specific name of them. Sorry) and still bottoms him out. Still very OP no doubt about it. I just hope that new tactics/abilities don’t get added that make Eryk that much more OP too quickly or else there isn’t any real struggle left in the action within the story.

Alex

The dimensional - one kill is still op. When you are fighting 2-3-5 high threat enemies it becomes a two option outcome : 1 you are dead and book is over 2 You live and it is either your swordsmanship is OP or your magic is OP. Or a combo of both. OR you run away and you escape skill is OP ( overpowering perception of all of your high grade enemies)

Jordan

Interesting tactics and I agree it’s possible for him to do this with what we know now. I hope this tactic doesn’t make it into the book as the challenge in 99% of all melee combat goes away. Very OP

Erick Thiemke

Im cutting the studying of the displacement spell form from this chapter. He was going to use it to escape with Maveith's sister at the end of the chapter but. am going in a different direction to resolve that

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Deliver roo

He could transfer half of the weapon at the right time and the enemy would die in a few exchanges anyway, without the need to bottom out his aether. It does seem like, thanks to his space magic, he has got complete control over his surroundings and, in an arms contest, is invincible in close quarters. To be honest I always expected him to start encountering groups of enemy magicians to face a new challenge and improve his magic related abilities.

Jordan

The arrow crossed the distance the third time, knocking the apple sitting atop the archery target off. Apple -> Apple core

Jordan

“He got appreciative nods from the spectators and a weird first pump from Benito.” First -> Fist ?

Silver Beard

Missing a big one here. The Elf Archer was trying to ingratiate herself and fails to make it. The GuildMaster makes a personal visit to say if this gig doesn't go flawlessly- Eryk's screwed. Raelia's Aunt disapproves of her choice to join the company. That's a recipe for intrigue and sabotage. The Dwarf doesn't even have to die... just get badly wounded under Eryk's protection detail and the GM can write them off and he can use his position to shield his agent...the Archer from retaliation. Bandits are supposed to be non-existent, but it's still possible. If the Elf tracker is legitimately good... she could easily direct some beasts their way and then add to the chaos.

Deliver roo

I confirm I’m confused. I remembered him not even being in the seventies for displacement, waiting to choose the best spellforms he could. All of a sudden Eryk is already studing a new one and it’s something he already had at his disposal in the book he got.

Silver Beard

Eryk might have a tent, but what of the others? Hopefully Raelia packed one herself.

Salvo

Raelia’s poor horse, you know Baldo is gonna upgrade at some point… then the horse is useful one last time..🥺🍽️

Salvo

What about cutting a hole in shield or a spear? I thought the coolest move would be trip a guy, square cut the ground where his feet just left, which they then fall and drop the square on top of them. Grave-plot no jutsu.

saber

He has poor aether how will this work?

Erick Thiemke

I think he originally started studying the dimension door spell form…my memory is not great that many chapters back and I have notes on it. But the plot had a plan to use it eventually. I want to say he spent some time on the ship as well reviewing a displacement spell form in the writing but I didn’t mention which one there

Erick Thiemke

As long as he feeds aether into it, it would stay open. But the aether cost is dependent on distance

Kbzzy

Can you move lots of people through dimensional door or does it break after Eryk uses it

Otto Kovar

I think this being a novel that has yet to keep any expierence that eryk had on desia from the reader, it seems wierd to exlude something so trivial. If the mystery was something like a plan and we would discover the plan as we went, sure keep secret and we will see when it happens, but his choices in spell forms, seems so basic that it just feels weird not knowing. The way it is handeled, i think confused me and other readers, going back and checking whether we had forgotten it ever being mentioned. Id say mention it or rewrite the passage to let the reader know they only get the info once Eryk has learned it or needs to use it. Like: After much deliberation I had decided on a displacment spell form and I used the time to start studying it.

Erick Thiemke

Yes, a quick, safe, one shot transport if he has enough aether to cover the distance

Ivan Kanewske

Can he use that out of a dungeon? That's basically an escape set up right?

Erick Thiemke

But spoiler…he is studying dimensional door. Anchor point somewhere and then use an archway to connect the two points. Aether holds the doorway open and you can pass through further the distance the more aether required. After you pass through, anchor point is destroyed and needs to be reset.

Erick Thiemke

It was never stated which one he was working on. No he doesn’t have the aether for it….yet

Ivan Kanewske

Also he shouldn't have enough mana at this time for any displacement spell in the 80s right?

Ivan Kanewske

When did I miss which displacement spell form Eryk is working on

Alex

Good explanation. TY

Erick Thiemke

He can only a block shape. He was probably avoiding so in order to keep his secrets. If he tried to get a complete weapon, then he would get the hand of the wielder as well, triggering the bottoming out of his aether

Bananaboat

If you're reading this on a computer you can increase the zoom on the tab. If you're reading it on mobile you should be able to zoom with your fingers. I usually read on computer and the zoom set to 200% myself.

Erick Thiemke

Fortuna is the god of luck so I thought it fit well

Erick Thiemke

It’s fixed by Patreon. Change your viewing preferences

Shane clark

On a side note, any chance of making the font a little bigger? I have to send it as a file to a reader app and sometimes it takes a while to transfer. Sorry I’m not to tech savvy…

Alex

Stealing a sword when his enemy blocks is pretty much a win. And way cheaper then teleporting their head in his dimensional space

Silver Beard

robbing someone of a weapon doesn't necessarily neutralize them as an opponent. Considering Eryk's tiny aether pool he has to be strategic in how he uses it.

Alex

Yup doing that will make Erik be a supplier for Igniz

Eriach

A good way to make money for the blacksmith, melt down the arms and armor as needed for metal for work with

Ford Engstrom

Just caught up from just starting the other day, still tough getting to the end of a new chapter and remembering at the end that I have to be patient now

PatronTurtle

Might be a good idea to send a note to her aunt, just in case. Better to hedge bets now than have to deal with a potential kidnapping charge if R wasn't telling the whole truth

Jordan

I sat next to Blaze. “Any fortune?” Fortune sounds really weird. I know it’s another world which is why you’re using it (my guess anyway), but luck sounds much better to a reader.

Jordan

Take them out to break into your bodies and familiarize yourself with them. Into -> in

Daniel kanevsky

Thanks for the chapter!

Alex

Quick Q :Why can't Eryk put his enemies weapons in his dimensional space? this should be possible without using all of his aether. It is almost guaranteed win/kill for him and his dimensional ability becomes helpful against not one but few enemies ( depending on the final aether cost of "stealing" individual items like sword/shield/armor pieces). Even if he has to touch items every time someone nicks him they will get their weapon "absorbed" by Eryk.

Andrew

Thank you!

Aaron Weingrad

Tftc

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4. Next is a World Sphere chapter and then the next Soldier right after


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