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A Soldier Life 295 - When It Rains (final edit 7-3-25)

🕑 Added 2024-11-14 22:56:24 +0000 UTC

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Kevin O'Malley

By my math Eryk needs 6 Apex Convergence essences to become a god.

Kevin O'Malley

TYFTC

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapters. I hope the orcs are honorable and believe in paying their debts. They are going to owe him.

Michael Neal

All this trouble for a fight that isn't theirs. There better be a sister to rescue after this is all over.

Brianna Stormcloud

'Luck has no mercy'... Though I think "when it rains" is also apt!

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

think i edited this - search does nt show it

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Andrew Crews

”[With] my spyglass, I could see it turning, [and I guessed] it was sniffing the air.” Final Edited Version: “With my spyglass, I could see it turning, and I guessed it was sniffing the air.”

Andrew Crews

This world had [a] millennia[-]worth of history. I wiggled it out, moss having grown in [the] seams over time, making it snug. Tarnasha watched me curiously, and when I freed and dropped the stone, he approached. I pulled out the blades one at a time, each coated with rust. “Glasha, come look at these,” Tarnasha called over [to] the Chronologicaler. She had been discussing something with Mynasha but joined us. In the end, there were ten long swords [that had been] secreted away.”* Final Edited Version: *“This world had a millennia-worth of history. I wiggled it out, moss having grown in the seams over time, making it snug. Tarnasha watched me curiously, and when I freed and dropped the stone, he approached. I pulled out the blades one at a time, each coated with rust. “Glasha, come look at these,” Tarnasha called over to the Chronologicaler. She had been discussing something with Mynasha but joined us. In the end, there were ten long swords that had been secreted away.”*

Andrew Crews

As the group went to work, I walked [through] the cave using earth speak to ensure no unwanted surprises.” Final Edited Version: “As the group went to work, I walked through the cave using earth speak to ensure no unwanted surprises.”

Andrew Crews

There was not a lot of tree growth around it, giving thirty yards of uninterrupted [sight]. Final Edited Version: “There was not a lot of tree growth around it, providing thirty yards of uninterrupted sight.”

Andrew Crews

“You need to accept [that] the seat of the Supreme is lost.” Final Edited Version: “You need to accept that the seat of the Supreme is lost.”

Eriach

Lol that's a good one

Alex

When it rains … These are not the humans you are looking for

Dominic French

The strongest enemies have the best loot/essence hopefully

Salvo

Title suggestion- “Clerical error: outflanking superior numbers. ”

Brett Ulakovic

Awe shit was what I was thinking. but went with a word play for shale for the cave

visigoth

Because boy has Eryk been stuck in the middle with these orcs

visigoth

Title suggestion: “Trolls to the left of me, ogres to the right…” Or is that too long lol

LundeFool

It's a common mistake. It is the sun and dryness that destroys the scent particles. Scent trails last much longer when it is humid or wet. So a drizzle is the best weather to go with a tracking dog. Heavy rainfall can wash away scent trails in areas with little vegetation

Erick Thiemke

Is that like “Hell, no”

PatronTurtle

Trolls are big enough that they'll give Major or Apex essenses of Constitution? Or maybe Strength?

Andrew

Thank you!

Brett Ulakovic

Thank for chapter Title suggestion AWE SHALE

Jordan

Enjoyed the chapter. Thanks!

Erick Thiemke

Sorry about that - I selected Kitchen Sink on the release instead of Seraphim. I deleted the old post

Erick Thiemke

4th of 4 for last cycle. Hopefully two Seraphim chapters by tomorrow night. Sat will be Town Builder and Sun World Sphere. This chapter was supposed to be a fight but it ended up building suspense instead. Not sure it worked and I hate the title so welcome suggestions. Lots of typos in this chapter. I will edit it tomorrow morning before continuing working on the next


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