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A Soldier's Life - 296 - Trolls To The Left Of Me, Ogres To The Right…Here I Am, Stuck In The Middle With You (Final edit 7-3-25)

🕑 Added 2024-11-16 02:39:41 +0000 UTC

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Battleborn

“As our ears rang from the thunder, Glasha yelled to us, “Two trolls and two more dark ogres coming—about a mile away.” Need to remove the first quotation mark.

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Repeating word, "toweringtowering"

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Mercutio Montano

I like this line. It explains a divergence of tone in few words without distortion of its meaning. [“Is that all?” I screamed back, intending sarcasm, but yelling so everyone could hear muted the intention.]

Shelby harris

Corned! Ha! Lol

Andrew Crews

Strike the troll!” I yelled as I pulled the black spear into my hands. It was no time for secrets. The howling ogre [jerked] its chin [up] as it tried to reach my blade, and I drove the spear under its chin, straight up into its brain. Before it could fall and take [my weapon] with it, I extracted the spear and returned it to my dimensional space. I would answer the curious and amazed gazes later. I [braced] my foot on the now definitely dead ogre and worked out my sword. Raelia’s fireball sped over me toward the approaching troll, which was either reluctant to break the tree line or [waiting] for its companions. It covered its face as the flaming ball struck and engulfed it. While everyone else was blinded, my night vision adapted instantly. I watched the troll reel, but it didn’t seem [phased] as the incendiary washed over it.”* Final Edited Version: *“Strike the troll!” I yelled as I pulled the black spear into my hands. It was no time for secrets. The howling ogre jerked its chin up as it tried to reach my blade, and I drove the spear under its chin, straight up into its brain. Before it could fall and take my weapon with it, I extracted the spear and returned it to my dimensional space. I would answer the curious and amazed gazes later. I braced my foot on the now definitely dead ogre and worked out my sword. Raelia’s fireball sped over me toward the approaching troll, which was either reluctant to break the tree line or waiting for its companions. It covered its face as the flaming ball struck and engulfed it. While everyone else was blinded, my night vision adapted instantly. I watched the troll reel, but it didn’t seem phased as the incendiary washed over it.”*

Andrew Crews

As our ears rang from the thunder, Glasha yelled to us, “Two trolls and two more dark ogres coming—about a mile away.” “Is that all?” I screamed back, [my sarcasm lost] in the need to yell so everyone could hear. “So far! I [just] searched out to two miles,” she yelled back.”* Final Edited Version: *“As our ears rang from the thunder, Glasha yelled to us, “Two trolls and two more dark ogres coming—about a mile away.” “Is that all?” I screamed back, my sarcasm lost in the need to yell so everyone could hear. “So far! I just searched out to two miles,” she yelled back.”*

Andrew Crews

The ogres that had been chasing the deer returned, [their] sucking, muddy, echoing footfalls [filling] the air. They moved out of the tree line ahead of the troll. I wouldn’t say I liked smart monsters. “Throw your glowstones!” I commanded. We could not fight in the dark at such a disadvantage. Five stones [flew] from their pouches, arcing through the air. One [sank] into a muddy puddle, and another disappeared between two pieces of shale, but the remaining three radiated enough light in the misty rain to see. Three glowstones now cast shadows outward, [revealing] the outline of the ogres at the forest’s edge. I looked over at Mynasha, who had wholly disrobed, motes of blue aether crackling around her as she wove a spell form in her hands. I [suspected] it was my aether-infused eyes that [allowed] me to see the spell workings more clearly—a benefit I would have to explore if we escaped this mess.”

Andrew Crews

The troll’s head appeared to me about one hundred yards away, [towering] about twenty [feet] from the ground. I was glad the others couldn’t see the hideous creature in the dark—its eyes [went] wide with surprise at what it had just found, and its mouth [formed] a smile, revealing jagged, crooked teeth.” Final Edited Version: “The troll’s head appeared to me about one hundred yards away, towering about twenty feet from the ground. I was glad the others couldn’t see the hideous creature in the dark—its eyes went wide with surprise at what it had just found, and its mouth formed a smile, revealing jagged, crooked teeth.”

Andrew Crews

While the cave was good shelter, it also meant we were [cornered]. We didn’t have time to saddle [up] and flee into the night.” Final Edited Version: “While the cave was good shelter, it also meant we were cornered. We didn’t have time to saddle up and flee into the night.”

Apophixas

Nah, gotta remember the air shields aren't actually THAT strong or large. He probably get one to stumble a bit, but it likely wouldn't fall, and would probably break the shield.

daniel dantas

But my suggestion doesn't stand up? all right, the troll has almost the same strength as a giant, but if he starts moving his arm and bumps into a wall, shouldn't that stop him? he could easily break it, but wouldn't those seconds be crucial? it seems like a valid tactic to use against large enemies. Analyze the movements and at the first sign of the beginning of a blow, put up 1 or several air shields to hold it up, which normally wouldn't hold up, but would hold up for a few seconds due to the surprise and lack of initial strength, right?

daniel dantas

I think you're right, in my mind this would work, thinking that the troll would attack in an extremely specific way and pulling the arm behind the body, this would allow for an easy blow

Erick Thiemke

unlikely. the mountain troll's strength is almost that of a storm giant (noted twice in teh chapters). the air shields would not have stopped strikes. the trolls are 20' tall and have long limbs for extreme reach. even with the spear he would have been hard-pressed for a killing blow to reach the head. since it is a troll, a heart strike would not be fatal (noted in chapter)

daniel dantas

Great chapter, just one caveat, did he need to use his dimensional pocket to kill the troll? It seemed reckless and ineffective, reckless because anyone who looks at the body will know the lie and ineffective because he has already killed many trolls, he should already be experienced so a combination of air shield with spear should be fatal and fast, it's basic physics, no matter how strong someone is, if you put a wall at the start of a movement, it won't have 1/10 of the real strength and if you combine that with a weapon that cuts through everything like butter, at the first sign of surprise from the troll colliding with an air shield, eryk could pierce the heart or even the neck of the beast. I understand the urgency, but this tactic would be just as quick and wouldn't risk another secret

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PatronTurtle

Eryk... Do not death flag your group like that final line

Mason W

Me: “Oh, how is he going to kill a troll solo? Air shield trip to spear attack?” “Oh, duh.”

The Cobra Den

Nice chapter. Thx

Shane clark

and I watched Troll Real. watched THE troll real

Shane clark

A thundering boom deafened me as the ogre exploded is a gore mess. In a mess of gore.

NightRider

She started shedding all he clothes as I cursed under my breath. Should read, all HER clothes

Chachi

watch glasha tell eryk “i saw what you did to that troll”

Dragoon9

Should give some good essences :) really enjoy that he is getting stronger faster now

NightRider

and I watched Troll Real Real should be REEL

Jordan

She could heal broken bones but would do what she could. She couldn’t?

Garrett

She" could" heal broken bones but would do what she could. Could -> couldn't

Andrew

Thank you!

Silver Beard

time of secrets is past... use the collector on all the fallen. Two cents Took too long to sever the 2nd head... if he could have done it with a single swipe it would have been believable that he managed it the first time. Even a cursory inspection of the first decapitated troll will show the straight cut he failed with the 2nd.

william wallace

Nice chapter. Might be worth another sentence or two on the troll he kills. It was over so fast I almost missed it. Was a good demonstration of how skilled/powerful/dangerous Erik is that he had no real difficulty killing it but seems like it could use some emphasis given how much time is spent on the rest of the fight.

Jordan

It fellow ogre stumbled from the concussive blast. It -> it’s

Jordan

“A thundering boom deafened me as the ogre exploded is a gore mess.” …ogre exploded ‘in’ a gore….

Joel

Very few grammar errors, story is lit. Thx

Sean Kauffman

"She could heal broken bones but would do what she could" is this a typo?

incognito

Thank you for the chapter

Silver Beard

shedding all he [her] clothes She could [NOT] heal broken bones but would do what she could.

Erick Thiemke

1st of 4 for cycle. Had lots of things come up today. Working on next chapter now. I didn't read or edit this one and will do it tomorrow.


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