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A Soldier's Life - 297 - Master Baiter Again (final edit 7-5-25)

🕑 Added 2024-11-17 01:16:03 +0000 UTC

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Battleborn

Accidental carriage return after the word "and". "Aether emmited from the ground and Glasha’s eyes were closed as she reported."

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter. I wonder if part of this is Eryk trying to keep being (and seeing himself as) a good guy and not just a slowly darkening morally gray character.

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

think I got this...

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

i think i cleaned this up

Erick Thiemke

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Kai Hutto

I don’t get why he would be a first for someone that would possibly try to steal his collector from him

Mercutio Montano

Ah. Rats. I am unobservant The necromancer Orc kid.... the one that accidentally controlled weather, raised the dead my mourning.... he was, possibly, a world walker as well.

Andrew Crews

They will say you don’t have enough honor to possess something so precious, or that you were too selfish to own it. They always [find] something if they see something they want. Some of the Caliphate clerics are the same,” she explained, [referring to] their convoluted logic.” Final Edited Version: “They will say you don’t have enough honor to possess something so precious, or that you were too selfish to own it. They always find something if they see something they want. Some of the Caliphate clerics are the same,” she explained, referring to their convoluted logic.”

Andrew Crews

Just because the mason only saw a dozen trolls, that doesn’t mean there [aren’t] more. We could be walking into an army.” Seeing their stubborn gazes, I growled, “Move along the cliff. We leave now.” It was in the direction they wanted to go, and I was more worried about possibly losing the essence. Blaze understood what I wanted and helped get everyone moving quickly. Mateo was delicate in his walk, and Benito had his arm in a splint as they hung back. They disappeared into the dark morning, [their] hooves and boots crunching the shale as they went. The last troll gave [me] a minor healing essence, and I pulled two minor strength essences from two of the four ogres. Benito and Mateo were [given] the strength essences when I caught up to them. After we cleared the shale from the cliff, we diverted into the woods, moving slowly in the graying morning. The rain hadn’t relented, but I decided to give everyone some rest under the pines.* Final Edited Version: *“Just because the mason only saw a dozen trolls, that doesn’t mean there aren’t more. We could be walking into an army.” Seeing their stubborn gazes, I growled, “Move along the cliff. We leave now.” It was in the direction they wanted to go, and I was more worried about possibly losing the essence. Blaze understood what I wanted and helped get everyone moving quickly. Mateo was delicate in his walk, and Benito had his arm in a splint as they hung back. They disappeared into the dark morning, their hooves and boots crunching the shale as they went. The last troll gave me a minor healing essence, and I pulled two minor strength essences from two of the four ogres. Benito and Mateo were given the strength essences when I caught up to them. After we cleared the shale from the cliff, we diverted into the woods, moving slowly in the graying morning. The rain hadn’t relented, but I decided to give everyone some rest under the pines.”*

Andrew Crews

I studied her for a moment before nodding. She was either a good poker player or [she] had not been spying on me. “We are moving out now. The stench is [too] much to sleep [through], and I want to get away from the battle site in case there are others. We should go to Becar.”* Final Edited Version: *“I studied her for a moment before nodding. She was either a good poker player or she had not been spying on me. “We are moving out now. The stench is too much to sleep through, and I want to get away from the battle site in case there are others. We should go to Becar.”*

Andrew Crews

We searched the body from a distance, [avoiding] delving into its large sack of animal and orc parts. We all agreed there was nothing worth harvesting. [“Let’s] get back to the others and get the horses saddled. Maybe we can convince the clerics we have done enough.” We arrived back at the cave to find Raelia standing watch alone. Well, that was not [entirely] true, because Glasha was using her scrying spell form. “Anything?” I asked her.* Final Edited Version: *“We searched the body from a distance, avoiding delving into its large sack of animal and orc parts. We all agreed there was nothing worth harvesting. “Let’s get back to the others and get the horses saddled. Maybe we can convince the clerics we have done enough.” We arrived back at the cave to find Raelia standing watch alone. Well, that was not entirely true, because Glasha was using her scrying spell form. “Anything?” I asked her.*

Andrew Crews

As I used the collector on the troll, [gathering] [an] other major healing essence, I waited for Blaze to ask his questions. “Did Castile know?” he finally asked.”* Final Edited Version: *“As I used the collector on the troll, gathering another major healing essence, I waited for Blaze to ask his questions. “Did Castile know?” he finally asked.”*

Andrew Crews

*“Yes, it only works once, and it takes me about half an hour to recover aether to do it again.” I put the white pearl with silver and gold swirls into my belt. I wanted to [space out my] affinities. (Question: why space/spread them out?) Maveith’s voice echoed softly, “Eryk is how we survived the Shimmering Labyrinth. Without his magic, there [was] no way he (we?) would have rejoined you.” “And the spear?” Blaze asked.* Final Edited Version: *“Yes, it only works once, and it takes me about half an hour to recover aether to do it again.” I put the white pearl with silver and gold swirls into my belt. I wanted to space out my affinities. Maveith’s voice echoed softly, “Eryk is how we survived the Shimmering Labyrinth. Without his magic, there was no way he would have rejoined you.”

Andrew Crews

*“None of the clerics volunteered to come with us, but I could see Mynasha was tired. I addressed Glasha, “Keep your sight focused far afield so we [aren’t] surprised. Raelia, [if] she sees a threat, you can explode a fireball in the sky to warn us.” I pulled my cloak around me and nodded to Blaze and Maveith. “Walk behind me with your glowstones,” I [said].”* Final Edited Version: *“None of the clerics volunteered to come with us, but I could see Mynasha was tired. I addressed Glasha, “Keep your sight focused far afield so we aren’t surprised. Raelia, if she sees a threat, you can explode a fireball in the sky to warn us.” I pulled my cloak around me and nodded to Blaze and Maveith. “Walk behind me with your glowstones,” I said.*”

daniel dantas

I just see a big, beautiful pile of essences and a great reason for mynasha to be late, if they defeat these enemies, he will have perfect justification and honor to be able to participate, as for the essences, if I'm not crazy, eryk has 30 healing, with what he has already collected and will collect, I think he can reach 37, if he dreams big, 40, I don't think it heals bones yet, but it will greatly increase the healing.

Salvo

Thanks for that, but it now has a typo ‘getting and other major healing essence’ should be ‘getting another major healing essence’

Salvo

The ‘hidden’ knowledge is consuming a physical essence maintains the stat for years, causing people to live longer from eating a constitution essence is one example. Giving out the minor essences keeps their bodies in a highly trained state. Eryk should probably read all his team members stats. he did at one point for Maveith and I think Raelia. Eryk hasn’t reached his peak in strength either, but I suspect he can only gain from Apex now, a squared value is described for magic affinities, likely for physical abilities as well.

ShadowOfHavoc

We are at the point here where Eryk needs to get off the fence and make a decision. Is he helping the clerics and becmoing Mynasha's First, or are they going to get back to the mission of saving Maveith's sister. He has to be a leader now, he has injured and will lose someone if they fight the trolls and ogres.

ShadowOfHavoc

She is trying to win Eryk's trust so that he willing becomes Mynasha's First. She knows for a fact that if she tells the other about his secrets he will not help them and they need his help more than he needs her's.

Erick Thiemke

I don’t set the font. You should be able to change it on the iPhone if you are using a web browser and not the app

John Schroeder

This is a Great story. If only the Patreon app on iPhone could make the font bigger. I don’t suppose it makes a difference if you make the font bigger when you post the story? Catching all the way up after buying book 3 on Amazon with such small font was not ideal. I see people on Reddit also blaming Patreon for not allowing font size increases.

M van Dongen

Too short a time frame.

Deliver roo

Won’t Eryk’s physical stats go down sooner or later if he only consumes magic essences? Or the affinities are connected to the body somehow and it is sufficient to consume any essence to maintain every stat?

Alex

It is NOT that she is keeping his secret at this moment - but she SAID she will. At the same time she is definitely on guard against Eryk - he has tricks and you don’t want to fu$k with that

Joel

Maybe she has been a lone wolf in the caliphate, where not many respect her work? His knowledge of the storm giant's city is probably a the true end goal.

Erick Thiemke

added a sentence. it looks like i didnt have it in there but I had added the essence to the excel spread sheet

Erick Thiemke

Wait, this is good? Town Builder it is a different genre and spawned from my earlier writings. It is a 'trapped in the game' genre. Try three chapters and if it doesnt click for you then it doesnt click

John Schroeder

Is town builder near as good as this?

daniel dantas

I don't understand, she barely knows eryk and he's a human, why would she keep his secret and not blackmail him? And she even warned him to be careful with Mynasha? Why wouldn't she put the caliphate above secrets? (technically she didn't even answer, she just diverted the subject to Mynasha and left) I feel she needs a bit more explanation to ease the paranoia, eryk and glasha are not friends or close, it's not the same as eryk and zinya so... Why?

Sean Kauffman

Agreed, it reads like the troll that had it's blood collected was never harvested for essence

Silver Beard

[S]He checked her work and called over Mynasha

Erick Thiemke

Two major healing essences and one minor healing essence

Salvo

Wait, so the troll you killed this chapter didn’t get its essence collected? Or the minor healing was from it and it’s way later in the sequence of events? I thought that last essence was from Mynasha’s kill.

KipBR

I love the idea of him helping out a bit more, it expands on his character. He helps when he feels like he can, and in this instance he can - he took out two of the trolls before, and if they get the enemies to sortie then it won't be all of them - they should be able to reasonably survive.

PatronTurtle

The reveal to Blaze went pretty well. A good nights sleep and I think he'll make the Otherworlder connection. Blaze is pretty smart

Jordan

Enjoyed the chapter. Even though Mynasha will be late to the choosing she’ll have the moral high ground since she was doing what a leader should do. I like where the story is going in this arc.

Prinny Knight

His self healing is going to get quite the upgrade after this.

visigoth

Recapturing the fort, rescuing the citizens, and avenging their dead sounds like a good excuse for being late to the Choosing. Even if the orcs are a bit pushy, he is deep beneath enemy lines and at least they’re the devils he knows.

Brett Ulakovic

Thanks for chapter

Oldfaithful

Time to grind some sweet healing essence. Saving the civilians is just a nice bonus for the MC. XD

Andrew

Thank you!

Erick Thiemke

2nd of 4 for cycle. Monday and Tuesday for next chapters. Onto Town Builder. This is a draft chapter...let me know how you feel about the MC 'helping'


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