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A Soldier's Life - 298 - Fish In A Barrel (final edit 7-5-25)

🕑 Added 2024-11-19 01:39:40 +0000 UTC

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Battleborn

I trotted past her and stopped at her gray mount to shield behind the boulder where is [it] was staked. Final edited version: I trotted past her and stopped at her gray mount to shield behind the boulder where it was staked.

Natox Biohazard

First part needs reworked Chapter 298: Fish In A Barrel I went with Maveith and Mynasha to scout the nexus, not completely convinced the cleric could deliver as promi Chapter 298: Fish In A Barrel I went with Maveith and Mynasha to scout the nexus, not completely convinced the cleric could deliver as promised

Erick Thiemke

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Andrew Crews

Chapter title: Shocking Conclusion

Andrew Crews

A thundering company of over two hundred orc warriors and clerics surrounded us, gaping at the carnage. A dark-skinned orc with tattoos [stepped forward], appearing to be in charge, and addressed us. “I am Warlord Krage. You adventurers have done the Caliphate great honor in battle.”* Final Edited Version: A thundering company of over two hundred orc warriors and clerics surrounded us, gaping at the carnage. A dark-skinned orc with tattoos stepped forward, appearing to be in charge, and addressed us. “I am Warlord Krage. You adventurers have done the Caliphate great honor in battle.”*

Andrew Crews

I watched as the charging ogres rushed forward, oblivious to the fate that awaited them. Nervousness [settled in] as the lead ogre closed [to] within a hundred yards. The [ogres] were barely staggered in their approach, and I didn’t think Mynasha would have enough time to take them all down, even with them bunched together. Just before the ogres reached fifty yards, the cleric stepped out, revealing herself, her hand stretched out, and lightning dashed forth, lassoing the leg of the lead ogre. The cleric released her end of the tether, and it recoiled [toward] the ogre in an explosion and flash. My eyes were not affected, and I saw the ogre’s leg [obliterated], blown off its body. The concussive force and sound [staggered] the others around it. The surprise had slowed them. A breath later, another lightning bolt lassoed a second ogre, this time around the chest. I could tell by the thickness of the lightning that it was not as powerful as what she had used on the trolls. When she released this time, the strike blew large chunks of flesh away and caused the ogre to stagger and fall. My attention was caught as the noise and light show [spooked] her mount, and the large gray had already freed one of his stakes. A third and fourth lightning strike [flashed] behind me as I tried unsuccessfully to get the horse to calm down from atop Ginger. My attention was split as Mynasha slowed the ogres’ rush. I assumed they were blinded, deafened, and confused as well. The trolls were still coming but had slowed at the lightning onslaught. She was actually doing it. A fifth ogre was lassoed and [obliterated]. The remaining two ogres were disoriented and blinded as they tripped over parts of their companions. My ears were ringing, so I couldn’t hear the ogres howling in pain. Her next lightning strike targeted a troll who had come within her range. If she failed to take it down in one strike, she would have to flee or risk being overrun.”* Final Edited Version: *“I watched as the charging ogres rushed forward, oblivious to the fate that awaited them. Nervousness settled in as the lead ogre closed to within a hundred yards. The ogres were barely staggered in their approach, and I didn’t think Mynasha would have enough time to take them all down, even with them bunched together. Just before the ogres reached fifty yards, the cleric stepped out, revealing herself, her hand stretched out, and lightning dashed forth, lassoing the leg of the lead ogre. The cleric released her end of the tether, and it recoiled toward the ogre in an explosion and flash. My eyes were not affected, and I saw the ogre’s leg obliterated, blown off its body. The concussive force and sound staggered the others around it. The surprise had slowed them. A breath later, another lightning bolt lassoed a second ogre, this time around the chest. I could tell by the thickness of the lightning that it was not as powerful as what she had used on the trolls. When she released this time, the strike blew large chunks of flesh away and caused the ogre to stagger and fall. My attention was caught as the noise and light show spooked her mount, and the large gray had already freed one of his stakes. A third and fourth lightning strike flashed behind me as I tried unsuccessfully to get the horse to calm down from atop Ginger. My attention was split as Mynasha slowed the ogres’ rush. I assumed they were blinded, deafened, and confused as well. The trolls were still coming but had slowed at the lightning onslaught. She was actually doing it. A fifth ogre was lassoed and obliterated. The remaining two ogres were disoriented and blinded as they tripped over parts of their companions. My ears were ringing, so I couldn’t hear the ogres howling in pain. Her next lightning strike targeted a troll who had come within her range. If she failed to take it down in one strike, she would have to flee or risk being overrun.”*

Andrew Crews

When I noticed Mynasha’s horse tethered in the distance, a boulder crashed to my right, sending a spray of dirt [as it] skipp[ed] down the road. I turned back, and the group had reached the ogre pit and stopped. The trolls were angrily tossing rocks at us, and I kicked Ginger to get her off the road as more boulders [crashed] down. “I think they are angry,” I told Ginger as I scanned the sky for the arching rocks. The trolls probably planned to push me into the ogre pit, thinking I had bypassed it. I was fortunate [that] only two trolls seemed motivated to throw boulders at me. It was easy enough to judge their trajectory and move Ginger in plenty of time. After a dozen or so futile throws, the trolls seemed to [start] an argument. One troll eventually punched another, sending it crashing to the ground in a tumult of limbs. Then, the ogres were unleashed [at] a barking order from the troll. The ogres broke into a run and, weirdly, had a cadence to their steps. Seven ogres [running together] could create tremors even from almost half a mile away. I didn’t wait long before retreating. Approaching the stone where Mynasha hid, I could smell the ozone in the air. She was primed and ready. The question was whether she could recharge fast enough to kill the rushing ogres and trolls.”* Final Edited Version: *“When I noticed Mynasha’s horse tethered in the distance, a boulder crashed to my right, sending a spray of dirt as it skipped down the road. I turned back, and the group had reached the ogre pit and stopped. The trolls were angrily tossing rocks at us, and I kicked Ginger to get her off the road as more boulders crashed down. “I think they are angry,” I told Ginger as I scanned the sky for the arching rocks. The trolls probably planned to push me into the ogre pit, thinking I had bypassed it. I was fortunate that only two trolls seemed motivated to throw boulders at me. It was easy enough to judge their trajectory and move Ginger in plenty of time. After a dozen or so futile throws, the trolls seemed to start an argument. One troll eventually punched another, sending it crashing to the ground in a tumult of limbs. Then, the ogres were unleashed at a barking order from the troll. The ogres broke into a run and, weirdly, had a cadence to their steps. Seven ogres running together could create tremors even from almost half a mile away. I didn’t wait long before retreating. Approaching the stone where Mynasha hid, I could smell the ozone in the air. She was primed and ready. The question was whether she could recharge fast enough to kill the rushing ogres and trolls.”*

Andrew Crews

Glasha went into her scrying trance and spoke while she scouted. “Just under three miles to the fort and another mile to the Skull Passage. As you get closer, another cliff will emerge on your right. Both cliffs eventually converge [into] a crevice— the Skull Passage. Before that, the fort [is] built into the cliff face on your left. A small village used to [surround] the garrison, but it looks like the ogres destroyed the buildings for fun.” She opened her eyes. “I count eight trolls and eleven ogres now.”* Final Edited Version: *“Glasha went into her scrying trance and spoke while she scouted. “Just under three miles to the fort and another mile to the Skull Passage. As you get closer, another cliff will emerge on your right. Both cliffs eventually converge into a crevice—the Skull Passage. Before that, the fort is built into the cliff face on your left. A small village used to surround the garrison, but it looks like the ogres destroyed the buildings for fun.” She opened her eyes. “I count eight trolls and eleven ogres now.”*

Andrew Crews

No, you will not join the fight.” Before they could object, I continued, “You can watch from the [tree] line, but do not reveal yourselves.” I knew they would ignore my orders if I got in trouble, but at least it would [put an end to] this argument now. I wanted to get this over [with] before night fell. I let everyone rest for a few hours before moving toward the road.* Final Edited Version: *“No, you will not join the fight.” Before they could object, I continued, “You can watch from the tree line, but do not reveal yourselves.” I knew they would ignore my orders if I got in trouble, but at least it would put an end to this argument now. I wanted to get this over with before night fell. I let everyone rest for a few hours before moving toward the road.*”

Andrew Crews

Yes, but these trolls [seem] somewhat intelligent, and they may not even leave the fort. I also plan to ride past you when I retreat. I am not stopping to protect you, and my companions will not be defending you either,” I stated firmly, [making it clear] there was no debating it. Final Edited Version: “Yes, but these trolls seem somewhat intelligent, and they may not even leave the fort. I also plan to ride past you when I retreat. I am not stopping to protect you, and my companions will not be defending you either,” I stated firmly, making it clear there was no debating it.

Andrew Crews

I won’t risk my companions. If you fail to deliver, you will be overrun. Can you make twenty attacks [before] they reach you? What if they throw boulders at you? Will your horse remain with you while you attack?” I bombarded her with questions, [instilling] doubt in her.” Final Edited Version: “I won’t risk my companions. If you fail to deliver, you will be overrun. Can you make twenty attacks before they reach you? What if they throw boulders at you? Will your horse remain with you while you attack?” I bombarded her with questions, instilling doubt in her.”

Erick Thiemke

Before the end of book 5 but not sure when that is

Ed Blackwell

Would it be possible to work into a forthcoming chapter a stats/abilities summary?

Bananaboat

Chapter suggestion for when they storm the fort: Fort Night

Jordan A

Enjoyed the chapter! Thanks

Andrew

Thank you!

Eriach

Drive safe, as an OTR truck driver myself it's always good to take breaks

Silver Beard

Aside from their 'mission' hunting trolls for essence seems quite profitable. Mynasha is off the table, but the Chronicler isn't. She'd make a great team mate and she could definitely use the healing essence

Silver Beard

chapter title: Fort This

Silver Beard

it was well written and surprisingly no errors sticked out? Choose another grammar app? Have to wonder though about the response.

Seth Feist

Long drives always wipe me out. Take your time, be safe

Erick Thiemke

3rd of four for cycle. Next chapter is the POV you all voted on: Konstantin. I have a long car trip tomorrow, so I am not certain if I will post tomorrow yet. About 7 hours of driving and some walking between. I will be listening to old chapters as I drive so I can outline future chapters though. Either going to work on World Sphere tonight or start the Konstantin chapter.


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