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A Soldier's Life - 282 - Skeletons In The Closet (final edit 6-20-25 - big changes that ripple to book 7)

🕑 Added 2024-10-23 03:32:06 +0000 UTC

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for the chapters! 'No good deed goes unpunished' 🤣. 📖🍿

Michael Fisk

I think a good resolution (and somewhat humerous) result to this chapter would be to have Erik get the necromancer to notarize completion of the guild mission to check on the family farm. The baker was worried about his family and doesn't know his adopted brother the necromancer exists. The necromancer probably does know about his older brother after learning about him from his parents, but not know where he lives or how to contact him (as he would have done so already). Noone but Raella speaks orcish, and the kid probably doesn't speak anything else, so she gets somewhat exasperated with trying to translate Erik's recommended family reunion. None of them know the local laws, and probably wonder what they should really do.. and Erik would finally point out that they have to report it at the guild anyway as part of their mission completion. "Hey kid, I don't know if I'm supposed to bring you in to the authorities or kill you like this elf here recommends.... but technically I was hired to check on this baker's family and that's apparently you. So you better go leave to live with you new brother or disappear if what you did here was illegal. I'm gonna turn this completed posting in at the Guildhall and report you. If they need to hire me to come back and kill you I WILL do it. Now scram!" Necrokid runs off. Erik gets paid. Maybe the guy DOES want Erik to go back and hunt him down. And he's all No Way I'm not backtracking, I got other shit to do to help my buddy Maevith, damn your orcish customs are wierd. Oooor something like that. I think there is an opportunity here in this chapter that just isn't fully resolved. Killing necrokid doesn't seem quite right and just letting him go feels like a wasted chapter as it doesn't do much for driving the plot forward or do much world building or anything. 🤔

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter and the edit.

Kevin O'Malley

We have some real sociopaths in this crew. Half are upset he didn’t extract the Kid’s essence.

Marnie

By now, the others knew we both had rings that allowed us to get less sleep and food. Maybe By now, the others knew we both had rings that allowed us to get by with less sleep and food. Or By now, the others knew we both had rings that allowed us to need less sleep and food.

Marnie

“It does *fell that way.” feel

Javen

damn so he actually killed the kid in the first edition? yeah im glad this got patched. there is no such thing as evil magic, just evil people. he know intimately the terror of being persecuted for your magic affinity, its why he's been hiding it all along. killing the boy for that would've been insane.

Erick Thiemke

edited

Erick Thiemke

corrected i think

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

edit posted

Erick Thiemke

edit posted

HappyNoms

Eryk has moved on from slaughtering soliders in the wrong place at the wrong time to killing orphaned 12 year olds in the throes of grief, but it's okay, because he didn't essence harvest and felt bad about it for perhaps a minute. It would be epic if the story just unapologetically evolved into Eryk gradually becoming more and more villanous, and accepting it, until he becomes a true supervillain. He could embrace using his displacement powers to steal, and poison drinks, place contraband on people and have them arrested as traitors and assassins, unlock a Worlds spellform to send people to a hell dimension. Chef's kiss. Have the courage of your dark convictions, Eryk.

Erick Thiemke

It’s going to edited as book 6 arc starts to define necromancy more concretely

Jonah Bradley

Honestly makes me want to cancel my membership reading that. The excuses for killing a child were thin enough to be non-existent. There was no moral quandary, it was manufactured. Gotta be the least morally defensible thing I've ever read on patreon while still patting itself on the back. Especially considering the kid was a parallel to the MC and I guess that never occurred to him? An extremely powerful person magically with no world experience who is capable of great destruction? Who doesn't know how to use his power responsibly and might be used by bad actors? Yeah, doesn't sound like the guy you wrote the entire book about at all. You manufactured a situation to manufacturer a situation. Bad writing.

R. Maxwell Steele

Yeah kind of lame ending there. Perfectly good kid, his magic raised the dead and didn't hurt anyone. Essentially murdered for being the wrong kind of "witch." (I use witch since historically "witches" got murdered without just cause.) They could have just trained him to use a different affinity. And very likely he would have been able to use spells. Wouldn't be surprised if one of the secrets of the giants was a way to evolve or mold your already formed spellform thing into something different. just imagine if his savant mage friend accidentally developed a raise undead ability? Would he kill his friend? Nope. And anybody you're too ashamed to use a collector on, is also someone you shouldn't not kill in the first place. I hope he comes back as a super undead who can raise more undead and kills all the main cast. Would be an unexpected twist.

Fast Lance

Yh this was stupid and horrible, extremely inconsistent with him refusing to assassinate the kids

GucciG

Personally, I don't mind that he didn't take the essence. I'm of the opinion that he needs to stop adding new affinities willy-nilly. Master what he has at the moment and add new ones over time. He sure as hell has the time for it.

Daniel Foster

Missed opportunity to nurture a promising recruit. Might have been able to help clear out the Ghosts near the other dungeon. Definitely should have taken the essence. Just seems wasteful. I don't think it's okay to execute a kid for making a mistake / not hurting anyone. Maybe if the kid was upset and was trying to kill the village for looting his adopted family 's Farmstead. (Good nightmare fuel though) Kids more trouble than he's worth. Kill him. I think this definitely needs more foreshadowing to justify.

Andrew Crews

“He didn’t know he had magic and, while morning [❌ should be “mourning” (grieving, not morning like the time of day)] them, raised them as zombies.” Edited Version: “He didn’t know he had magic and, while mourning them, raised them as zombies.”

Andrew Crews

“Mateo and Benito stay with the horses. Blaze and Raelia trail Maveith and I [❌ should be “me” (object pronoun instead of subject pronoun)].” Edited Version: “Mateo and Benito stay with the horses. Blaze and Raelia trail Maveith and me.”

Andrew Crews

By now, the others knew we both had rings that required us to get less sleep and eat [❌ missing modifier, e.g., “less” or “minimally”], and no one objected to getting a full night’s rest [❌ awkward transition; consider rewording for clarity]. Edited Version: By now, the others knew we both had rings that required us to sleep less and eat less, so no one objected to getting a full night’s rest.

Nikolaus Sheehan

I was hoping he'd bring the kid along in the hopes of figuring out how to overcome high resistance. If the target is at peace, sleeping, boom in the box. Confronting him in the woods would have him at high alert so it would be the toughest. In addition, if he could get the kid into the box then he could find a place for him somewhere in this messed up world.

Victor Augusto Dantas Ferreira

That's kinda of a vegan mentality, and nothing wrong with that. But there's a huge difference between extraction of the soul of a monster and the soul of a person.

Lemes

The female werewolves were humanoids. He also had no qualms about using the collector on humans, elves, and orcs. Anyway, I can't see where there's a big difference between using the collector on a pregnant elf infected with lycanthropy and a necromancer boy. I still think the character is hypocritical.

daniel dantas

he couldn't be stored from what I understand, which makes sense, he can withstand his heart being removed, it wouldn't make sense if he couldn't resist being stored completely.

Erick Thiemke

gnolls - hyena humanoids - not people

Lemes

He has already collected the essences of several pregnant females, I think it is somewhat hypocritical that he does not collect the essence of the boy. What is the difference from a moral point of view? I can't see any that justifies it.

Jordan

I just read the update explaining why he didn’t use the collector. Very well written. Thank you for adding it.

Silver Beard

I thought that's what he had the oblivion pills for... to lower resistance. Unconscious he likely wouldn't have been able to resist.

Jordan

I don’t think so either, but I could be misremembering.

Jordan

Good point on not gathering essence from kids although I think this is the first time the situation has come up. Thanks for adding a sentence about it.

daniel dantas

On a side note, I would like to say that I am a big fan of your work author, I really don't like to spend money reading, spending the minimum and never subscribing to patreon and waiting for it to come out on RR to read, but your work is so good that I couldn't wait any longer and decided to help you financially to maintain this high level of writing, it's really amazing to see how eryk who used to get sick fighting gnoll, the perfect definition of a glass cannon, today manages to kill squads of beings that only a company of mages can handle alone with relative ease, but always realistic, even strong he is still a mortal who dies with enough bad luck

daniel dantas

I've read intensively over the last few days and as far as I remember, no, he was never faced with such a decision. Looking at it from that point of view, I think it would be enriching to have a brief reflection on his principles, the boy's essence was easily one of the purest he had ever found and could help him significantly, but to what extent would he go for his gains? What line would he cross? What if the child had hurt or killed one of his friends? It's a cruel world and these kinds of situations where everyone stops and thinks are very enjoyable to read and deepen your characters

Erick Thiemke

she never saw it in the dungeon - i think....

Erick Thiemke

yes I made him resist on purpose so the MC could not store the problem for a later time

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

the MC has never gathered the essence from a child - I will add something to the chapter

Erick Thiemke

i dont beleive to this point in the story he has taken a child's essence. I am doing a read edit on the chapter and will add an internal monologue

daniel dantas

I didn't like the mc's decision not to extract the boy's essence, as unpleasant as the whole situation is the act of eating the essence would make everything worse, if he wasn't so talented it wouldn't be important, but as he resisted more than 100 points of space affinity, I can only feel that it was a valuable treasure being thrown away, perhaps the mc's resistance or modeling would increase by 3 points so pure would be the essence

daniel dantas

But he doesn't believe this and has never shown this care for his enemies

Salvo

Now that I think about it, there are people who believe you need your essence in the afterlife. Some of the legionaries send their own back to their family though.

Jordan

Agreed. The question has been asked in other comments with speculation on why he didn’t. A sentence or two needs to be added to the story clarifying why he didn’t or Eryk should use the collector as this is very different than Eryk’s normal modus operandi.

Jeffrey Worrall

Not to be callous but shouldn't Eryk use the collector on the kid? He would probably get at least a major magic essence, though I guess he could get the necromancy affinity essence, which wouldn't be helpful.

Tj

For a chapter name idea "Being Heartless is not for everyone"

Jordan

Too risky as the kid can’t control his powers.

Jordan

Agreed. Dimensional space already failed so storing the kid isn’t an option

Jordan

‘Harsh Reality’ captures the feelings surrounding killing the kid the best out of these 3 options. My 2 cents.

Jordan

A sentence needs to be added saying why he didn’t use the collector. Otherwise it’s a minor unnecessary plot hole.

Sky Chicken

My thoughts as well, besides he would most likely get a resistance essence.

liltigah

Could he have stored him? His aether resistance was too high for his dimensional space to kill him so I doubt it.

K A N O

damn i wanted him to join the group

Jacob Diver

“Rose the others quietly. – “Rouse the others quietly I finally found something: two half-hazard recently buried skeletons. – I finally found something: two haphazardly recently buried skeletons (not sure on the second, this one seems like it might be an in-universe variation on the phrase)

Silver Beard

Makes Eryk hiding his space that much more insidious. He could have stashed the kid away and offered him up as bounty down the road. The nasty things he's doing to hide his space and abilities from the folks he is supposed to trust the most.

Ivan Kanewske

Raelia had boosted she was fluent in the orc language, but she was struggling to keep the injured orcs attention Boosted to boasted

Khress

Why would they torture him? For manifesting his magic? From what i have read, the orcs have no crime. Why would they be cruel for an unfortunate orc?

Khress

You do know that necromancers are sought after, right? If they are under your control they are an important strategic resource. You kill the crazy ones or the uncontrollable ones. He is just a teenage boy who lost his parents. He kind of is an amazing find for the priests

Chachi

kino chapter need more difficult choices like these for eryk would make him a better leader imo and the story more kino

1536539

Damn, i feel sorry for the child, no one should be killed for a crime they did not yet commit, that is just simply stupid and evil, i think he should either leave the boy or help him, he has no obligation to kill an innocent child in a foreign country for the potential harm the child would be capable of. Suggestion for the chapter title: Cruel Fate

Devourerofwords

Cruel Necessity

Erick Thiemke

I was thinking Deadly Decisions, or Morbid Decisions

Garrett

I think a fitting name for this chapter could be "harsh reality" as it forces the reader to remember the circumstances of the world that Eryk is in.

PatronTurtle

Because he felt guilty and isn't that cutthroat yet

NightRider

Rose the others quietly. Should be, ROUSE the others quietly.

Salvo

I would have probably used the essence collector anyway, then if it was necromancy essence, turn it in to the adventure guild and have the money go to the baker. The family is dead and proof the adopted son was a necromancer would be a nullifying apology. The neighbors robbed the place and didn’t think to look for the boy!

Andrew

Thank you!

Silver Beard

It was a mercy killing.

BubblyGhost

Because time and resources. This isn't a kind world, nor does he owe anything to the boy. The two realistic choices here were to either leave or kill. A boy with no family, money, or prospects will most likely turn to what he has, to survive; aka taking from others. Does one risk inaction causing the possible rise of a powerful monster, kill them now to prevent that scenario, or give fate an unlikely chance they turn out good? The only right answer here is. . .dude should've used the collector on him, waste not want not after all.

Silver Beard

He's capped out on opening new affinities- and he felt dirty killing a child as is. As Raelia pointed out- Necromancy is outlawed- I doubt selling the essence is any less illegal and keeping it would be constant temptation Eryk doesn't need just now.

Silver Beard

I'm wondering why Raelia hasn't said a thing about his spear. Surely she recognized it's providence.

Jordan

Why didn’t Eryk use the collector on the boy after he died? He can still sell a necromancer essence if that’s what he gets. They do have some value.

Erick Thiemke

Corrected. I was hoping to post 282 and 283 today. 283 tomorrow

TastyApple

Damn i felt bad for the orc kid. Was kinda hopping for Eryk to save him and have a necromancer ally but too risky

Khress

I am not sure why he killed the orc. He did not have to do that except if he wanted to use the essence collector on him. He is in a differenz country. He should just take the orc to the town. The only crime the boy has commited was using magic he had no control over. Since there is an institution that houses necromancer why should he be not accepted? If they kill him anyway our mc s hands are clean

Valter Anunciação

did you forget 282 or did you get the chap number wrong ?

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. I was going for a spooky Halloween chapter but it kinda fell short. Next chapter tomorrow and get to meet the Orc Cleric


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