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A Soldier's Life - 286 - Misunderstandings (final edit 6-24-25)

🕑 Added 2024-10-29 20:58:49 +0000 UTC

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Cyrille Van Daele

Author, why does the MC never just say NO. He always gives in and never just says no.

Brianna Stormcloud

"The extra four golds were for Fortuna’s Chosen expenses. I assumed I would be paying for everyone’s rooms and meals again." Is he keeping enough for FC expenses? Using this to pay for rooms, food, potions, fines, horses, teleports etc, would not five gold each be and ten for group be a better split, at least til he builds a buffer... Just curious

Enk

"and a dispensing a few apples to the horses" ->"and a dispensing of" OR "and dispensing a few"

Rasmus

I asked for directions in my limited Orcish, getting a sneer from the orc laborer at my buttery of the language, Butchery probebly not buttery* Tom me it was clear she was going to ask me to move Baldo to my dimensional space. To me an m to much*

Marnie

sneer from the orc laborer at my *buttery of the language Spelling butchering

Marnie

not something I would have *expectedcted to see in orc culture. Spelling expected

Erick Thiemke

There is a third book 5 collection called seraphim

steffen stefansen

Yes but this is Seraphim tier book five final plot edit. last chapter was 276 and now you jumped to 286. Sorry its not to be and D! i just dont get it. Im asking if you placed this in the wrong folder ?

Erick Thiemke

i move over 2 chapters a week from the seraphim tier

steffen stefansen

where is chapter 277,278,279 and so on til chapter 285 ?

Erick Thiemke

i think i like animated as I am Italian and talking with our hands is natural

Erick Thiemke

corrected

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Andrew Crews

I kept the dreamscape amulet secure while I was in Adventurer’s Guild Hall [❌ missing article; should be “the Adventurer’s Guild Hall”], not knowing if mystical eyes were spying on me. Edited Version: I kept the dreamscape amulet secure while I was in the Adventurer’s Guild Hall, not knowing if mystical eyes were spying on me.

Andrew Crews

Glasha was engaged in a lively conversation with the orc clerk, her gestures animated [❌ slightly awkward; “animated” could be more smoothly integrated] and words spilling forth in a rapid cadence. Edited Version: Glasha engaged in a lively conversation with the orc clerk, her gestures lively and her words spilling forth in a rapid cadence.

Andrew Crews

There were multiple desk clerks in the largest Hall I had * been in. There were multiple desk clerks in the largest Hall I had ever been in.

Andrew Crews

It was an ingenious use of technology and not something you would have considered to see [❌ awkward phrasing; “expected to see” or “thought to see” is more natural] in orc culture. Edited Version: It was an ingenious use of technology and not something you would have expected to see in orc culture.

Salvo

Seeing an entire city sacked by her older brother, only to be hounded for days by griffon teams for disappearing her… is probably a good reason to be hesitant.

Mark Corwin

One might say he is indeed delving.

Chachi

lol the corny romance continues

Salvo

The interplay between clerics and warlords needs to be discussed, but clerics appoint dungeon runners and do magic study, and warlords oversee land and soldiers. Clearly, Glasha was happy about the recent warlord’s failure, at the same time the current warlord would not help her research. I wonder if he ‘drafted’ any spell form Orcs away from her project.

daniel dantas

Good chapter, honestly glasha isn't one to throw away, I don't know, I'm suspicious because I have a thing for redheads, as for eryk and raelia, interesting, a bit strange because it was very abrupt, maybe highlight raelia's anguish more but anyway. The obvious point is why is glasha forcing eryk to escort her friend? Is she doing it because they're the only ones available and she was surprised by their effectiveness, or did she see something in eryk that she shouldn't have?

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

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DheeAreBi

"That was my queue to excuse myself" *cue

Ivan Kanewske

Baldo wouldn't be talking, he would be acting out, he is a baby, or griffin version of terrible two's. In public place, over stimulated. Would be acting up, looking at everything, mixture of fluffing feathers at everyone and begging for food. Explained like that it helps with the reasoning to put him in storage till his trainer can work with him properly and with less outside stimulation. Would rework this paragraph a touch.

Lemes

The cleric probably used her appraisal spell on Erick and discovered his statistics (and perhaps his origins) and will confront him to force him to escort her friend.

Silver Beard

The dungeon is more or less the final audition for the 'escort' duty that's about to be thrust onto him.

Silver Beard

It's amusing that female mannerisms are universal in the story. Lucky Mateo...wonder if he'll be up to delve ever again.

Prinny Knight

Depending on the situation, negotiations could be struck to simply free her, whether through barter/buy or service rendered

PatronTurtle

That'd be pretty sly. Switch in and then convince Eryk to travel with them

Silver Beard

I'm wondering if the candidate swaps with Glasha before the Dungeon.

Antti Kunttu

dunno, stealing maveith sister if he can get near her while she in not under surveilance should be piece of cake.

Salvo

I do like Glasha strong-arming on Eryk. It’s what nobles would have done in the empire, and Eryk really needs a REAL plan on how he can steal Maveith’s sister and get her across this massive caliphate. I wouldn’t be surprised if the candidate isn’t an orc.

PatronTurtle

I suspect that Glasha is gonna try to pressure them into guarding the candidate. Either with carrot or stick

Sam

Different form of cue when he is leaving the table. Cue not queue.

Jordan

I like both stories, but if you’re taking ‘votes’, I vote for soldier. It’s an interesting time in the story.

Kbzzy

😂

Andrew

Thank you!

Ivan Kanewske

Thank you, I like the direction,

Ivan Kanewske

I kept the dreamscape amulet secured while I was in Hall not knowing if mystical eyes were spying on me. After a few Secured while I was in Hall While I was in the Adventurers Guild Hall,

Ivan Kanewske

Clean and much later in the night I my earth pulse picked up Mateo and Glasha entering the same room. I Either needs removed, or sentence structure fixed??

Erick Thiemke

yeah it is how I type...not my dyslexia. corrected a few of those and must have missed this one

Ivan Kanewske

We ate in noisy silence with only Blado talking when he was ignored for too long. Blado???

incognito

Thank you

Erick Thiemke

3rd of 4 for cycle. I am either going to finish World Sphere chapter tonight or write the next chapter of Soldier. A cycle, for those that do not know, runs Wednesday to Tuesday, which means I currently owe a World Sphere Chapter and Soldier Seraphim chapter for the week


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