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A Soldier's Life - 287 - The Vault of the Spirit Arachnid (final edit 6-24-25)

🕑 Added 2024-10-30 04:35:48 +0000 UTC

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Brianna Stormcloud

Thanks for this week's chapters 📖🍿

Erick Thiemke

to contrast with the chapter "A Woman Can Not Keep A Secret

Erick Thiemke

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GucciG

Thankfully, Glasha pierced through Eyrk's stubbornness. Did Eryk really think he could waltz into some Warlord's home and steal one of his legal slaves? How did he think he was going to leave the nation? Having connections to assist was the only real answer to begin with; it was how he was so successful back in the empire as a legionnaire. I was beyond irked for a while because of his attitude. Thank you, Glasha.

Andrew Crews

Sure, they were out of sight [❌ unclear phrasing; doesn’t strongly convey certainty or sequence], the collector appeared in my hand. Edited Version: Once I was sure they were out of sight, the collector appeared in my hand.

Silver Beard

Even if Ginger has his Essence affinity; she'd need a several apex of intelligence to begin to overcome her natural instincts. Without it would take 100's. A constitution essence of any size would slow age's natural deterioration of muscle and flexibility, which is likely why it's valued. It doesn't make the mount better in any way just lets them hold them own for more time.

Silver Beard

Nice update; but seeing as it's only minors he's getting- skip the collector for the rest of the delve, and just make it fast. If they finish before noon- they can leave before Grila even shows up!

BLead Irish ambassador

I also thought it didn’t fit the story. He has been betrayed by his last girlfriend about an artifact. And for minor essences. If it was for channeling or apex or the super rare ones I would understand

BLead Irish ambassador

Agreed. That is just wrong

BLead Irish ambassador

Author said chieftains become chieftains by conquering all the dungeons plus one extra. If you do that you have enough honor to take from those with less honor. - maybe?

BLead Irish ambassador

Title should be. A man cant keep a secret.

Salvo

Maybe Eryk could say the owner of the collector is Raelia family? They are powerful diplomats and generals, so the wealth of a collector is not strange. Eryk and Raelia are on the same mission to help Maveith. Imagine saying this: a stone Goliath/ elf alliance is being built from a noble diplomat in training, but adventuring teams is the cover for her guards. Raelia would love to boss Eryk around, flip the power dynamic in the budding relationship.

daniel dantas

I forget that only he actually uses essences efficiently, anyone else is a complete waste

BubblyGhost

'now you're thinking with portals!'

BubblyGhost

Honor is justification for the honorless

BubblyGhost

Bro, what in the shonen plot armor maguffin are you smoking?

BubblyGhost

Possibly, but not in the way I believe you're thinking. Remember every creature and race has their own artibute 'breakpoints' and quantifiable scores. Plus, ginger is just a horse lol. Don't get me wrong I love animals but only Eryk actually gets a visible increase with every essence

daniel dantas

eryk needs to feed ginger with essence, I think the penny has just sunk in for me, but if eryk fed ginger with essence of constitution and mind, would it make her more intelligent?

daniel dantas

half-trust*

daniel dantas

It makes more sense and yet it's doubtful why he needs to reveal the collector, what's in it for him? He doesn't want to establish contacts or anything. He just wants to save mavith's sister and leave, the plot is already moving forward with mateo telling him this and glasha proposing a deal. And I'll go further, this agreement allows a semi-trust for the mc some of his artifacts to discover their functions, in any case, revealing the collector is unnecessary

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

yes - I am going to remove the collector reveal in the edit on Friday. It is a way of pushing the plot foward but I think more trust needs to be established so maybe by the end of the dungeon it will be revealed. instead he will send Maveith and the cleric to scout teh next chamber while he harvests

Erick Thiemke

mateo got it

Erick Thiemke

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Erick Thiemke

no, nothing like that

Erick Thiemke

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Mason W

I agree, sharing he has a collector is the dumbest thing he has done.

Steven Savage

"Mateo edged closer to me, and I thought he was going to ask about Raelia, clearly stating that she knew before." -->...I thought he was going to ask about Raelia clearly IMPLYING that she knew ME before OUR MEETING IN (I forgot what the town's name was)

Steven Savage

It's definitely a huge risk. I think Glasha seems chill but Eryk doesn't know enough about orcs or her, in particular, to really trust her. Hopefully Eryk has a better plan to test how trustworthy she is as they progress through the dungeon. Otherwise revealing this now would be a HIGH risk for LOW reward. Salvo did bring up a semi-valid point about how Glasha could keep quiet about the collector in exchange for reviewing it to find out its origin--which wouldn't be for Eryk's crew to go and farm but rather have the orcs push to venture out to get their own collectors. Eryk also has artifacts that he wants reviewed to find out what they do so I guess he wants to establish trust now. Kind of a big leap though.

Reid

Bro, what state of mind do you have to be in to have "dimensional portal-induced castration" pop in your head

Reid

Yeah, dungeon essence collectors are actually so easy to farm that almost no one has one. On that matter, let me and the boys go back to the empire that we're all fugitives in, farm a dungeon a couple thousand time and hope we don't get caught in the process, to maybe get another collector of the same type and potency. Great plan, absolute 10/10

Salvo

Dungeon loot can be farmed bro, so locating which dungeon it came from is important. I will say they may need to mature to supply artifacts like the collector; it is practically lost technology.

NightRider

Can Eryk use his Earth Speak ability to find a hidden room in the dungeon with a secret boss that has never been harvested, the rewards would be legendary! It could possibly be found if you dive into the large pool of murky water where the turtles were, and find the underwater entrance. The reward could be be a second dungeon essence collector which he could give to Cleric Mynasha as a gift/bribe, that she can use to gather other orcs to her cause, using the gathered essences it harvests, as rewards to her loyal followers. It would also put her in Eryk’s debt and she would be forever eternally grateful to him. It would also add to the fame and growing glory of Eryk’s Fortuna’s Chosen guild party. Dragging the head of the secret boss out of the dungeon and giving it to Blaze in front of the dungeon guards would certainly add to their legend!

NightRider

Will Cleric Mynasha be an half-orc? If she is attractive, she may supply Raelia with some competition, for Eryk’s affections. It would be quite humorous if Glasha Mistborn was Mynasha’s mother whom she conceived with a human lover. Mateo had best be careful or he could become a daddy if Glasha decides she wants another child!

Silver Beard

It's just an excuse to take what they want. It's not just the collector- Eryk has any number of items that he'd get challenged for if he advertised ownership.

Silver Beard

pillow talk and drunken confessions. They're in the Dungeon...where does Mateo think he's going to run too? Maybe the perfect time to show them how big his space is...and stick Mateo where he can't do any more damage.

Reid

And Ted Bundy was just a nice family man lol. Plus I'm pretty sure his collector came from a dungeon bro so her touching it really doesn't add any value.

visigoth

Eryk hasn’t really been keeping the best discipline lol

Salvo

Maveith taking a strategic position beside me in fornt of the tunnel - ‘front’ “I plan to keep this these, I dabble in alchemy myself,” I replied. ‘Delete this or these’ The dungeon was harvested so often I doubted I would get anything but anything but minor essences. ‘Delete one: but anything’

Chachi

mateo should be axed

NightRider

I am confused, There were 5 myconids in the room, Eryk killed 2, Maveith and Raelia killed 1 each, who killed the fifth?

NightRider

Seeing no objectives, I reminded everyone of our opponent. Seeing no OBJECTIONS, I reminded everyone of our opponent.

PatronTurtle

How does someone gain honor here, to have enough to not be questioned? Does he need to kill another high leader to be left alone or would that insight more challenges?

Salvo

She paid generously and taught him Orcish for weeks, for free, on their journey. As a mage, she cares more about revealing history. And, just touching his essence collector could reveal WHERE it came from. Sure, it’s an infinite money machine, but what if Eryk could harvest more of them? I’d risk asking a historian for that knowledge… in a dangerous monster filled dungeon, that same historian probably wasn’t paying attention and died cause of it…

Pope Yoda I

I wonder if a dimensional portal-induced castration would discourage future challenges or just introduce him to yet another aspect of orc culture he wants no part of.

Salvo

I love, LOVE the orc logic of “there is no stealing in orc territory. But, if you aren’t honorable and have good stuff, you’ll be challenged to fights for a ‘lack of honour’. It’s direct, sincere and shady as hell at the same time!

Andrew

Wow, Thank you!

Reid

The double chapter drop was sick. But, I'm not gonna lie, him using the essence collector in front of an orc who he's know for not that long, who's allegiances are not confirmed, in a country that is unknown to him and his group, who's people are know to be legit racist slavers that have a dislike for the empire him and most of his group had a previous allegiance to, is kinda retarded. I feel like Eryk should be a bit more paranoid and understand the risk of him showing what essentially is a priceless artifact (that is INCREDIBLY beneficial to him and his people) to what ammounts to a stranger in order to maybe gain a handful of minor essences, a few major essences, and a couple apex essences (that he could just collect from another dungeon) would not be worth it. Like he literally hid his amulet from her that night prior knowingly forgoing it's benefits in order to keep it a secret, so why then show the collector. It feels a bit forced to be honest. Good couple of chapters minus that 👍

Jordan

“Nineteen, if the last accounting is correct, each is owed by a powerful cleric or warlord.” owed -> owned

Erick Thiemke

its 12:36 am for me - well past my bed time

TastyApple

Nice! Double chap in one day.

Erick Thiemke

EDITED 11/1/24....(removed the collector being revealed and added some lore. transition at end it a bit bumpy) 4th of 4. I am going to go back and read-edit 286 and 287, as I just tweaked the plot a little toward the end of this chapter. Tomorrow, I am going to finish the World Sphere chapter. 288 they will finish the dungeon


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