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World Sphere - 203 - Loot Division

🕑 Added 2024-11-01 04:23:46 +0000 UTC

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Ivan Kanewske

didn’t correct and wondered why the cats hadn’t woken me for food. Add her after correct

Ivan Kanewske

“Finish the repairs on the Maelstrom to start, and then I am going to work with Remy and Rippon of inter-island skiffs,” I replied. Of to on

GucciG

Personally, I'm not ready for another adventure unless it concludes fast. It'll be nice to see him stick around Skyholme for a while.

Ivan Kanewske

“Noting closer?” I whined a little not wanting to make such a long trip. Noting to nothing

MN

How did the Maelstrom get back to the Spire/Dungeon? I thought the group left it behind and disabled it

visigoth

Academy arc part deux?

Ha dug

Sounds like some mini time jumps are in order? It’s been a lot of go go go with many chapters taking place day after day so some months long time skips before the big wrap up and then I’d imagine bigger time skip could help. After all not everything has to be wrapped up with a full chapter could just do a chapter or two with time skips where you wrap up 2 things and say your close to another and setting up for X or Y. And just doing more slice of life/ property and buisness building scenes

Jordan

“Noting closer?” I whined Noting -> Nothing

Jordan

“I was guessing she was here before the Progenitor Dungeon” …was here ‘about’ the Progenitor…

Jordan

“Finish the repairs on the Maelstrom to start, and then I am going to work with Remy and Rippon of inter-island skiffs,” I replied. -> “Finish the repairs on the Maelstrom to start (no comma here) and then I am going to work with Remy and Rippon ‘on the’ inter-island skiffs,” I replied.

Jordan

“I want the dungeon to know that we are here to destroy like the shifter was.” …we are ‘not’ here to destroy…

Jordan

“Four tier four essences and one tier two. I think the tier essence two might be the reward from this dungeon’s final boss.” …I think the tier ‘two’ essence might…

Erick Thiemke

I don't know why this story takes so long to write chapters for these days. Four thousand words but mostly trying to tie up loose ends in this chapter. There are a few chapters left in Book 4. Yes, I am working on Town Builder for a little bit before bed


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