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World Sphere - 204 - Catching Up With Old Friends 

🕑 Added 2024-11-10 22:27:50 +0000 UTC

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Erick Thiemke

Excellent question. during the edit I will hopefully correct it. It should have been noted that Bleiz is serving of his own free will somewhere - the bond no longer required

Igor Chmurski

I have a question, in one of the pov chapters the doughter of the Dark elf adventurer (i'm real badd at remembering names) has commisioned a bracelet that would weaken bleizes Bond to storm. That plotline has not been mentioned since despite storm and bleiz having multiple interactions with her after the bracelet was said would be completed, even one instance where she was alone with bleiz while storm talked with her father. Bleiz was not described as wearing a bracelet either so i assume he didnt recieve it off screen. Was that plotline abandoned and will be edited out or will something come of it yet?

Ivan Kanewske

“I have only partially read Archmagis Kurota’s journal. Archmagis maybe to Archmages Archmagisters

Ivan Kanewske

He stood and patted me friendly on my shoulder. Suggest He stood and patted me IN A friendly MANNER on my shoulder.

Dev P

Thanks for the chapter :) World sphere is one of my top favourite stories now and I hope you continue writing it. What I love most is the dyson sphere and huge potential in world building. I've read nearly all your books on patreon now, apart from town builder which I didn't want to start due to limited chapters. I mainly subscribed for A Soldiers Life but I personally like World Sphere more. It's unfortunate it doesn't get as many chapters as I know you are currently focusing on A soldiers life due to demand. This arc is mostly done anyway so I will resubscibe after 1 year and hopefully find a bulk of new chpaters and arc 5 to binge on :) Thank you for your work.

visigoth

I like Storme's relationship with Gareth. They're long time friends, but have gone different paths and can still respect each others' decisions - well, at least outwardly display i think lol. Glad Storme isn't letting Gareth walk all over him so much anymore. Although, him artificing superior weapons to help keep your friend alive in his adventures is still a decent thing to do considering their history imo

Jordan

“If I am even in a large dungeon like the Cavern of the Thunder Witch again….” Even -> ever

Silver Beard

My transports would ???? rest of the sentence is missing or something

Alexander Belousov

"not being intimated by me" --> "not being intimidated by me", presumably.

Erick Thiemke

about 4 chapters left in this book arc. onto a Soldier Chapter


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