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A Soldier's Life - 293 - Victory in Defeat (final edit 7-1-25)

🕑 Added 2024-11-11 22:45:59 +0000 UTC

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Trevayne

Thanks for the chapters. Good to see Eryk's and Raellas' relationship progressing.

Erick Thiemke

edited on master. Grammarly has been acting funny. I usually catch when it drops extra stuff in there

Rasmus

Glasha finished her healing and returned to her seat.*turned to* Something is missing or [turned to] was accidently add. ---------- Mithril can only be found in dungeons and is extremely difficult *to* for smiths to work.” A to to much i think

Erick Thiemke

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i have been twisting this plot thread during the edit. hoepfully the final product reads better when its done

Thaabit Rivertree

"I was more certain than ever that I was not going to help." This is why this is so frustrsting. It is clear Mynesha's entire candidacy rests on Eryk participating. So if he is so sure, he should clarify that to Mynesha and everyone so they can make their own plans. Yet he just keeps quiet and will be forced to help anyways. It wouldnt be frustrating if he decided to help her for a good reason. It's the fact he says he'll say he wont do it while doing everything to actually do it. Like saying youre turning left while turning right. That's frustrating, especially because he's made to be manipulated by Glisha like some newborn pup. He knew enough to be suspicious of Corvus and many other legionaires, but when someone has so much on the line and is clearly counting on him participating, and has manipulated him several times already, he doesnt expect anything? He is not that stupid or naive. At least he shouldnt be. They have no candidacy if he doesn't participate, so he should be making plans to ensure he doesnt have to. But he'll just get led by the nose into it, I'm sure. Then he'll forgive everyone who forced him to do it. I can already see myself losing respect for him.

Erick Thiemke

it is an air spell form (sense disturbance in the air). The wind shear is a true spell - did I call it a spell form?

Story Seeker

How can she have a unique spell form for danger sense. From what I am tracking she only has two affinities over 10 and that is 5-10, with the following spellforms: Fire Thermostasis. It is cold in the skies and keeps the air around my body comfortable. My air spell form eliminates wind shear when I am riding.”

Andrew Crews

Everyone was lounging about and had not even made it ❌[to set] camp. Corrected version: Everyone was lounging about and had not even made an effort to set up camp.

Dar-Angol

He was hoping,nah just Wolfie trying get little warmth, cheetahs do that with rangers in the flets..

Bananaboat

You can win over an animal easily with tasty food. Humans require a bit more empathy and understanding.

Silver Beard

Surely the Elder will wonder how Eryk gained the wolves trust so quickly. No doubt Raelea will tell on him as he did the same with Boldor and then the truth will be out.

Silver Beard

Haven't seen any half-orcs running about; so I think concubine is out of the picture. Still a chance she has children amongst the other Goliath slaves.

daniel dantas

this master's relationship with zorana will be paramount, she could be just anyone he would sell for something of value, he could be extremely possessive and in favor of slavery, opposing any chance of freedom for his slaves and we have the worst case scenario, she could be his concubine

daniel dantas

because they're not friends and he doesn't owe her anything, it doesn't cost much to wait a bit, I'd also offer the meat to the wolves

Silver Beard

The Dungeon meat would have done more for the Cleric's recovery. Curious he never offers

Silver Beard

Weird considering his empathy Stat is low

Silver Beard

If warlord Rhuuk is in the capital, we see if [she is with him] he is with her... the Sister is a slave. Prominence should be the Warlords.

Gwalmeich

What's to be disappointed for, Eric? You got to sleep with the best boy!

Eli Davis

As in, maybe she (had) thought his armor would be an encumbrance

Jordan

Enjoyed the chapter. Thanks!!

Silver Beard

“Why are you taking off your armor,” she said, frowning. {later} Maybe she thought my armor’s encumbrance would be the slight advantage she needed. So was he wearing armor or not? It's kinda cute that he keeps winning animals via their stomachs. Besides his magic affinities- I thought Empathy was pathetically low. 30ish

NightRider

They looked at me and then Tarnasha before lowering their head Should be HEADS

Ivan Kanewske

Not really a mistake, more like word flow??

M van Dongen

Very succesfully apparently....

M van Dongen

Floofs succesfully bribed....

daniel dantas

good chapter, i like the development and it seems that wrestling really creates a sexual tension, it's already the second girl that eryk trains like this and he feels 'excited', besides, i like how mc looks more and more like konstantin, it's fun to see this role of instructor and leader, I like how he refuses without hesitation when he sees the danger that Mynasha represents, something I've always liked about this work, mc is a killer, he can easily kill Mynasha, but in the same way, a lightning bolt from her would kill eryk or easily leave him seriously injured, this mortality among the powerful has always been a charm, so positive point. On a side note, it seems that eryk has a natural gift for animals, they always end up liking him, which makes me wonder, will we have a pet in the future?

Pope Yoda I

Excellent chapter. Good to see more interpersonal interactions and MC rationalizing his decisions. Was kind of hoping the ending would be MC waking up from a dirty dream, only to find wolf hoochie humping his leg. Maybe next time.

Andrew

Thank you!

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Ivan Kanewske

and I don’t think your cabin can hold all of us.” And I To As I

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visigoth

Nah, I get it contextually - plus Raelia development of some sort is nice - but he's never really let his guard down in these sorts of moments from what I can remember. It just seems a little more out of character than I would have thought, if that makes sense?

Erick Thiemke

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not seeing the mistake here

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no - this her gaining the advantage

Ivan Kanewske

strength. My hubris was my downfall as I repositioned, and she Her hubris was her downfall

Erick Thiemke

they were all sleeping around the fire pit in the open. the person came from their 'camp'. i think the MC was more hoping it was Raelia than anything else. Also someone would have been on guard

Ivan Kanewske

and the alligator rolled on the ground to try and break And the alligator To And then alligator

Ivan Kanewske

I could understand their frustration as I had faced it with Konstantin. With my last piece of armor off, I faced Raelia. As I hel felt it with Konstantin Or as I had felt it when facing Konstantin

visigoth

"... thought it had to be Raelia," feels like such a shift from how his character has been molded, imo, unless this is more of a moment of weakness. But even then, he's always sort of been like a honed blade when he's sleeping that I find this a little hard to believe - even though he's stressing right now with Glasha. Normally he'd have checked immediately who it was rather than assume safety. Sleeping at a strange orc's place is receiving less alertness than stringing a door at practically every place he's ever slept.

Ivan Kanewske

She scrunched HER face in distaste but couldn’t argue my point. Mateo

Ivan Kanewske

The denizens of the Endless Dark mine it but only occurs near the ley lines.” I nodded to her, thinking The denizens of the Endless Dark mine IT, but IT only occurs near the ley lines.” I nodded to her, thinking

Erick Thiemke

2000 words is the minimum. And most settle between 2200 and 2300. This was 3300

Eriach

How long are your normal chapters? Word count wise I mean.

PatronTurtle

Eryk the beast master. Stealing affections or aggravation from every animal he meets

Eriach

🤣 the wolf

Ivan Kanewske

but I was to a challenge this evening. To but I was UP to a challenge this evening.

Ivan Kanewske

started to accelerate and decelerate in my jog to make it harder for him and them, increasing my Them to then Or As well as

David Bordelon

I liked the flow of this chapter. Possible corrections: “You need to be able to eat on a full or empty stomach, Benito,” Should likely be “You need to be able to FIGHT on a full or empty stomach, Benito,” "but I was to a challenge this evening." Should likely be but I was up for a challenge this evening.

Ivan Kanewske

his lips was bleeding and he had a limp. He had manged Either His lip was, Or his lips were

Filip

Haha nice one at the end there

Ivan Kanewske

“You need to be able to eat on a full or empty stomach, Benito To “You need to be able to train on a full or empty stomach, Benito

Ivan Kanewske

Blaze was coming back from checking in the horses, nodding to me that all was good. In to on

Ivan Kanewske

Oscar was a puppy, scared of thunder and lightning and sympathizing with the wolf. In this instance I believe sympathizing should be sympathized

Aiden Wilker

Haha. Figured they were too intelligent to be normal wolves. But I guess the exiled cleric has some skill that caused that

Erick Thiemke

interesting thought but between you and me, they are just wolves

Aiden Wilker

Why do I get the feeling the wolves aren’t wolves?

Angus

Thanks for the chapter! Great work! 😊

Erick Thiemke

2 of 4 for cycle. Almost twice the length of a normal chapter, but just counting it as one. I will start the next chapter after some tea and hope to finish it in the next five hours. Those waiting on Town Builder - tomorrow before I start the 4th of 4 Soldier.


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