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A Soldier's Life - 309 - Cloudy With A Chance Of Titans (final edit 7-22-25)

🕑 Added 2024-12-09 03:02:44 +0000 UTC

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Random Guy

Mynasha doesnt have what it takes to be an effective leader of her people in their curent times. She is to naive, while Honor is good it should be tempered otherwise your enemys will read you like a book and she and the caliphat dont seem strong enough to just brute force things.

Brianna Stormcloud

Thank you for this week's chapters 📖

Kevin O'Malley

He is trying to rescue Maveith’s sister currently.

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapters. I wonder if the storm giants might have their own opinion about who should lead the orcs.

DLJD

in masse -> en masse

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GucciG

I think the main issue I have with this series is that Eryk does not strive to become the best or seek out danger to become better. He has no real ambition other than survival which to me, is lackluster. Does he want to find a way home? Does he want to carve out a home for his friends and family? Does he want revenge on whatever entity brought him here? The first immediate goal was to escape the legion. The second was to find his friend’s sister. What comes after that? He has been nothing but reactive this entire time… that is not sustainable. I want to see him take the initiative to grind out essences, seek out powerful foes through the Guild, train hard and build his crew and personal power, etc. Seeing a determined and motivated Eryk would be invigorating. I hope it happens soon or I think I’ll end up becoming fatigued.

Andrew Crews

On the other side was water runoff from above, and a muddy sediment on the path clearly showed four sets of footprints. I was probably the most shocked, as it seemed Fioasha [was] ahead of us.

Andrew Crews

No, I said Khrusos,” he replied patiently, sounding out the name. But maybe the translation or time [had] altered the giant’s name. Kronos was Latin, after all. He waited [until] I was satisfied before continuing.

michele 00

Nope, I simply wanted it to be an example of how good a protagonist can be who puts his benefits/goal before everything else, he clearly doesn't think there can be such a character written 'well' with this kind of 'mentality', now I want to ask you, your understanding of the text is always this low? Lol

Tuck

lol this has to be a troll post. Fang yuan burner acct?

michele 00

You have a far inferior mentality to mine, let me be clear. First, people/characters would obviously have to tend to be irrational, but the same standard would not have to be applied to the protagonist, who in novels like this is destined to be one of the strongest or 'long-lived', it would make no sense for someone like our protagonist to live so long being irrational, as his long life would be due to incredible luck also known as plot armor, something that would not have to exist in 'good novels'.Second, it obviously seems obvious that you haven't read reverend insanity and have never heard of the protagonist, Fang yuan, who for his goals was willing to sacrifice the lives of millions without hesitation. We have different mentalities, that's obvious, and no doubt mine would take me further than yours in the kind of cruel world Erik currently lives in.

TheEarlofBronze

I must say, you idea of what makes a good character seems absolutely terrible. I agree that that book has been significantly less engaging, but it's good for characters and people to act irrationally, because people are irrational. I think it makes a lot of sense for Eryk to be willing to put life and limb on the line for a friend's enslaved sister. Maevith is his friend, ally, confidant and brother in arms. If you're not willing to do something for that kind of person without "benefit" then you're the worst kind of character.

michele 00

I understand, so I guess I'll be patient and wait on an upgrade in some time when you officially publish it, if I have to think of a criticism that might help you, it would probably be that you make it more realistic that he's risking so much for so little in return, and when you give more meaningful development to those characters they won't be so 'unpleasant' or 'annoying'. Having said that, English is not my first language and I might not express what I think well sometimes

Erick Thiemke

I agree the danger to benefit is unbalanced. It was my thought that after being in so many life and death situations that people get numb to it. I don’t have that background but soldiers who face battle again and again—I assume it gets easier. Remember these are all draft chapters and suggestions are welcome. Book 5 I planned to develop the characters more in the editing. Giving more life to supporting characters like Benito, Maveith, Blaze, Mateo, Glasha and Mynasha. A lot of them felt one dimensional. As for this course of action, I was pressing a plot point for the next book. Meeting with Chronus is important to the plot and will give me a chance to explain a few things.

michele 00

Don't take this the wrong way, author, I just want to know if I'm missing something and if there is really a reason he really deserves to risk his life, for me the only mistake so far has been how little he risks his life for, as if he wasn't afraid of death....I just don't understand

michele 00

Honestly, recently I'm doubting if I should continue reading, is it so difficult to make a protagonist who has enough intelligence to take risks only if he has the opportunity to obtain considerable benefits? So far his motivation for risking his life has been the chance to get a way to save the sister of a friend he doesn't even know, so not enough. Compared to the best protagonist ever, Fang yuan, Erik's mentality is pitiful, he knows he's putting himself at risk of dying and he's still accepting it for next to nothing, honestly it's a bit no sense.

Deliver roo

Also in greek mythology the Olympians are Zeus and the other gods that came after the Titans. Maybe in this world the giants decided to apply the mythology of the first romans that arrived from earth to themselves.

PatronTurtle

I wonder what languages the giants speak naturally are. Underneath whatever translation magica they'll probably use

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Shane clark

“That is what we call the oldest of the storm giants. They come here to live out their last days, even though that may be a centuries. Or a century

Shane clark

They come here to live out their last days, even though that may be a centuries. In centuries

Jesus De Guzman

Yay!!

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“We should go,” Glasha said, standing determinedly. “We should go,” Mynasha said, standing determinedly. companion dismissed my remark My companion dismissed my remark

Andrew

Thank you!

Mark Corwin

This is cool. I like it.

John Donovan

I am not sure if this is applicable but in Greek mythology titans and giants are separate. Titans would be considered their own race. Giants were formed when Kronus castrated his father Uranus and bled on Gaia (earth). While powerful giants were considered lesser beings than titans.

NightRider

companion dismissed my remark and veered onto the path to the right, each step echoing softly against the damp stone. Should be, MY companion

Mark Corwin

I don't think you want this transition. Maybe some words are missing?

Mark Corwin

Devil’s Tower back on Earth. companion dismissed my remark and veered onto the path to the right, each step echoing softly against the damp stone.

Erick Thiemke

2nd of 4. I am threading Earth mythos in here. Let me know how it works for you as readers as the MC is about to meet Kronos. Some of you may have read the plot in the author notes and kinda know what the back story is. Introducing it in book 5 instead of book 6.


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